Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct, correct grammar, avoid unnecessary words (like “2”), and give one clear reason followed by a brief supporting detail. Use linking words (because, so) correctly and avoid repetition.

例: I prefer handwriting because I learned to write by hand from an early age and feel more comfortable with it. For example, I can jot down ideas quickly in class and it helps me remember information better.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct articles and tense, and avoid repeating the same phrase. Add a specific supporting detail or short example, connected with a linking word like because or so.

例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and convenient. For instance, I can work on assignments while traveling between home and university.

提案: Use past tense for past events, correct word order, and avoid repetitions. Give a concise time reference, mention what you learned, and include a brief result using linking words (so, and then, as a result).

例: I learned to type in the seventh grade when my teacher gave us lessons in a computer lab. I practiced for about an hour each day, so after several months my speed and accuracy improved significantly.

提案: Respond with a clear topic sentence, use correct adverbials and verb forms, and add a specific method and measurable result. Use linking words such as by, so, and after to connect ideas coherently.

例: I improve my typing by practicing for at least 30 minutes each day using online typing exercises. As a result, after a few weeks my accuracy increased and my words-per-minute rate became noticeably higher.

× I prefer 2 handwriting because it is the most common view of writing.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it is the most common form of writing.

The numeral '2' is incorrect here and should be removed; 'handwriting' does not need a number. 'View' is the wrong noun; 'form' is the correct collocation with 'writing'. This fixes article usage and word choice. Suggestion: remove extraneous characters and use common collocations like 'form of writing'.

× Since I am writing from first class so it is very convenient and fast way of of writing.

✓ Since I have been writing since first grade, it is a very convenient and fast way of writing.

The original mixes present continuous and a time reference incorrectly. Use present perfect progressive or present perfect 'have been writing' for an action continuing from a past time; 'first class' should be 'first grade' or 'first class' depending on dialect, and a determiner 'a' is needed before 'very convenient'. Also remove the redundant 'so' and duplicate 'of'. Suggestion: use 'I have been writing since first grade' to show continuous experience and include appropriate articles.

× I usually type on laptop keyboard everyday because it is more convenient to use and take it everywhere, so I usually write on laptop.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is more convenient to use and easy to take everywhere, so I usually write on my laptop.

Missing articles: 'a laptop keyboard' and 'my laptop' are needed. 'Everyday' as an adjective is wrong here; use the adverb 'every day'. Add 'easy' to complete the idea 'easy to take everywhere'. Suggestion: include articles before singular countable nouns and use 'every day' for frequency.

× I learn in 7th grade my teacher taught me how how to type in in a lab in a keyboard and how to use it and I practice daily for an hour and one day I become expert.

✓ I learned in 7th grade; my teacher taught me how to type in a lab using a keyboard, and I practiced daily for an hour. One day I became an expert.

The actions happened in the past, so past tense forms 'learned', 'taught', 'practiced', and 'became' are required. Remove duplicate words 'how how' and 'in in', and change 'in a keyboard' to 'using a keyboard'. Add the article 'an' before 'expert'. Suggestion: use simple past for completed past actions and proofread to remove duplicates.

× I improve my typing by typing daily, each or a day and after some weeks my accuracy and writing skill has become very fluently.

✓ I improved my typing by typing daily, each day, and after some weeks my accuracy and writing skill became very fluent.

Tense consistency: if referring to past improvements, use past tense 'improved' and 'became'. 'Each or a day' is incorrect; use 'each day' or 'every day'. 'Has become' mixes present perfect with a past time phrase; use 'became' for a past result. 'Fluently' is an adverb; 'fluent' (adjective) is needed to describe 'skill'. Also 'writing skill' is better as 'writing skills' (plural). Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use correct adjective/adverb forms and pluralize when appropriate.