Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сократите и структурируйте ответ: начните с прямого утверждения, затем дайте 1–2 конкретных причины с примером. Избегайте повторов и грамматических ошибок (например, "I want to" вместо "I wanna sleep for"). Используйте связки (because, so, for example) и правильные формы (faster, simple → simple).

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I usually type on my laptop or phone when I write notes or save important information, so I can edit and search through my text quickly.

提案: Начните с прямого ответа, затем объясните обстоятельства использования и добавьте один конкретный пример. Упростите фразы и исправьте ошибки в порядке слов и формах глаголов (search information, needed for my career). Используйте связки (especially, because, for example).

例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day, especially at university and at work. I mainly use it to write reports and search for information for my projects, because it helps me organize my notes more efficiently.

提案: Дайте точный возраст и короткое описание прогресса. Избегайте колебаний и ненужных поправок (уточнения вроде "or 30 years old"). Употребляйте прошедшее время корректно (I learned to type at 12) и добавьте одно конкретное подробное действие о практике.

例: I learned to type when I was about 12 years old. At first I typed very slowly, but I practised regularly and now I can type much faster because I used online typing exercises and school assignments.

提案: Отвечайте прямо: назовите конкретные способы улучшения (ежедневная практика, онлайн-курсы, упражнения на скорость). Уберите фразы-пустышки ("Let's talk about this again"). Используйте правильные формы глаголов (improve my typing, I practise) и связки (for example, because).

例: I improve my typing mainly by practising every day on my laptop and phone. For example, I use online typing tests to increase my speed and I type my homework and project notes to build accuracy.

× I wanna sleep for typing because it is easy, easy and they're very simply for for me and it is a very faster for writing and I use typing on my laptop, my notebooks or my phone on my phone when I write a novel and important information.

✓ I prefer typing because it is easy and very simple for me, and it is faster for writing. I type on my laptop, my notebook, or my phone when I write a novel or record important information.

The original sentence has multiple structural and word-choice problems: 'wanna' is informal and incorrect in this context (use 'prefer'); 'sleep for typing' is meaningless and likely a mistake for 'prefer typing'; 'they're very simply' mixes plural pronoun with adjective form and wrong comparative; 'a very faster' is ungrammatical (use 'faster' without 'a'); repetition and extra words ('for for', 'on my phone on my phone') break fluency. Suggestions: use standard vocabulary (prefer), keep subject-verb agreement, remove redundant words, use correct adjective/adverb forms, and separate ideas into clear clauses. Note: This error involves sentence structure, article use and adjective/adverb errors, so it is classified as ID 26.

× Yes I do. I type on the laptop every day, especially when I am in a university or in my work.

✓ Yes, I do. I type on my laptop every day, especially when I am at university or at work.

Use of definite article 'the laptop' implies a specific laptop already known; 'my laptop' is more natural. Also, use preposition 'at' with 'university' and 'work' in this general sense. Suggestions: use 'my' for personal possessions and 'at' for locations like university/work. Classified as ID 22.

× I usually use my laptop for typing or search many information which is which need to which for my career and for my project.

✓ I usually use my laptop for typing or searching for a lot of information that I need for my career and for my projects.

Problems: parallel structure mismatch ('for typing or search' should be 'typing or searching'); 'many information' is uncountable so use 'a lot of information' or 'much information'; redundant words 'which is which need to which for' are incorrect relative clause structure—use 'that I need for'. Suggestions: maintain parallel verb forms, use correct quantifiers for uncountable nouns, and use 'that/which' properly in relative clauses. Classified as ID 11.

× Uh, if I'm not mistaken, when I was about 12 or 30 years old, I learned type, uh, on my laptop, uh, for, searched, uh, many information for my work, for my homework and uh, it was, it was firstly very slowly and uh, I can, I could always practice on the type.

✓ If I'm not mistaken, when I was about 12 years old, I learned to type on my laptop for finding information for my work and my homework. At first I typed very slowly, but I could always practice typing.

Multiple tense and verb-form errors: 'learned type' should be 'learned to type'; 'learned... when I was about 12 or 30 years old' is inconsistent—choose the correct age; 'for, searched' is wrong form—use 'for finding' or 'to find'; 'many information' is incorrect (use 'information' uncountable); 'it was, it was firstly very slowly' should be 'at first I typed very slowly'; 'I can, I could always practice on the type' should be 'I could always practice typing'. Suggestions: use infinitive after 'learned' (learned to do), use consistent past tense, avoid redundant fillers, and use proper adverb placement. Classified as ID 5.

× Let's talk about this again. I always try to better my typing skills for with practice and I constantly constantly practice on my phone or my laptop and Ioffer and I always typing on my laptop for searching new information and do doing my homework or project and I always use of them.

✓ Let's talk about this again. I always try to improve my typing skills with practice, and I constantly practice on my phone or my laptop. I always type on my laptop to search for new information and to do my homework or projects, and I use them regularly.

Errors include incorrect collocation 'try to better' (use 'try to improve'), wrong preposition 'for with practice', duplicated words, 'Ioffer' is unclear, incorrect continuous form 'I always typing' should be 'I always type', 'searching new information' needs 'search for' and infinitive parallelism 'to search' and 'to do'. Suggestions: use correct verb + -ing or infinitive structures ('try to improve', 'practice doing'), ensure parallel infinitives, remove duplicates, and use correct prepositions. Classified as ID 8.