Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は主旨は伝わりますが、文法や語順の誤り、冗長さ、そしてリンク表現の不足が目立ちます。短く論理的な主節（topic sentence）を最初に述べ、その後で理由を1〜2文で具体的に説明してください。例えば時制の一致、比較表現（faster than）を正しく使い、不要な語を減らしましょう。発音や流暢さも向上させるために短い練習文を繰り返すと良いです。

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more comfortable for me. For example, I can type much faster than I can write by hand, so I finish notes and emails more quickly.

提案: 返答は肯定して理由に触れていますが、文が断片化しており文法ミス（ピリオドの誤用、単数複数、不自然な語順）が目立ちます。最初に明確な主文で答え、続けて簡潔な補足（職業とその理由）を一文でつなげてください。接続詞（because, so, therefore）を使うと流れが良くなります。

例: Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I work as a researcher. As a result, I often write scientific papers and need a reliable full-size keyboard.

提案: 主旨は伝わりますが、“I don't date after entering the university”の表現は不自然です。時を示す表現（before university / after entering university / when I was young）を正確に使い、学習経緯を簡潔に述べてください。接続語（but, although, because）を用いると論理的になります。

例: I learned to type naturally after I entered university. I never took formal lessons; instead, I improved my skills simply by using the keyboard for daily study and assignments.

提案: 内容は妥当ですが、文が冗長で同じ意味の語が繰り返されています（I think… I think）。最初に結論を述べ、次に理由や具体例（練習方法や頻度）を1〜2文で示してください。語法では“become faster at typing”や“practice for hours”など自然な表現を使いましょう。

例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I type for several hours every day while working on papers, which has gradually made me much faster at typing.

× I prefer typing because I feel comfortable and easier on it.

✓ I prefer typing because I feel comfortable and find it easier.

This sentence incorrectly mixes adjective and comparative structures. 'Easier' needs a verb such as 'find' to link it to the subject. Use 'comfortable' (adjective) with 'feel' and 'easier' with 'find' to make the sentence grammatical and natural.

× I by typing I can write something much more faster than handwriting.

✓ By typing I can write things much faster than by handwriting.

Original has awkward word order and incorrect comparative form 'more faster' (redundant). Use 'much faster' (correct comparative) and place the prepositional phrase 'by typing' at the sentence start or use 'by handwriting' for parallel structure.

× Yes, I type every day on a desktop because I am a researcher.

✓ Yes, I type every day on a desktop because I am a researcher.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Present simple is appropriate for habitual action. Explanation: 現在形は習慣を表すため適切です。

× I. Write scientific paper. Using typing.

✓ I write scientific papers using a keyboard.

Original is fragmented and lacks proper structure. Combine into one sentence with plural 'papers' (general meaning) and use 'using a keyboard' or 'by typing' to indicate method. Fragments like 'I.' and 'Using typing.' must be joined and rephrased.

× I don't date after entering the university.

✓ I don't remember the exact date after entering the university.

Original is unclear and uses 'date' incorrectly as a noun/verb. If the student means they cannot recall when they learned to type, say 'I don't remember the exact date.' Use present simple 'don't remember' to express lack of recollection, and 'after entering the university' is fine as a time reference.

× I didn't have a special lesson to type on a keyboard, but I naturally learned through using it.

✓ I didn't have any special lessons in typing, but I naturally learned by using it.

Use plural 'lessons' and 'in typing' or 'for typing' to be natural. 'By using it' is the correct prepositional phrase for method. Past simple 'didn't have' and 'learned' are correctly used for past events.

× I think practice is the most important thing to improve typing skills.

✓ I think practice is the most important thing to improve my typing skills.

Add 'my' to specify whose typing skills are being improved. Possessive pronoun is needed to clarify the subject of 'typing skills.'

× Because I type every day for hours, I have gradually become faster on typing I think.

✓ Because I type every day for hours, I have gradually become faster at typing, I think.

Use 'faster at typing' rather than 'faster on typing.' Add a comma before 'I think' or move 'I think' to the start for clarity. Present perfect 'have become' is appropriate for a change over time that affects the present.