Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Speak in a complete, grammatical sentence and be specific about why you prefer handwriting. Avoid vague phrases and redundancy. Use linking words if adding a reason.

例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me organize my thoughts more clearly. For example, when I take notes by hand I can draw arrows and underline key points, which makes it easier to remember information later.

提案: Answer directly, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid filler phrases like "by the way" or repeated words. Keep to two or three sentences and give one clear reason, using linking words such as "because" or "so".

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is more comfortable and portable. Because the laptop follows me around, I can work in different places and quickly note down ideas when they come to mind.

提案: Give a concise, chronologically clear answer. Avoid confusing time expressions and irrelevant details. State when you learned to type and briefly mention any relevant course or practice, using linking words like "and" or "so" to connect ideas.

例: I started learning to type about six months ago when I enrolled in a web design course at a local training center in Vidya Nagar. During the course I practiced typing regularly, which helped me improve quickly.

提案: Use clear, grammatically correct sentences and add a specific practice routine or tool. Mention how often you practice and any exercises or software you use, linked logically with words like "for example" or "by".

例: I improve my typing by practicing proper finger placement and posture every day for 20 minutes. For example, I use an online typing tutor to do accuracy drills and sit up straight with my wrists slightly raised to avoid fatigue.

× I prefer handwriting because it make clarity and a handwritten notes.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it makes things clearer and produces handwritten notes.

The verbs and noun forms are incorrect. 'It make' should be 'it makes' to agree with singular subject (third person singular) — Grammar Problem Type ID 2 and 27; 'clarity' used as a noun does not fit here, so use 'clearer' (adjective) or 'clarity' with a different structure; 'a handwritten notes' is incorrect because 'a' requires a singular noun; use 'handwritten notes' (plural) or 'a handwritten note' (singular). Suggest using 'makes things clearer and produces handwritten notes' for natural phrasing.

× By the way, I type on a laptop keyboard every day rather than rather than using a desktop, it feel more comfortable to use a laptop keyboard which I can U usually visualize and the thoughts in my minds.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day rather than on a desktop because it feels more comfortable and helps me visualize my thoughts.

Multiple problems: redundant phrase 'rather than rather than' (Grammar Problem Type 16), incorrect comma splice joining two independent clauses (26), 'it feel' should be 'it feels' (third person singular — ID 2 and 27), awkward clause 'which I can U usually visualize and the thoughts in my minds' has pronoun and number errors ('U' is wrong, 'thoughts in my minds' should be 'my thoughts' — ID 12 and 1). The corrected sentence removes redundancy, fixes subject-verb agreement, and uses natural phrasing: 'helps me visualize my thoughts.' Suggest keeping one comparative conjunction and connecting clauses properly with 'because' or a semicolon.

× In recent last week, I've joined Asthmatic education near me on Vidya Nagar. I have learned and completed my full course of web designing, writing and web applications of six months.

✓ Last week, I joined Asthmatic Education near me in Vidya Nagar. I learned and completed a six-month course in web design, writing, and web applications.

The time expression 'In recent last week' is ungrammatical; use 'Last week' for a completed past action (Grammar Problem Type 5 and 6). Using present perfect 'I've joined' is acceptable for recent actions but conflicts with the explicit time 'last week', so simple past 'I joined' is correct (ID 5). 'Asthmatic education' seems to be a proper name, capitalize and use 'in Vidya Nagar' (preposition error — ID 11). 'I have learned and completed my full course of web designing, writing and web applications of six months' has tense and word order issues; use 'learned and completed a six-month course in web design, writing, and web applications.' Suggestions: match tense to specific past time and use standard noun forms ('web design' not 'web designing').

× I improve my typing with the correct placement of my fingers not touching my palms and sitting straight front of computer and laptop.

✓ I improve my typing by placing my fingers correctly, keeping my palms off the keyboard, and sitting straight in front of the computer or laptop.

Errors include incorrect preposition 'with' should be 'by' to express method (ID 11), awkward word order and missing parallelism in the list of actions (Grammar Problem Type 26 and 18), 'not touching my palms' is better as 'keeping my palms off the keyboard' for clarity, and 'sitting straight front of computer and laptop' needs preposition 'in front of' and choice between 'computer or laptop' (ID 11 and 1). Suggest using parallel gerund phrases 'placing..., keeping..., and sitting...' to improve fluency.