Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сосредоточьтесь на прямом ответе и избегайте повторов и заполнителей (например, "uh", "I would say"). Дайте одно чёткое мнение, затем 1–2 конкретных причины, используя связки (because, since, for example). Сократите длину до максимум 3–4 предложений и используйте более уместную лексику (influential -> important/useful).

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient for my studies. For example, I can edit my notes quickly and store them on the cloud for easy access. Because I plan to work in IT, typing skills are especially useful for my future career.

提案: Начните с прямого утверждения (I use a laptop) и объясните причину кратко и логично, избегая неуместных фраз ("more convenient sync"). Используйте связки (because, so) и добавьте один конкретный пример преимущества (portable, battery-powered, compact).

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and fits my study routine. For example, I can work in the library or at home without moving a heavy desktop. Because I often travel between classes, a laptop is much more practical.

提案: Отвечайте прямо: назовите возраст и дайте краткое объяснение или пример. Избегайте повторов ("I would say"). Можно добавить небольшую деталь, показывающую развитие навыка, и связку (so, since, because).

例: I learned to type when I was six years old because I played video games on the computer. Playing helped me get familiar with the keyboard, and over time I became faster and more confident at typing.

提案: Дайте структурированный ответ: начните с одного метода улучшения, объясните как он помогает, затем при необходимости предложите ещё один метод. Убирайте лишние вводные фразы ("I will be honest"). Используйте связки (for example, also, in addition) и конкретные детали (typing courses, practice websites, structured exercises).

例: I improved my typing mainly by playing video games, which forced me to type quickly during chats. In addition, I practise on online typing websites for 10–15 minutes a day to increase speed and accuracy. For example, I use typing tests to track my progress and focus on reducing errors.

× So the question is very hard to answer, but if I had to choose only one, I would say typing is a better choice for me as a student and someone who is uh choosing it as a profession, I would say that typing is a better and it has a more influence in our life.

✓ The question is hard to answer, but if I had to choose one, I would say typing is the better choice for me as a student and as someone choosing it as a profession; typing has a greater influence on our lives.

The original sentence is long, repetitive and ungrammatical. Combine ideas into clearer clauses, remove filler (uh), and use correct articles and prepositions: 'the better choice', 'as someone', 'has a greater influence on our lives'. Use a semicolon or split into two sentences to avoid run-on. Split repetition of 'I would say' and correct 'influence in' to 'influence on'. Incorrect word order and redundancy are resolved.

× So that's a good question. As I said before, right now I'm a student and as a professional I'm choosing IT specialist.

✓ That's a good question. As I said before, right now I'm a student, and as a professional I'm choosing to become an IT specialist.

Missing article 'an' before 'IT specialist' and unnatural verb phrase 'choosing IT specialist'. Use 'an IT specialist' and a natural verb phrase 'choosing to become' to express the intention. Also add a comma before 'and'.

× That's why I'm using laptop keyboard.

✓ That's why I'm using a laptop keyboard.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'. Additionally, 'using a laptop keyboard' is the correct phrase; preposition is fine but article was required.

× It's a more convenient sync for me and in my opinion it is better right now to use laptop keyboards.

✓ It's more convenient for me, and in my opinion it is better to use a laptop keyboard now.

'Sync' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'setup' or 'option'. Remove 'a' before 'more convenient' and correct 'laptop keyboards' to singular to match 'a laptop keyboard' or use plural consistently. Reorder 'now' to natural position. Simplify phrasing for clarity.

× I would say when I was six years old when I was playing video games on my computer.

✓ I would say I was six years old when I started playing video games on my computer.

Repetition of 'when' creates awkward structure. Use past tense 'started' to indicate the beginning of an action in the past. Combine clauses: 'I was six years old when I started playing...'.

× So it was the beginning of my path of learning how to type on a keyboard.

✓ That was the beginning of my journey learning how to type on a keyboard.

'Path of learning' is awkward; 'journey learning' or 'beginning of my journey' is more natural. Use 'that' instead of 'so' to refer back, and simplify 'how to type on a keyboard' to remain clear.

× I will be honest with you, I have never thought about this but in my opinion playing video games was the best way to improve my typing and chatting with my friends.

✓ To be honest, I had never thought about this, but in my opinion playing video games and chatting with my friends were the best ways to improve my typing.

Tense consistency: use past perfect 'had never thought' to indicate prior state. Parallel structure: 'playing video games and chatting with my friends' should both be subjects of 'were the best ways'. Use plural 'ways' to match two activities. Move 'to be honest' for natural phrasing.

× So that's all what can I say?

✓ So that's all I can say.

Incorrect word order and extra 'what' make the sentence ungrammatical. Correct subject-verb-object order: 'That's all I can say.' For a question form, use 'Is that all I can say?' but here statement is appropriate.

× But moreover to in my opinion to improve your typing you should chat with your friends.

✓ Moreover, in my opinion, to improve your typing you should chat with your friends.

Misordered prepositions and phrases: 'but moreover to in my opinion to' is ungrammatical. Remove leading 'but', place 'moreover' and 'in my opinion' as introductory phrases, and keep infinitive 'to improve'. Ensure commas around parenthetical phrase 'in my opinion'.