Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện: Nên trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn và rõ ràng; tránh lặp từ và tiếng ngắt quãng (uh). Chú ý ngữ pháp (more efficient, saves me time) và cấu trúc câu. Sử dụng tối đa 3 câu: câu chủ đề + 1-2 câu hỗ trợ với từ nối hợp lý như 'because' hoặc 'so'.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I use computers and laptops for most of my tasks. Typing is more efficient and saves me a lot of time, so I can finish work faster.

提案: Cải thiện: Trả lời rõ ràng hơn (desktop or laptop) và dùng câu ngắn, tránh từ dư thừa như 'using and utilizing'. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp ('depend on' -> 'depend on'). Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: type essays, emails) để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I use it for studying and work. For example, I write essays and emails on my laptop, which makes typing essential for my daily tasks.

提案: Cải thiện: Cần trả lời trực tiếp về thời điểm học (e.g. as a child, recently) hoặc nếu chưa học hãy nói rõ 'I haven’t learned formal typing'. Tránh cấu trúc sai và từ không đúng ('oriental' sai; có lẽ muốn nói 'opportunity'). Sử dụng ngữ pháp đúng: 'I haven't had a chance to learn formal typing' và giải thích ngắn gọn về lý do.

例: I haven't had a chance to learn formal typing classes yet. I mostly taught myself recently because I had limited time and couldn't attend lessons earlier.

提案: Cải thiện: Trả lời mạch lạc với cấu trúc rõ ràng: nêu phương pháp chính và minh họa cụ thể. Sửa từ vựng (efficiently -> efficient, timing -> typing). Hạn chế tiếng ngắt quãng và dùng liên từ ('for example', 'also'). Nên đưa ra một ví dụ cụ thể: luyện gõ qua phần mềm hoặc thực hành với bài tập tốc độ.

例: I improve my typing mainly by practicing every day on my laptop. For example, I use online typing programs and drills to increase speed and accuracy, and I try to type all my assignments rather than handwriting them.

× Uh, for me, I think I prefer typing more than everything.

✓ For me, I prefer typing to everything else.

The student used 'I think I prefer' and 'more than everything' which is awkward. Use simple present 'I prefer' for habitual preference. Use the correct comparison structure 'prefer A to B' and 'everything else' for clarity.

× Uh, definitely because, uh, nowadays I always use the computer and laptop to do and fulfill the tasks.

✓ Definitely, because nowadays I always use a computer or laptop to do my tasks.

Use simple present 'use' for habitual actions. Use article 'a' before singular countable nouns. Use 'or' instead of 'and' when referring to one of two devices, and 'do my tasks' is more natural than 'fulfill the tasks.'

× So typing is more efficiency and, uh, bring me a lot of, uh, time and you through.

✓ So typing is more efficient and saves me a lot of time.

Use adjective 'efficient' (not noun 'efficiency') to modify 'typing'. 'Bring me time' is awkward; the correct verb is 'save' in this context. Remove unclear fragment 'and you through.'

× Yes, absolutely, because nowadays my study and my work are always depend on using and utilizing all apps and the tools in the computer and laptop.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because nowadays my study and work always depend on using apps and tools on the computer or laptop.

Use present simple 'depend' with plural subject 'study and work'. Avoid redundant verbs 'using and utilizing' — choose one. Use 'on the computer or laptop' rather than 'in.'

× So I always use this device to fulfill my job and my study.

✓ So I always use these devices to complete my work and my studies.

Use plural 'devices' if referring to both computer and laptop, or 'this device' only if one. 'Fulfill my job' is incorrect; use 'complete my work.' Use 'studies' for academic activities.

× Unfortunately I don't have a chance to how to type on the keyboard and I must a learn this skill for myself and I think it's very difficult with, uh, my a limited time and I don't have the oriental to learn.

✓ Unfortunately I didn't have a chance to learn how to type on the keyboard, and I had to teach myself this skill. I found it very difficult because I had limited time and I didn't have the opportunity to learn.

When speaking about past situations, use past tense 'didn't have', 'had to', 'found'. Remove wrong word order 'to how to type' -> 'to learn how to type'. 'Oriental' is incorrect word choice; use 'opportunity'. Use 'limited time' without article 'a' or with 'very limited time'.

× In my opinion, I think one of the most efficiently way to improve my timing is I always use keyboard and always use the laptop every day to do my tasks uh, more Moreover, you can uh uh, learn some tips in the Internet, which is very wide range.

✓ In my opinion, one of the most efficient ways to improve my typing is to use the keyboard and laptop every day to do my tasks. Moreover, you can learn some tips on the Internet, which has a wide range of resources.

Use adjective 'efficient' and plural 'ways' to match 'one of the'. 'Improve my timing' should be 'improve my typing.' Use infinitive 'to use' after 'is'. 'Use the keyboard' needs article 'the' or 'a'. Use preposition 'on the Internet' not 'in.' 'Which is very wide range' -> 'which has a wide range of resources.'