Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần trả lời trực tiếp rõ ràng, tránh ngập ngừng và phát âm sai. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn (I prefer handwriting) rồi nêu 2 lý do cụ thể và liên kết bằng từ nối như "because" và "so". Tránh dùng từ không đúng như "monopolize"; thay bằng "help me focus" hoặc "help me write faster". Giữ câu không quá dài, tối đa 3-4 câu.

例: I prefer handwriting. I find handwriting helps me focus and write faster during exams because I can organize my thoughts more easily. For example, when I take tests I can quickly jot down ideas and make notes, so I usually perform better.

提案: Cần dùng câu rõ ràng, chính xác và tránh lặp từ. Mở đầu trả lời trực tiếp (I usually use a laptop) rồi giải thích lý do cụ thể với từ nối như "because" hoặc "so". Dùng từ phù hợp (portable, convenient) thay cho "bring a lot of plate/light". Giữ 2-3 câu.

例: I usually use a laptop keyboard because it is portable and convenient for carrying to school. It is compact and has a built-in battery, so I can work anywhere. Desktops are larger and less practical for my daily needs.

提案: Trả lời trực tiếp (I learned in Grade 1) và thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ bằng từ nối như "because" hoặc "when". Tránh ngắt quãng và dùng thì đúng (learned, taught). Nên nói rõ ai dạy và việc đó ảnh hưởng thế nào đến bạn.

例: I learned to type in Grade 1 when my teacher showed us basic keys and typing positions. I also practiced at home after watching my mother use the computer, which made it interesting and helped me improve quickly.

提案: Cần cấu trúc câu rõ ràng: bắt đầu với câu chủ đề (I improve my typing by...) rồi nêu các phương pháp cụ thể và kết luận ngắn. Dùng liên từ như "and" hoặc "also" để nối ý. Chú ý chia thì và ngữ pháp (watch videos, the teacher teaches). Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể (luyện tập bao lâu mỗi ngày, phần mềm nào).

例: I improve my typing by watching instructional videos and practising every day. At school, my teacher taught me proper finger placement, and I also use online typing exercises for 15 minutes a day to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I, I refer to handwriting because, uh, it's me monopolize and help me to arrive quickly in many exam, uh, exam test and, uh, can people take?

✓ I prefer handwriting because it helps me finish exams more quickly.

The original sentence has multiple structure issues: incorrect word choice ('refer' -> 'prefer'), unnecessary repetitions and fillers, and awkward phrases ('it's me monopolize', 'arrive quickly in many exam'). Simplify the sentence, use correct verb 'prefer' for expressing preference, and use 'finish exams' to convey completing tests. Suggestion: practice concise sentences and replace incorrect words with appropriate verbs and nouns.

× I use the laptop keyboard because the laptop is small and can bring a lot of plate and make and make it easy to use and convenient. But the desktop is so big I can bring a lot of light and each time so.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard because laptops are small, portable, and convenient. Desktops are big and less easy to carry around.

Problems include incorrect pronoun/word choices ('can bring a lot of plate', 'bring a lot of light') and awkward repetition. Use 'laptop' as countable with article 'a' or plural 'laptops'. Replace unclear phrases with 'portable' and 'easy to carry around'. Suggestion: choose precise vocabulary and keep subject references consistent.

× Uh, I learned to tap on the keyboard when I, uh, learn in Grade 1, the teacher teach me how to use the keyboard and I see my mom use This is very interesting and I learned it.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in Grade 1. The teacher taught me how to use it, and I also saw my mom use it, which I found very interesting.

Mix of tenses: 'learn' should be past 'was in Grade 1', 'teach' should be past 'taught', and 'see' should be 'saw'. Use past tense consistently for past events. Also correct phrase 'type' instead of 'tap' and clarify clauses. Suggestion: identify the time marker (Grade 1) and use past tense verbs throughout.

× I improve my typing, I watch the video how to use the keyboard and I learn. It's my school. The teacher is teach me how to put the right finger on this keyboard and I practice it every day.

✓ To improve my typing, I watch videos about how to use the keyboard and I practice. At school, the teacher taught me how to place the correct fingers on the keyboard, and I practice every day.

Pronoun and verb form issues: 'watch the video how to' should be 'watch videos about how to', 'is teach me' should be past 'taught me'. Maintain parallel structure and correct articles ('the teacher'). Suggestion: use 'to improve' to introduce purpose, plural 'videos' if general, and match tense for past teaching and ongoing practice.