Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng nhưng cần ngắn gọn hơn, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác. Hạn chế dư thừa (ví dụ “for some feedbacks” -> “for feedback”) và sửa cấu trúc như “it's helped me a lot in motivate me” -> “it helps motivate me”. Có thể thêm một ví dụ cụ thể ngắn gọn để làm rõ lí do.

例: I prefer typing because it's more convenient and faster when I want to send my essays to an AI for feedback. Also, the sound of typing relaxes me and helps me stay focused; for example, I often type for an hour without losing concentration.

提案: Câu trả lời hơi lủng củng và quá dài. Trả lời trực tiếp vào câu hỏi (desktop hay laptop), sau đó nêu lí do ngắn gọn. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (e.g. “helpful activities” không phù hợp) và dùng liên từ phù hợp để nối ý.

例: I usually type on my laptop every day because I study and practice English on it. This helps me improve my typing speed and prepare for timed writing exams.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu trôi chảy và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, vốn từ và nối câu yếu. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng về thời điểm, sau đó thêm chi tiết ngắn gọn, sửa thì và cấu trúc (ví dụ “it used to be one of our key subjects”, “students had to go to the IT room”). Tránh tiếng lắp như “Uh” trong thi.

例: I learned to type when I was in third grade. Typing was a core subject back then, so students had to go to the IT room and practise by typing paragraphs from our textbook on a word processor.

提案: Ý hay nhưng cách diễn đạt lộn xộn và có lỗi ngữ pháp; câu quá dài và mất điểm kết thúc. Nên chia thành 2-3 câu ngắn, nêu phương pháp cụ thể (luyện gõ bằng bài tập, dùng phần mềm, thủ thuật hằng ngày). Sửa lỗi như “respond them back” -> “reply to them”, “this is the ways that” -> “these are the ways that help me”.

例: I improve my typing by practising regularly: I complete daily writing tasks on my computer and use typing tutor websites. Also, I often reply to messages on my phone each morning to warm up my fingers, which helps keep my speed steady.

× I prefer typing because it's much more convenient and faster when I need to send my essay to AI assistant for some feedbacks.

✓ I prefer typing because it's much more convenient and faster when I need to send my essay to an AI assistant for some feedback.

Use the indefinite article 'an' before the singular countable noun 'AI assistant'. 'Feedback' is an uncountable noun in English, so it should not be pluralized as 'feedbacks'. Replace 'for some feedbacks' with 'for some feedback' or simply 'for feedback'.

× Moreover, I really find the sound of typing relaxing and it's helped me a lot in motivate me to keep going.

✓ Moreover, I really find the sound of typing relaxing, and it has helped motivate me to keep going.

Use 'has helped' (present perfect) for a past action with present relevance; 'in motivate me' is ungrammatical—use the bare infinitive 'helped motivate' or 'helped me to motivate' (but the former is more natural). Remove the extra 'me' after 'helped'.

× Yes, because I am an English learner, so it's obvious that I spend a huge amount of time typing on my own computer and I sometimes find it really helpful activities because it's helped me improve my typing speed, which is really important for a real writing test.

✓ Yes, because I am an English learner, so it's obvious that I spend a huge amount of time typing on my own computer and I sometimes find it really helpful because it has helped me improve my typing speed, which is really important for a real writing test.

'Activities' is incorrect here; the intended noun is the uncountable idea 'practice' or 'activity' — better to remove or change to 'really helpful'. 'It's helped' should be 'it has helped' (contraction 'it's' = 'it is' is incorrect here). Match singular 'it' with 'has helped'.

× This came so randomly when I was in the third grade. Uh, it used to be one of our key subject.

✓ This happened so randomly when I was in the third grade. Uh, it used to be one of our key subjects.

Use 'happened' instead of 'came' for events occurring; 'subject' is a countable noun and must be plural 'subjects' to agree with 'one of our'.

× So it's meant that of the student in my class need to go to the IT room to learn how to use computer and our first lessons is try to type a paragraph from the textbook in the docs website and.

✓ So it meant that the students in my class needed to go to the IT room to learn how to use computers, and our first lesson was to try typing a paragraph from the textbook on a docs website.

Use 'meant' (past) rather than 'is meant', and 'the students' (plural) to agree with 'need' -> 'needed'. 'Use computer' should be 'use computers' or 'use a computer'. 'First lessons is' should be 'first lesson was'. Use 'try typing' (gerund) and 'on a docs website' (preposition 'on').

× To improve the skill, I often spend a lot of time typing on the computer to finish my writing task or in more familiar way which is techniques like whenever I wake up, the first thing that I do is check out whether I get message from my friend to respond them back.

✓ To improve the skill, I often spend a lot of time typing on the computer to finish my writing tasks or in more familiar ways, using techniques like: whenever I wake up, the first thing I do is check whether I have messages from my friends and respond to them.

Use plural 'tasks' for multiple instances. 'In more familiar way' should be 'in more familiar ways'. Use 'using techniques' to introduce examples. Use 'check whether I have messages' (present perfect for received messages) and 'messages from my friends' (plural) and 'respond to them' (correct phrasal verb).

× I would just simply type on the keyboard of my phone and I think this is the ways that.

✓ I would simply type on my phone's keyboard, and I think this is the way that helps me practice.

Use 'my phone's keyboard' (possessive) or 'the keyboard of my phone'. 'This is the ways' is incorrect; use singular 'the way' to match 'this'. Add a completion to the sentence for clarity.