Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and grammar errors, and combine related ideas using linking words. Also give one specific reason/example rather than repeating similar points.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and more convenient. For example, when I write reports on my laptop I can quickly edit sentences and share the file with colleagues via email, which saves time compared with rewriting by hand.

提案: Respond with one clear topic sentence and follow with a brief specific detail. Remove hesitations and redundant phrases; use linking words for coherence (for example, 'because' and 'so').

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because most of my work is done on that device. As a result, I find it easy to edit documents and send them to colleagues by email or cloud platforms.

提案: Give a clear time reference and one specific detail about how you learned. Avoid repetition and correct small grammar issues (e.g., 'in school', 'paragraphs').

例: I learned to type back in school during computer classes. Our teacher asked us to type short paragraphs from a book in Microsoft Word, which helped me practice basic typing and formatting skills.

提案: Structure your answer: start with one method, then add a linked example. Reduce hesitations and fix word choice (e.g., 'fingers placement' → 'finger placement'; 'paragraphs' and 'paragraph' typos). Mention specific websites or exercises if possible.

例: I improve my typing by doing structured practice to work on finger placement and speed. For example, I spend 20 minutes a day on typing websites like TypingClub, where I complete timed challenges and long-paragraph exercises to boost accuracy and speed.

× I prefer typing because it's more faster and more convenient.

✓ I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient.

The phrase 'more faster' is incorrect because faster is already the comparative form; adding 'more' is redundant. Use either 'faster' or 'more convenient'. Suggestion: remove 'more' before 'faster' so the sentence reads 'faster and more convenient'.

× I can easily share long documents to others.

✓ I can easily share long documents with others.

Use 'share with' rather than 'share to' when indicating the recipients of something. 'Share with others' is the correct prepositional pattern. Suggestion: replace 'to' with 'with'.

× I type on uh laptop keyboard every day because my mostly UH job is on my laptop, so I prefer typing on keyboard every day and it's easy to share my documents too easily via emails or umm, via other platforms.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because most of my work is on my laptop, so I prefer typing on the keyboard every day and it's easy to share my documents easily via email or other platforms.

Multiple issues: missing article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' (article error), awkward phrase 'my mostly UH job' should be 'most of my work' (sentence structure and word choice), missing article before 'keyboard' when repeated. 'Via emails' is better as 'via email' (uncountable) or 'by email'. Suggestions: add 'a' before 'laptop keyboard', change 'my mostly UH job' to 'most of my work', use 'the keyboard' or repeat 'a keyboard', and use 'via email' or 'by email'.

× I learned typing on keyboard from my school life, from my computer classes.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard during my school years, in my computer classes.

Use 'learned to type' rather than 'learned typing' for this context (verb + to-infinitive or gerund variation). Also add 'the' before 'keyboard' (article issue) and use 'during my school years' instead of 'from my school life' for natural English. Suggestion: 'learned to type on the keyboard during my school years, in my computer classes.'

× They they told us to write some paras from the book in Word document.

✓ They told us to write some paragraphs from the book in a Word document.

Reduce repetition 'They they'. Use full word 'paragraphs' instead of 'paras' (register). Add article 'a' before 'Word document'. Suggestion: 'They told us to write some paragraphs from the book in a Word document.'

× I improve my typing by writing long paragraphs, uh, set practice that helps me practice my fingers placement and improve my speed and accuracy.

✓ I improve my typing by writing long paragraphs and doing set practice that helps me practice finger placement and improve my speed and accuracy.

The original mixes noun phrases awkwardly. Use parallel gerunds: 'writing' and 'doing set practice'. 'My fingers placement' should be 'finger placement' (possessive/article issue). Maintain parallel structure for 'helps me practice... and improve...'. Suggestion: use parallel '-ing' forms and correct noun phrase to 'finger placement'.

× Umm, I really like to do a challenge from the website that uh, gives us some long param be able to memorize it and write uh, quickly as possible.

✓ I really like doing challenges on websites that give us long passages to memorize and write as quickly as possible.

Sentence has several structural problems: 'to do a challenge from the website' is awkward; use 'doing challenges on websites'. 'param' likely means 'passages' or 'paragraphs'. 'be able to memorize it and write ... quickly as possible' is ungrammatical; use 'to memorize and write as quickly as possible'. Suggestion: use plural 'challenges', 'websites', 'passages', and the infinitive 'to memorize and write' with the phrase 'as quickly as possible'.