Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer direct and concise: state your preference clearly, give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words, and avoid unclear phrases. Focus on clarity and accurate sentence structure (subject-verb agreement, correct verb forms).

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I can type much faster, which saves me time when taking notes. Also, typed notes are easier to organize and search through later.

提案: Answer directly (desktop or laptop). Use clear reasons and correct pronouns, articles and adjectives. Keep sentences short and logical, use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and specific details (e.g., keyboard layout, comfort).

例: I type on my desktop keyboard every day because it has a comfortable ergonomic design. As a result, my hands don't get tired and I can type faster than on my laptop.

提案: Give a clear time statement and one reason. Use correct past tense and avoid repetition. Organize into 2–3 short sentences: a topic sentence stating when, then a supporting reason with a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

例: I learned to type when I was about ten years old because my mother hoped I might become a programmer. So I started practicing early to build speed and accuracy.

提案: Be specific about methods and give clear, grammatically correct instructions. Use linking words (for example, 'for instance', 'also') and concrete activities (timed practice, accuracy drills, typing tests). Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

例: I improve my typing by practicing every day, using online timed exercises to increase speed and accuracy. For example, I do 10–15 minute drills focused on accuracy and regularly practice typing longer texts to build endurance.

× I think I would refer typing because they give me opportunity to type very fast so I can set my time to grind to note auditing faster than normal handwriting.

✓ I think I would prefer typing because it gives me the opportunity to type very fast, so I can use my time to take notes and review them faster than with normal handwriting.

Errors: 'refer' should be 'prefer' (wrong verb), 'they give me opportunity' should be 'it gives me the opportunity' (subject reference and article), 'set my time to grind to note auditing' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use present simple for habitual preference. Suggestions: use correct verb 'prefer', match subject and verb ('it gives'), include article 'the opportunity', replace awkward phrase with 'use my time to take notes and review them'. Maintain consistent simple present tense for preferences.

× I'm tired on my desktop keyboard every day it green and I very love to tie on it because he is very it specially decide for my hand so I can use it to type freely and very comfortable so I will I can type faster than my laptop.

✓ I type on my desktop keyboard every day. It is green and I really love typing on it because it is especially designed for my hands, so I can type freely and comfortably and thus I can type faster than on my laptop.

Errors: 'I'm tired on' should be 'I type on' (wrong verb). Pronouns and references incorrect: 'it green' needs verb 'is', 'I very love to tie' should be 'I really love typing', 'he is very it specially decide' should be 'it is especially designed'. Use correct pronouns ('it') for keyboard and consistent verb forms. Use adverb 'comfortably'. Suggestions: break into sentences for clarity and use correct pronouns and verb forms.

× I was learn how to pie tie on keyboard when I was 10 years old because my mom want me to be a programmer someday.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was 10 years old because my mom wanted me to be a programmer someday.

Errors: 'was learn' is incorrect; use simple past 'learned'. 'pie tie' is garbled, should be 'type'. 'want' should be past 'wanted' to match 'when I was 10' time frame. Suggestions: use simple past for completed actions in the past and ensure verb forms agree.

× So the first thing I need to learn is try to tie as fast as possible.

✓ So the first thing I needed to learn was to try to type as fast as possible.

Errors: tense mismatch and infinitive/gerund confusion. 'need to learn' should match past context 'needed to learn', and 'try to tie' should be 'try to type' or 'to type quickly'. After 'learn', use the infinitive 'to try' or better 'was to try to type as fast as possible'. Suggestions: keep past tense and use correct infinitive forms.

× Therefore I start to learn to try time very early.

✓ Therefore I started to learn to type early.

Errors: 'start' should be past 'started' to match past narrative; 'try time' is incorrect; use 'type'. 'very early' is wordy; 'early' is sufficient. Suggestions: use simple past 'started' and correct verb 'type'.

× Well, the way I can improve my typing is just practice every day on my keyboard.

✓ Well, the way I can improve my typing is to just practice every day on my keyboard.

Errors: missing 'to' before verb phrase in a noun clause: 'is just practice' should be 'is to just practice'. Maintain present simple for general habits. Suggestion: use infinitive after 'is' when describing the method.

× Keyboard try to try as fast as possible, try to type long literature and be the most accuracy are possible.

✓ I try to type as fast as possible, practice typing long passages, and be as accurate as possible.

Errors: sentence fragment and subject mismatch: 'Keyboard try' should be 'I try'. Redundant 'try to try'. 'long literature' is better 'long passages' and 'the most accuracy are possible' should be 'as accurate as possible'. Suggestions: use correct subject 'I', avoid repetition, use 'as accurate as possible' for comparisons, and choose appropriate nouns like 'passages'.