Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 注意发音与拼写（例如“Taiping”应为“typing”），同时回答应更直接与自然。第一句可先给出明确主题句，然后用1-2个简短具体原因支持，避免重复和语法错误。可以用连接词如“because”, “so”, “for example”。

例: I prefer typing because it is much faster and makes editing easy. For example, when I write emails or essays on a computer, I can quickly delete or move sentences, so my writing becomes clearer.

提案: 句子总体清晰，但有小错误（例如“tap”不自然，复数/时态一致问题“save times”应为“saves time”）。建议用更自然的动词（type/use）并注意主谓一致，删除冗余，控制在最多五句内。

例: I use my laptop keyboard every day because I have to type many assignments. I usually submit my work to my teacher electronically, which is more convenient and saves time.

提案: 回答时间点明确，内容具体，但有语法问题（例如“tried to chatting”应为“tried chatting”或“started chatting”）。建议简化句子并使用连词如“so”或“and”连接细节，确保动词形式正确。

例: I learned to type about two years ago when I first got a computer. I practiced a lot with online typing software and chatted with friends on the computer to improve my speed.

提案: 观点清楚但有时态和搭配错误（“improved”应与现在完成或现在时一致，且“the increased accuracy”不自然）。建议用现在时描述习惯性动作，提供更具体细节（例如每天练习多少分钟、使用哪些网站），并用连接词如“so”或“which helps”。

例: I improve my typing by practicing every day with online typing tests for about 20 minutes. I also chat with friends online, which helps increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer Taiping since it's much faster than handwriting and it's easier to add edit mistakes.

✓ I prefer typing since it's much faster than handwriting and it's easier to add or edit mistakes.

句中有两个问题：1) 把“Taiping”应为“typing”（拼写错误，属于词形错误但符合“形容词或副词使用不当”条目范围内的用词问题）；2) “add edit mistakes” 结构不正确，缺少连词“or”以连接两个动词“add”和“edit”。建议在并列动词之间加连词或用不定式短语，确保表达清晰。

× For example, when I read emails or essays on a computer, I can quickly delete what I wrote from and move sentences.

✓ For example, when I read emails or essays on a computer, I can quickly delete what I wrote and move sentences.

原句中“delete what I wrote from”中多了介词“from”导致句子结构不完整，错误地影响了动词短语的过去分词用法。应删除多余的“from”。建议检查介词是否必要，并确保动词短语连贯。

× I tap on my laptop keyboard every day because I need to do a lot of assignments and type them up on my computer.

✓ I tap on my laptop keyboard every day because I need to do a lot of assignments and type them up on my computer.

该句本身语法基本正确；但后文有相关并列谓语时，注意主语一致性（I ... need ... and type）无需第三人称变化。此处无需改动，只需注意人称和动词一致。

× I usually hand my work to my teacher electronically, which is more convenient and save times.

✓ I usually hand my work to my teacher electronically, which is more convenient and saves time.

错误有两处：1) “save times” 应为单数“saves time”——动词需要与先行词“which（referring to the electronic submission）”一致，故用第三人称单数动词“saves”；2) “time” 在此不可数，不能用复数“times”。建议记住常用短语“save time”。

× About two years ago when I first got a computer, I started learning how to type on a keyboard.

✓ About two years ago, when I first got a computer, I started learning how to type on a keyboard.

句子本身时态使用正确（过去式），只是缺少逗号以分隔时间状语从句，使结构更清晰。建议在时间状语后加逗号以提高可读性。

× I practiced a lot online with typing software and I tried to chatting with my friends on computer with my keyboard.

✓ I practiced a lot online with typing software and I tried chatting with my friends on the computer with my keyboard.

错误点：1) “tried to chatting” 是动词+不定式与动名词混用错误，应为“tried chatting”或“tried to chat”; 2) “on computer” 缺冠词，正确为“on the computer”。建议掌握动词后接不定式或动名词的规律，并注意冠词用法。

× I believe practicing is the best way to improve typing.

✓ I believe practising is the best way to improve typing.

句子语法正确，但英式拼写“practising”与美式“practicing”可根据考试偏好选择。此处无需改动语法，仅作拼写风格提示。

× I practice typing every day using online typing tests and try chatting with my friends online, which improved my typing speed and the increased accuracy.

✓ I practice typing every day using online typing tests and try chatting with my friends online, which improves my typing speed and increases my accuracy.

原句在从句动词时态和形式上不一致：主句为一般现在时，定语从句却用了过去式“improved”，并且短语“the increased accuracy”结构不自然。应把从句改为一般现在时“improves”和并列谓语“increases my accuracy”。建议保持时态一致，并用并列动词短语表达两个结果。