Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct topic sentence, then add a brief specific reason and one concrete example. Avoid vague phrases like "with the advent of technology" without elaboration and keep to at most 3–4 sentences. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient for my daily tasks. For example, when I take notes or write emails I can type much quicker and easily edit mistakes. Therefore, typing saves me time and helps me organize information more efficiently.

提案: Start with a clear statement (desktop or laptop) and then briefly describe the setup with specific details. Avoid redundant filler words and correct small grammar errors (e.g., "an iPad", "that just connects").

例: I usually type on a keyboard that connects to my iPad, so it feels like a small laptop. The keyboard is compact and portable, which makes it easy to type at home or in cafes.

提案: Answer directly with a time phrase (e.g., "since childhood") and then give one specific detail about how you improved. Keep sentences short and correct grammar ("I don't remember", "it built up gradually"). Use a linking word to show sequence.

例: I've been typing since childhood, so I don't remember the exact year I learned. Over time I practiced on computers and tablets, and by doing regular schoolwork and online activities my speed and accuracy improved gradually.

提案: Begin with a concise topic sentence describing your main method, then give specific activities and a linking word to connect them. Remove hesitations and repeated words, and correct grammar ("I am taking the computer-based test").

例: I improve my typing by practising regularly, especially while preparing for the computer-based IELTS test. For example, I write full essays under timed conditions and use online typing exercises to increase my speed and reduce errors.

× Actually I have a iPad and it contains a set which just connect with iPad and it is basically a laptop kind of thing.

✓ Actually I have an iPad and it comes with a set that just connects to the iPad and is basically a laptop-like device.

Errors: 'a iPad' should be 'an iPad' because iPad begins with a vowel sound; 'contains a set which just connect with iPad' has incorrect verb forms and prepositions. Use 'comes with a set that connects to the iPad.' Also 'laptop kind of thing' is informal; use 'laptop-like device.' Suggestions: Use correct articles before vowel sounds, match verb number with subject, use 'connects to' for connection and prefer concise nouns. Grammar problem type ID:22

× So I type on the keyboard of laptop.

✓ So I type on the keyboard of the laptop.

Error: Missing definite article before 'laptop.' The original also sounded like a count reference; use 'the laptop' to specify the device mentioned. Suggestion: Use 'the' when referring to a specific item already introduced. Grammar problem type ID:2

× Will from childhood I have been engaged in devices so much and I did not remember a specific year that I in which I learned to type.

✓ Well, since childhood I have been using devices a lot and I do not remember the specific year in which I learned to type.

Errors: 'Will' should be 'Well'; tense and auxiliary usage incorrect. 'Have been engaged in devices' is unnatural; use 'have been using devices.' 'I did not remember' should be 'I do not remember' to match present perfect context. Remove redundant words 'that I in which.' Suggestions: Use 'since childhood' for duration, use present perfect for ongoing states, and avoid redundant clauses. Grammar problem type ID:26

× It just build up gradually and today I know how to write type properly on keyboard.

✓ It just built up gradually and today I know how to type properly on the keyboard.

Errors: 'build' should be past form 'built' to agree with 'just' indicating a past development. 'write type' is redundant and incorrect; use 'type.' Also add 'the' before 'keyboard.' Suggestions: Use correct past tense for completed developments and avoid redundant verbs. Grammar problem type ID:9

× Honestly I do typing a lot because nowadays I have been preparing for IELTS exam and it requires typing skills also in writing section because I am I am giving it on computer based so I have been writing a lot of essay and that includes my training for.

✓ Honestly, I type a lot because I have been preparing for the IELTS exam, and it requires typing skills in the writing section since I am taking it on a computer. I have been writing many essays as part of my training.

Errors: 'do typing' is unnatural; use 'type.' 'Nowadays I have been preparing' is acceptable but awkwardly connected. Missing article 'the' before 'IELTS exam.' 'It requires typing skills also in writing section' needs reordering and articles: 'in the writing section.' 'I am I am giving it on computer based' is ungrammatical; use 'I am taking it on a computer.' 'a lot of essay' should be 'many essays.' Suggestions: Use natural collocations ('type a lot', 'take an exam on a computer'), include articles, and use plural nouns for countable items. Grammar problem type ID:26