Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more direct, concise and natural. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, so) and a brief example. Avoid redundancy and awkward phrasing like "prefer more" or "more comfortable way."

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and neater. For example, when I take notes during lectures I can type quickly and organize them on my laptop, so I save time and can find information easily.

提案: Answer directly and avoid filler words. State which device you use, give a clear reason and a short specific detail. Use linking words like because or so, and correct phrases like "laptop keyboard" and "I prefer the desktop."

例: I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I find it more comfortable and faster. For instance, the desktop has a full-sized keyboard and better key travel, so I can type long documents without fatigue.

提案: Give a clear time reference and correct grammar. Start with a topic sentence stating when you learned to type, then explain the context briefly and be specific about your ability level now. Replace unclear phrases like "subject of act" with the subject name (e.g., computer class) and avoid contradictory statements without clarification.

例: I learned to type at school when I was about 12 in our computer class, where we practiced typing exercises regularly. However, I still consider myself an intermediate typist because I haven't practiced advanced techniques like touch-typing.

提案: Be concise and use correct grammar. Say how you practice, mention specific methods or tools, use linking words (for example, by, so) and give a measurable detail (time, frequency). Avoid vague phrases like "pure a day."

例: I improve my typing by practicing for about one to two hours every day using online typing tutors and exercises. For example, I spend 30 minutes on accuracy drills and another hour on timed tests, so my speed and accuracy have gradually improved.

× Basically, in daily routine I use typing and handwriting together.

✓ Basically, in my daily routine I use typing and handwriting together.

Missing definite determiner 'my' before 'daily routine' is a possessive adjective requirement in English; add 'my' to indicate whose routine it is. Also word order 'in my daily routine' is natural.

× However, I prefer typing more than handwriting because it doesn't take a lot of time.

✓ However, I prefer typing to handwriting because it does not take a lot of time.

The correct collocation is 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer A more than B'. Also avoid contraction mismatch in formal correction; 'doesn't' -> 'does not' is optional but both are grammatically fine.

× That's why I prefer more comfortable way.

✓ That's why I prefer the more comfortable way.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'more comfortable way' and awkward word order. Use 'the more comfortable way' or better 'the more comfortable option' to make a correct noun phrase.

× Every day I definitely type on desktop because it's more comfortable to me.

✓ Every day I definitely type on a desktop because it is more comfortable for me.

Countable noun 'desktop' needs an article 'a'. Also 'comfortable to me' should be 'comfortable for me' to use correct preposition.

× Umm, to be honest, I don't use laptop of keyboard and even I use it, I just can't type fast in this type of laptop keyboard.

✓ To be honest, I don't use a laptop or a keyboard often, and even if I do, I cannot type quickly on this type of laptop keyboard.

Multiple issues: 'laptop of keyboard' is incorrect — use 'laptop or a keyboard'. Articles 'a' needed before countable nouns. 'Even I use it' should be 'even if I do'. 'Can't type fast' -> 'cannot type quickly' improves adverb form. 'In this type of laptop keyboard' -> 'on this type of laptop keyboard' uses correct preposition.

× Therefore I choose one.

✓ Therefore I choose the desktop.

Pronoun 'one' is vague here; specify 'the desktop' to refer back to previous sentence. Also 'choose' present simple is acceptable for habitual choice.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? Student: I learn type on the keyboard in a school because we have subject of act and in the subject we always work with keyboard.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard at school because we had a subject on typing and in that subject we always worked with the keyboard.

Question asks past event so use past tense 'learned' not 'learn'. Use correct verb pattern 'learned to type' or 'learned typing'. Preposition 'at school' is idiomatic. 'Subject of act' is unclear; likely 'subject on typing'. Also past tense 'had' and 'worked' needed for past habitual actions.

× But even this I don't know how to use it directly.

✓ But even so, I did not know how to use it immediately.

Awkward phrasing: 'even this' unclear — use 'even so'. For past reference match past tense 'did not know'. 'Directly' is odd here; 'immediately' or 'properly' depending on meaning. Specify clearer adverb.

× I improve it by practice every day.

✓ I improve it by practicing every day.

After 'by' use gerund form 'practicing' not the noun 'practice' when indicating the action used to improve.

× For instance, I just sitting in my workplace and pure a day I'm doing about one or two hours practice in my computer and therefore I improve the skill.

✓ For instance, I just sit at my workplace and during the day I do about one or two hours of practice on my computer, and therefore I improve my skill.

Multiple corrections: use base verb 'sit' for present habit. 'In my workplace' -> 'at my workplace'. 'Pure a day' is incorrect; likely 'during the day'. 'I'm doing about one or two hours practice' -> 'I do about one or two hours of practice'. Use 'on my computer' for correct preposition. 'Improve the skill' -> 'improve my skill' or 'improve this skill'.