Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện câu trả lời bằng cách sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sửa ngữ pháp và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể, mạch lạc. Tránh từ không đúng (ví dụ: “wiretapping”) và viết 3-4 câu tối đa. Nên dùng liên từ để nối ý, nêu lý do và một ví dụ thực tế.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, when I take notes during lectures I can type quickly and organise my notes digitally. This also helps me relax because I don’t worry about messy handwriting. Overall, typing suits my daily study needs.

提案: Trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác (phone thay vì telephone có thể dùng nhưng cần đúng cấu trúc). Giải thích ngắn gọn lý do và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về tần suất sử dụng. Dùng 2-3 câu, có liên từ để mạch lạc.

例: No, I don’t use a desktop or laptop every day because I mainly use my phone for messaging and quick tasks. I find it more convenient when I’m out, and I rarely need a full computer for my daily activities. Occasionally I use a laptop for long documents.

提案: Cần chỉnh ngữ pháp thì quá khứ, trật tự từ và nội dung cụ thể. Nêu thời điểm rõ ràng, ai dạy và một chi tiết minh họa. Tránh câu rời rạc và từ sai (term/ tie pink).

例: I learned to type when I was about seven years old; my parents taught me the basics at home. I remember practising on a small keyboard that my grandparents gave me for my birthday, which helped me improve quickly.

提案: Trả lời cần rõ phương pháp cụ thể để cải thiện (luyện tập, ứng dụng, trò chơi tập gõ). Viết 2-3 câu, dùng động từ và cụm từ chính xác, tránh âm thanh mô phỏng như “click click”. Nêu tần suất hoặc ví dụ cụ thể.

例: To improve my typing I practise regularly with online typing exercises and typing games. I also type messages and short essays every day to build speed and accuracy. Occasionally I practise with a friend to make it more enjoyable.

× I prefer typing because it is easily and help me relax.

✓ I prefer typing because it is easy and helps me relax.

'easily' is an adverb but the sentence needs the adjective 'easy' to describe 'typing' as a method; 'help' needs third person singular agreement with the subject 'it' so it should be 'helps'. Suggestions: use 'easy' for descriptions and add -s for third person singular verbs.

× For example, I usually wiretapping because it's very necessary and.

✓ For example, I usually do transcriptions because it's very necessary.

The original sentence uses 'wiretapping' incorrectly and ends abruptly with 'and.' Use a proper verb phrase like 'do transcriptions' or 'take notes' and complete the sentence. Also remove the trailing 'and.' Ensure the sentence is complete and uses the correct noun or verb form.

× No, I don't because I usually use telephone.

✓ No, I don't because I usually use my phone.

'telephone' is grammatically acceptable but 'use telephone' is unnatural; add a possessive 'my' and use 'phone' for natural speech. No third person singular verb error here after correction; keep verb 'use' since subject 'I' requires base form.

× I don't know use desktop or laptop because it's very difficult and not not necessary for me.

✓ I don't know how to use a desktop or laptop because it's very difficult and not necessary for me.

Missing infinitive marker 'how to' after 'know' and missing articles before 'desktop' and 'laptop.' Also duplicate 'not not' must be fixed. Include 'a' and 'how to' to form correct verb phrase 'know how to use.'

× I learn how to term when I seven-year old parent teach me taught me.

✓ I learned how to type when I was seven years old; my parent taught me.

Past events require past tense: 'learn' -> 'learned', 'teach' -> 'taught.' Need 'was' for age expression and 'years' plural. Also 'term' is incorrect; likely 'type.' Split into two clauses for clarity.

× Learn how to tie pink because.

✓ I learned how to type because of practice.

This fragment lacks subject and proper verb form. 'tie' and 'pink' are incorrect words here; likely meant 'type' and 'practice.' Provide a full sentence with subject and past tense verb.

× Grandparent give for me my birthday.

✓ My grandparents gave me a keyboard for my birthday.

Original lacks correct verb tense and word order. Use past tense 'gave,' plural 'grandparents' if applicable, and correct preposition 'for' to 'for my birthday' becomes 'gave me a keyboard for my birthday.' Include the object 'a keyboard.'

× I think so. I'm usually I usually kick click, click typing and ongoing.

✓ I think so. Usually I click when typing and keep going.

Original is disfluent and contains wrong words 'kick' instead of 'click' and 'ongoing' used incorrectly. Reorder to natural adverb placement: 'Usually I...' Use present simple 'click' and phrase 'keep going' to express continuous action.

× You typing with my friend and talking with uh.

✓ I type with my friend and we talk while doing it.

Pronoun 'You' is incorrect for first-person account; should be 'I.' 'Typing' needs auxiliary if present continuous ('I am typing') or use simple present 'I type.' Add 'we' to join clauses and complete the sentence rather than trailing 'uh.'