Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief specific reasons linked with connectors. Avoid repetition and improve vocabulary (e.g., ‘easier’, ‘more comfortable’, ‘fatiguing’).

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's easier and more comfortable for long periods. For example, when I take notes or write essays on my laptop, I can type faster and I don't get hand cramps, so I can work more efficiently.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence and a specific supporting detail using a linking word. Correct small grammar errors and avoid repeating the word ‘laptop’.

例: I type on a laptop every day because I use it to do my homework and study. For instance, I take it to school and cafés, so I can work on assignments wherever I am.

提案: Use correct tense and article/noun forms, and give a slightly more detailed supporting detail. Use a linking word to connect the time with the context.

例: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in elementary school. Back then, we had an IT course that taught us touch-typing, and we practiced regularly using typing games to improve speed.

提案: Respond directly with a topic sentence and give a concrete improvement method with reasons and a short example. Use linking words like ‘however’ or ‘for example’ to make it coherent.

例: I improve my typing mainly by regular practice, although I don't follow a strict plan. For example, I spend 15 minutes a day on an online typing tutor to build speed and accuracy, and as a result I make fewer mistakes.

× I like typing more because typing is more easy and help people feel relaxed and writing for a long time is a bit tired for me.

✓ I prefer typing because typing is easier and helps people feel relaxed, and writing for a long time makes me a bit tired.

Use comparative form 'easier' instead of 'more easy' and add third person singular '-s' on 'help' -> 'helps'. Also replace 'is a bit tired for me' with 'makes me a bit tired' to correctly describe the effect on the subject. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and ensure verbs agree with their subjects. Grammar_problem_type_id:13

× Every day I type on a laptop because I need to finish my homework on laptop.

✓ Every day I type on a laptop because I need to finish my homework on my laptop.

The sentence omits the possessive article/determiner before 'laptop'. Use 'my laptop' to indicate which laptop. Alternatively 'on a laptop' could be used both times, but repetition is clearer with 'my'. Grammar_problem_type_id:22

× I learned type on a keyboard when I was in elementary school.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in elementary school.

After 'learned' use the infinitive 'to type', not the base form alone. Use 'learned to do something'. Grammar_problem_type_id:9

× We had an IT courses that teach us to type.

✓ We had IT courses that taught us to type.

Use plural without 'an' before 'courses' ('an' is singular). Also verb tense should be past 'taught' to match 'had'. Suggestion: match number and tense: 'IT courses' and 'taught'. Grammar_problem_type_id:14

× In fact, I don't have a specific method to improve that.

✓ In fact, I don't have a specific method to improve it.

Use the pronoun 'it' to refer to 'typing' rather than 'that'. The present tense is fine; just replace 'that' with 'it' for clarity. Also consider 'to improve my typing' for greater clarity. Grammar_problem_type_id:6

× Just practice more and you will feel it less stressful to type.

✓ Just practice more and you will find it less stressful to type.

Use 'find' instead of 'feel' in this construction: 'find it less stressful to do something'. 'Feel it less stressful' is not natural. Suggestion: use common collocations like 'find it less stressful'. Grammar_problem_type_id:8