Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Reduce hesitations and self-corrections, use precise vocabulary, and keep answer concise (max 3–4 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct wrong words (e.g., 'soft puppy' -> 'digital files') and avoid repetition.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because digital files are easy to store and back up. For example, I save documents in the cloud, so I never lose important notes. Also, typed text is quicker to edit and share with classmates.

提案: Make the answer more natural by correcting grammar and removing filler words. Use linking words to structure reasons (e.g., 'because' and 'also'). Be specific about situations you use the laptop in.

例: I mostly use a laptop because it is portable and convenient for moving between home and college. For example, I often take it to the library and use it in classes, which I couldn't do with a desktop.

提案: Organize into a clear past-time response with fewer hesitations. Use correct tense and concise supporting detail (when, where, what you learned). Avoid unfinished sentences.

例: I learned to type during childhood at school when we had computer classes. It was my first time using a computer, and the teacher showed us basic typing and how to use common programs.

提案: Good content and specificity; remove 'simply' and give a short example of a practice routine or tool. Add linking words to show results of practice.

例: I improve my typing by practising regularly and writing essays in both Bengali and English. For instance, I type for 30 minutes daily and use online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy, which has made me faster and reduced mistakes.

× I definitely prefer typing to handwriting because, uh, nowadays a lot of uh, typing softwares are available where I can safely store my soft puppy without getting lost, while uh, the hard copies tend to get lost, uh, often.

✓ I definitely prefer typing to handwriting because nowadays a lot of typing software is available where I can safely store my files without them getting lost, while hard copies often get lost.

Error: 'typing softwares' uses an incorrect plural form for uncountable noun 'software' (Grammar problem type 14). Also 'soft puppy' is an incorrect word/phrase; likely meant 'soft copy' or 'files' and requires a plural reference; 'without getting lost' lacks a clear subject and should be 'without them getting lost'. Suggestion: use the uncountable noun 'software' (no -s), replace 'soft puppy' with 'soft copy' or 'files', and include an explicit plural pronoun 'them' for clarity.

× I mostly type on laptop keyboard because laptops are most handy than uh desktops and it is easy to carry laptop from one place to other, while desktop can be used only at home or at college.

✓ I mostly type on a laptop keyboard because laptops are handier than desktops and it is easy to carry a laptop from one place to another, while a desktop can be used only at home or at college.

Errors: 'on laptop keyboard' is missing an article 'a' (Grammar problem type 22 Article errors). 'laptops are most handy than desktops' uses incorrect comparative form; 'most handy than' should be 'handier than' (Grammar problem type 25 Comparative and superlative errors). 'carry laptop from one place to other' needs articles and preposition: 'a laptop' and 'to another' (Grammar problem type 11 Incorrect use of prepositions and 22 Article errors). Suggestion: Use the comparative 'handier than', include necessary articles 'a' and use 'to another' for 'from one place to another'.

× That's why I definitely prefer laptop.

✓ That's why I definitely prefer laptops.

Error: 'prefer laptop' is missing pluralization or article; context compares types of devices so plural 'laptops' is appropriate (Grammar problem type 1 Singular and plural issue and 22 Article errors). Suggestion: use 'prefer laptops' or 'prefer a laptop' depending on meaning; here general preference takes plural.

× During my childhood uh, uh, class used to held for computer where children were taught how to use computer.

✓ During my childhood, computer classes were held where children were taught how to use computers.

Errors: 'class used to held' is incorrect passive and verb form; should be 'classes were held' (Grammar problem type 21 Incorrect passive voice and 9 Verb in the past participle form). Also 'for computer' and 'use computer' need articles/plural: 'computer classes' and 'use computers' (Grammar problem type 22 Article errors and 1 Singular and plural issue). Suggestion: use correct passive 'were held', pluralize 'classes' and 'computers'.

× Uh, it was the first time I saw computer and learned how to type on a keyboard and how to use the computer and how to.

✓ It was the first time I saw a computer and learned how to type on a keyboard and how to use the computer.

Errors: 'I saw computer' needs an article 'a' (Grammar problem type 22 Article errors). The sentence ends with an incomplete phrase 'and how to.' which is a sentence fragment (Grammar problem type 26 Sentence structure errors). Suggestion: include 'a' before 'computer' and remove the incomplete fragment to make the sentence complete.

× I improve my typing simply by practising.

✓ I improve my typing simply by practicing.

Issue: 'practising' vs 'practicing' is a spelling variant (British vs American). Not strictly a grammar error but ensure consistent spelling. Also 'practising' as a gerund after 'by' is correct (Grammar problem type 8 Verb + -ing form). Suggestion: use consistent spelling style; 'practicing' (US) or 'practising' (UK).

× I write different kinds of essays in different languages like in Bengali and in English that improve my language skill as well as my typing.

✓ I write different kinds of essays in different languages, such as Bengali and English, which improve my language skills as well as my typing.

Errors: 'like in Bengali and in English' is awkward; use 'such as Bengali and English' (Grammar problem type 11 Incorrect use of prepositions). 'that improve my language skill' should be 'which improve my language skills' for clarity and plural 'skills' (Grammar problem type 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and 14 Incorrect use of quantifiers). Suggestion: use 'such as' to list examples, use 'which' to add non-restrictive clause, and pluralize 'skills'.