Part 1
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
受験者
I prefer tapping to handwriting because typing is faster and easier to edit, so I often feel satisfied when I finish a text. For example, when I write ethics or reporters on my laptop, I can rearrange sentence quickly, which helps me be more productivity and sometimes gives me new ideas.
試験官
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
受験者
Yes I do. I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I use my computer to study and practice English, so I often write notes and should access on the screen.
試験官
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
受験者
I learned to type when I was at secondary school. My computer teacher showed us the basic and we practice regularly, so by the time I stopped the university, I could tap quickly and accurately.
試験官
How do you improve your typing?
受験者
Well, I often to watch the video website and to make a comment on the videos, so at that time I can improve my typing, I can write writing many interesting comments.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
スコア: 66.0提案: 句子多处语法和词汇使用不准,表达不够简洁自然。回答可更直接开门见山,然后用一至两句具体细节支持,并注意动词形式、冠词和名词单复数。可以把“tapping”改为“typing”,将“ethics or reporters”换成具体内容(如“essays or reports”),把“be more productivity”改为“more productive”。
例: I prefer typing because it is faster and makes editing easier. For example, when I write essays or reports on my laptop, I can quickly rearrange sentences, which makes my writing more productive and often sparks new ideas.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答应更自然且语句连贯。避免不合适的词语(如“should access on the screen”)。开头可直接肯定,然后说明频率和原因并举一两个具体活动作为支持。注意冠词和固定搭配。
例: Yes, I type on my laptop every day. I use it to study and practice English, so I often type notes, write essays and complete online exercises on the screen.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
スコア: 64.0提案: 时间表达总体清晰,但有语法错误和用词不当(如“the basic”、“we practice”、“stopped the university”及“tap”),需要用正确的时态和词汇。建议用过去完成对比说明进步,并保持句子简短。
例: I learned to type at secondary school. My computer teacher taught us the basics and we practiced regularly, so by the time I left university I could type quickly and accurately.
How do you improve your typing?
スコア: 58.0提案: 答案不够连贯且有重复、语法错误(如“to watch the video website”、“to make a comment”、“write writing”)。应说明具体方法(练习、使用打字软件、做速度和准确性练习等),并用一两句举例说明频率或效果。
例: I improve my typing by watching tutorial videos and leaving comments online. Regularly typing comments and practicing with online typing tests has helped me increase both speed and accuracy.
× I prefer tapping to handwriting because typing is faster and easier to edit, so I often feel satisfied when I finish a text.
✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and easier to edit, so I often feel satisfied when I finish a text.
问题类型:13 和 26(错误用词/副词 与 句子结构错误)。解释:原句用“tapping”但上下文指的是“打字”,应为“typing”。此外句子结构本身没问题,但词汇不准确导致意思错误。建议:记住“type/typing”表示用键盘输入,“tap/tapping”多用于触摸屏或轻拍,使用时根据语境选择正确词汇。
× For example, when I write ethics or reporters on my laptop, I can rearrange sentence quickly, which helps me be more productivity and sometimes gives me new ideas.
✓ For example, when I write essays or reports on my laptop, I can rearrange sentences quickly, which helps me be more productive and sometimes gives me new ideas.
问题类型:13(形容词/副词使用错误)、1(单复数)和26(句子结构)。解释:原句的“ethics or reporters”用词错误,应为“essays or reports”。“sentence”应为复数“sentences”。“be more productivity”中“productivity”为名词,应使用形容词“productive”。建议:区分名词和形容词;注意可数名词的单复数形式。
× Yes I do. I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I use my computer to study and practice English, so I often write notes and should access on the screen.
✓ Yes, I do. I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I use my computer to study and practice English, so I often write notes and access them on the screen.
问题类型:27(主谓一致/句子结构)与11(介词/代词使用)。解释:原句“should access on the screen”结构不正确且多余情态动词“should”。应去掉“should”并用代词“them”指代“notes”,并将介词位置调整为“access them on the screen”。建议:检查是否需要情态动词;使用代词指代前文可数名词并保持动词结构正确。
× I learned to type when I was at secondary school. My computer teacher showed us the basic and we practice regularly, so by the time I stopped the university, I could tap quickly and accurately.
✓ I learned to type when I was at secondary school. My computer teacher showed us the basics and we practiced regularly, so by the time I left the university, I could type quickly and accurately.
问题类型:5(过去时)和13(词形/冠词使用)。解释:动词“practice”应为过去式“practiced”;“the basic”应为复数名词“the basics”;“stopped the university”用法错误,应为“left the university”;“tap”用词不当,改为“type”。建议:注意时态一致(叙述过去事件时用过去式);检查名词单复数和常用固定搭配(leave university/leave the university);使用语境正确的动词(type)。
× Well, I often to watch the video website and to make a comment on the videos, so at that time I can improve my typing, I can write writing many interesting comments.
✓ Well, I often watch videos on websites and make comments on them, so over time I improved my typing and could write many interesting comments.
问题类型:8(不定式/动名词使用错误)、6/5(时态使用)与26(句子结构)。解释:原句中“不定式”误用(“I often to watch”应为“I often watch”);“watch the video website”表达不自然,改为“watch videos on websites”;“to make a comment”改为“make comments”;句末重复“write writing”错误,且时态应与上下文一致(现在习惯改为过去结果或“over time”)。建议:不要把动词前随意加“to”在一般现在时中;避免动词重复;根据语境选择正确时态并保持句子通顺。