Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and organized: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid hesitation sounds and grammatical errors (e.g., "right in faster" -> "write faster"). Use vocabulary relevant to work and daily tasks.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my job in marketing requires frequent digital communication. For example, I write emails, create social-media posts, and prepare reports much more quickly on a keyboard, so typing saves me time and keeps my work well-organized.

提案: Start with a direct answer (desktop or laptop), then give clear reasons using linking words. Fix grammar ("most of the things I do can be done on my phone") and avoid unclear phrases like "texture keyword."

例: I type mainly on a desktop keyboard every day because I find it more comfortable and efficient. Also, most of my quick tasks I do on my phone, and I haven't practised much on laptops, so the desktop remains my preferred device.

提案: Give a clear time reference and one or two concise supporting details. Correct grammar and awkward phrasing ("at the age of 13 or 14," "during school we had computer classes"). Avoid vague words like "ancient."

例: I learned to type when I was about 13 or 14 because my school offered computer classes. Those lessons taught basic typing skills, which many students learned as part of the curriculum.

提案: Give a specific routine and describe methods used to improve, using clear linking words. Correct timing phrasing ("I practised for 20 minutes every day"), and avoid repetitive or unclear sentences.

例: I improved my typing by practising for about 20 minutes each day on typing websites and doing exercises that focus on accuracy and speed. Over time, this routine helped me reduce errors and increase my words-per-minute.

× I do prefer typing cause uh working in marketing department or as an insurance or also using social media so much in my life.

✓ I prefer typing because I work in the marketing department, I used to work in insurance, and I use social media a lot in my life.

The original sentence uses 'cause' (informal) and poorly connected clauses. This is an incorrect use of conjunctions and coordination leading to unclear meaning. Use 'because' to show reason and connect parallel ideas with commas and 'and'. Also add articles ('the marketing department') and correct verb forms ('work' and 'used to work').

× I prefer typing 'cause it helps me to do anything also right in faster than handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing because it helps me do many things more quickly than handwriting.

The phrase 'right in faster' and 'to do anything also' are incorrect adverb/adjective placements. Use 'more quickly' (comparative adverb) after the verb and 'many things' instead of 'anything' to make the statement natural and grammatical.

× I do TI type on my desktop keyboard everyday rather than laptop keyboard cause most of the thing I do is can be easily done with my phone.

✓ I usually type on my desktop keyboard every day rather than on a laptop keyboard because most of the things I do can be easily done with my phone.

Errors include unnecessary 'do', capitalization, missing preposition 'on', article use, 'everyday' vs 'every day', and ungrammatical 'is can be'. Fix subject-verb structure: 'things I do can be...' and add articles where needed.

× However, using a laptop keyboard is quite hard for me 'cause I haven't practiced or worked in laptop keyboard that much.

✓ However, using a laptop keyboard is quite hard for me because I haven't practiced on a laptop keyboard that much.

Use 'because' instead of 'cause' in formal correction. Preposition 'on' is needed with 'practice on a keyboard', and include article 'a'. The conjunction linking is flawed; this correction clarifies the reason and fixes preposition and article errors.

× So yeah, it's texture keyword for me every day.

✓ So yeah, it's a difficult keyboard for me every day.

'Texture keyword' is unintelligible; likely intended 'tactile' or 'difficult' keyboard. This is a sentence structure/word choice error. Add article 'a' and use an appropriate adjective ('difficult') to convey meaning.

× I learned how to tap on the keyboard when I was at the age of 13 or 14.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was 13 or 14 years old.

Use 'type' instead of 'tap' for standard wording, and 'at the age of' is wordy — use 'when I was 13 or 14 years old'. This fixes awkward phrasing and keeps past tense consistent.

× Since my school time we have to had computer class so we used to go there learn how to type and I believe everyone did the same in ancient.

✓ During school, we had computer classes where we learned how to type, and I believe everyone did the same in the past.

Original mixes tenses and has incorrect constructions ('have to had', 'used to go there learn', 'in ancient'). Recast to past simple consistent tense and use clearer phrases: 'During school', 'we had computer classes', 'we learned'. Replace 'in ancient' with 'in the past'.

× I think that's one of the key subject in school also.

✓ I think that's one of the key subjects in school as well.

'One of the' requires a plural noun ('subjects'). 'Also' at end is informal; 'as well' is more natural. This fixes quantifier agreement and improves register.

× If you have to say to me or ask to me how did I improve my typing is for the keyboard.

✓ If you ask me how I improved my typing, it was by practicing on the keyboard.

Original mixes direct question word order in a subordinate clause and has extra words ('to me', 'is for the keyboard'). Use correct subordinate clause order ('how I improved my typing') and state the method clearly ('by practicing on the keyboard').

× I almost practiced every 20 minutes for I think this examined all because I think working in the laptop is key essential for our work and every possible moment.

✓ I practiced almost every day for about 20 minutes because I think working on a laptop is essential for our work and for every possible task.

Original misuses 'practiced every 20 minutes' (ambiguous), wrong tense/forms, and awkward phrases ('this examined all', 'key essential'). Change to past simple 'practiced', clarify frequency 'almost every day for about 20 minutes', use preposition 'on a laptop', and replace 'key essential' with 'essential'.