Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 保持自然但要更简洁、有条理。回答时先给出直接观点，然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持，避免重复（例如多次说“revise”或“I think”）。可用连接词如“because”或“for example”来衔接。注意冠词和小词的准确性（e.g. “by hand”而不是“write by hand is”）。

例: I prefer typing because it's easy to edit and correct mistakes quickly. For example, when drafting emails or reports I can rearrange sentences and check spelling in seconds, which saves a lot of time.

提案: 答案要简洁并注意句子结构与时态。直接说经常使用哪种设备，然后给出职业相关的具体例子以增强说服力，避免语气词和重复（如多次停顿或重复单词）。连词如“because”或“so”用于逻辑衔接。

例: I type on a laptop every day because I'm a lawyer and I draft contracts and legal documents on it. For instance, I use software to edit agreements and track changes, so typing is essential to my job.

提案: 回答要更准确自然，使用正确的时态与常用表达。先给出大致时间（e.g. "when I was a child"），然后简短描述情景和感受，避免重复词（如多余的“to”或“run to use”）。可以用连接词如“so”或“and”衔接原因或感受。

例: I learned to type when I was a child after my parents bought our first home computer. I found typing interesting and more efficient than handwriting, so I practiced a lot on simple games and exercises.

提案: 给出具体的方法和步骤，不要只说“practice”。说明如何练习（例如使用特定练习网站、触摸打字法、定时练习）并提供可量化的进步（例如提高到每分钟多少词）。避免断断续续和重复，保持句子完整。

例: I improved my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I used online typing lessons and timed drills for 20 minutes a day, focused on touch-typing and accuracy, and gradually increased my speed from about 30 to 60 words per minute.

× I think the main reason is that we can revise the words, the language we type easily using computer keyboards and something.

✓ I think the main reason is that we can easily revise the words and language we type using a computer keyboard.

句子结构混乱，词语顺序不当且含有口语化的“and something”。建议将“easily”放在动词前以修饰“revise”，将并列名词按逻辑排序，并去掉不明确的短语。示例改法更清晰、更自然。

× And if we write by hand is hard to revise.

✓ And if we write by hand, it is hard to revise.

句子缺少形式主语“it”，造成结构不完整。用“it is hard to revise”作为完整句子，且在从句前加逗号更符合书面语。

× So I think the I think the key point is that we can revise.

✓ So I think the key point is that we can revise.

存在重复“the I think the”，为典型的口误。删除多余部分使句子简洁明了。

× Of course, I'm because I work as a lawyer and using the laptop keyboard to type and to draft contracts agreements are part of my my work.

✓ Of course. I work as a lawyer, and using a laptop keyboard to type and draft contracts and agreements is part of my work.

原句中包含未完成的短语“I'm because”，且名词并列“contracts agreements”缺少连接词或冠词，动词短语与主语搭配错误。改为完整句子，使用并列连词并修正主谓一致；去掉重复词“my”。

× So I do use it every day and I'm familiar with the with typing and it's good.

✓ So I do use it every day, and I'm familiar with typing; it's very useful.

原句“familiar with the with typing”有重复和冠词错误，且“it's good”过于笼统。删除重复，移除不必要的“the”，并用“very useful”更符合语境。

× I remember that when I was very young, my parents bought me a computer and a keyboard and that's the first time I run to use a keyboard to type and to write something on computer.

✓ I remember that when I was very young, my parents bought me a computer and a keyboard, and that was the first time I learned to use a keyboard to type and write something on the computer.

原句中时态与动词形式错误：“run to use”不合适，应使用“learned to use”来表达第一次学会做某事；在“write something on computer”前需要定冠词“the computer”。建议用过去时一致表示过去的经历。

× I felt this very interesting and very efficient to to to to type on a computer.

✓ I found it very interesting and very efficient to type on a computer.

原句中“felt this very interesting”用法不当，应使用“found it ...”来描述感觉；有多个多余的“to”。改为更自然的表达并去掉重复词。

× I believe the most important contributing factor is practice.

✓ I believe the most important contributing factor is practice.

句子本身语法正确，但在口语语境中可保持不变。此处提供作为参考，不需修改。

× I remember that when the first time I I used keyboard, I type very slow, slowly.

✓ I remember that the first time I used a keyboard, I typed very slowly.

原句中时序词序错误，应为“the first time I used a keyboard”。动词时态要用过去时“typed”，副词“slowly”用来修饰动词，不能同时用“slow, slowly”。删除多余重复“I”。

× Umm, I have to figure out I I I cannot figure out the low the location of each type, but after I practice it regularly.

✓ Umm, I had to figure out the location of each key, but after I practiced regularly,

原句中时态、词汇及介词使用不当：“figure out”在此处应使用过去时“had to figure out”与前文过去时一致；“low the location”无意义，应为“location of each key”；“practice it regularly”要改为过去时“practiced regularly”。另外原句句尾不完整，需接下文或补全。