Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 질문에 바로 답한 뒤 이유를 명확하고 간결하게 제시하세요. 문법 오류와 어색한 표현(예: 'write some specifically handwriting', 'power of handwriting was')을 수정하고, 중복 표현을 줄이세요. 응답은 최대 3~4문장으로 유지하고 연결사(for example, because, so)를 자연스럽게 사용하세요. 구체적인 이유(기억에 도움, 창의성 증가 등)를 추가하면 점수가 올라갑니다.

例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember information better and sparks my creativity. For example, when I take notes by hand I tend to organize ideas more clearly, which makes revision easier. So although typing is faster, I usually choose handwriting for learning and planning.

提案: 응답을 더 간결하고 정확하게 하세요. 불필요한 주저(umm)와 반복을 줄이고 단어 형태와 시제를 일치시키세요('I use' 대신 'I used' 혼용 제거). 또한 데스크탑과 노트북을 구분해 구체적으로 설명하면 좋습니다. 연결어(for example, usually, however)를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 이어주세요.

例: I don't use a desktop keyboard every day; I mainly use my laptop instead. In fact, I use my laptop keyboard about five days a week to handle tasks and organize my schedule. Usually I only use a desktop when I need a larger screen.

提案: 시간 표현과 기억을 더 명확하게 하세요. 불명확한 동사(‘started to run’, ‘take computer rest’, 'round keyboarding')와 어색한 구문을 고치고 시제를 일관되게 사용하세요. 한두 문장으로 간단히 연령과 상황(학교 컴퓨터 수업 등)을 설명하면 충분합니다.

例: I learned to type when I was about ten years old during computer lessons at school. At that time our teacher taught us basic typing skills and we practiced on the school keyboards after class.

提案: 과거와 현재를 혼동하지 마세요. 질문은 현재의 개선 방법을 묻고 있으므로 현재 시제로 답하세요. 불필요한 반복('every day', 'to, to')과 어색한 표현을 제거하고 구체적인 방법(연습 사이트, 타이핑 연습, 정확도 향상 방법)을 제시하세요. 문장은 2~3개로 간결하게 유지하세요.

例: To improve my typing now, I practice using online typing programs for twenty minutes a day to increase speed and accuracy. I also focus on exercises that train proper finger placement and try to type without looking at the keyboard.

× Definitely I prefer to write some specifically handwriting because typing sometimes is so practical and so we just to make some contents.

✓ I definitely prefer handwriting because typing is too impersonal and we only use it to produce content.

The original sentence has word order issues, unnecessary words, and incorrect verb forms. 'Definitely I prefer to write some specifically handwriting' is ungrammatical; move adverb 'definitely' before verb and use 'handwriting' as a noun. 'Typing sometimes is so practical' likely intended the opposite meaning; 'so practical' conflicts with preference; 'too impersonal' fits better if preferring handwriting. Remove 'we just to make some contents' and replace with 'we only use it to produce content.' Suggestions: place adverbs near verbs, use nouns correctly, remove redundant words, and ensure intended contrast is clear.

× But in my case I believe the power of handwriting was.

✓ But in my case I believe in the power of handwriting.

The original uses past tense 'was' incorrectly. The speaker is expressing a current belief, so present simple 'believe' should be followed by 'in the power of handwriting.' Remove 'was.' Suggestion: match verb tense when expressing ongoing beliefs; use 'believe in' plus noun phrase.

× I think umm I don't type a desktop keyboard every day, but most days and five almost 5 days on a week I used my keyboard for my task and my arrangements I have to do.

✓ I don't use a desktop keyboard every day, but on most days, almost five days a week, I use my keyboard for my tasks and arrangements.

Errors include wrong verb choice and tense: 'don't type a desktop keyboard' should be 'don't use a desktop keyboard.' 'I used' wrongly uses past tense with present habitual context; use present simple 'I use.' Word order and quantifier phrasing corrected: 'almost five days a week' and plural 'tasks.' Suggestions: use 'use' for employing devices, use present simple for habitual actions, and place frequency expressions ('almost five days a week') in natural positions.

× Actually, I cannot remember specifically, but I remember around 10 years old because at the time I started to run and I start to take computer rest and after my school and I remember, uh, we are so round keyboarding too.

✓ Actually, I can't remember exactly, but I remember being around ten years old because at that time I started using a computer and taking computer classes after school, and I remember that we also learned keyboarding.

Multiple tense and structure problems: 'I cannot remember specifically' is better as 'I can't remember exactly.' 'Remember around 10 years old' requires a gerund: 'remember being around ten years old.' 'Started to run' is incorrect context; likely 'started using a computer.' 'Start to take computer rest' is ungrammatical; replace with 'taking computer classes.' 'We are so round keyboarding too' is nonsensical; correct to 'we also learned keyboarding.' Suggestions: use gerunds after 'remember' for past age, choose verbs matching meaning ('use a computer', 'take classes'), and keep consistent past tense for past events.

× Actually, I practice uh, typing every day when I was about 10 years old because I had computer lesson and my teach my computer teacher make me, uh, to, to do about that everyday for everyday.

✓ Actually, I practiced typing every day when I was about ten years old because I had computer lessons and my computer teacher made me do it every day.

Tense and verb form errors: the speaker refers to a past habit, so use past simple 'practiced.' 'Typing' is fine as gerund. 'Computer lesson' should be plural 'computer lessons.' 'My teach my computer teacher make me, to, to do about that everyday for everyday' has multiple errors: correct to 'my computer teacher made me do it every day.' Remove extra 'to' and use simple past 'made.' Suggestions: use past simple for past routines, pluralize countable nouns, and use correct causative structure 'made me do.'