Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 内容明确且自然，但答案略长且有重复（如“write very fast”与“hardly make any mistakes”可精简）。建议在开头给出直接观点，然后用1-2个简洁原因支持，使用连接词如“because”或“so”使逻辑更紧凑。此外注意时态和词汇准确性（如“touch the wrong button”可改为“hit the wrong keys”）。

例: I prefer handwriting because I find I can write more quickly and make fewer mistakes. For example, when I handwrite notes I don’t need to look at the keys, so I can keep my thoughts flowing without interruption.

提案: 回答直接且信息充足，但语言可以更简洁、自然。将两部分合为一句主句加一句说明，例如先说明设备类型，再解释原因并使用连接词如“so”或“because”。避免口语填充词（如“OK”）。

例: I type on a laptop every day because I don’t own a desktop. Recently I bought an external keyboard because the laptop’s keys are too stiff for comfortable typing.

提案: 回答点到为止但不够流畅，时态有小问题（“is getting more and more familiar to me every day”应改为过去到现在的连续性表述）。建议用一句话说明时间点，再用一句话概述后来如何进步，使用连接词如“since”或“after that”。

例: I learned to type in primary school during my first computer class. Since then I’ve practiced regularly, so typing has become increasingly natural to me.

提案: 回答有内容但结尾不完整且有语法错误（如时态和短语不自然）。建议结构为一两句：先概述方法（多练习、使用手机等），再举具体做法或结果。注意完成句子并使用合适的连词（e.g. “so”后接过去式结果）。

例: I improved my typing mainly by practicing more frequently. For instance, I used every spare minute to type during computer lessons and later practised on my phone daily, which helped me type much faster.

× I think I like handwriting more than typing because I can write very fast and hardly make any mistakes.

✓ I think I like handwriting more than typing because I can write very fast and hardly make any mistakes.

该句没有第三人称单数动词错误，保留原句。无需修改。

× But when I type I may touch the wrong button and spend more time on expressing myself and that is really annoying.

✓ But when I type, I may press the wrong key and spend more time expressing myself, which is really annoying.

句子结构有两点问题：1) “touch the wrong button”在键盘语境中用“press the wrong key”更自然；2) “spend more time on expressing myself and that is really annoying”连接不够自然，改为“spend more time expressing myself, which is really annoying”使句子结构更清晰流畅。建议在从句和主句之间加逗号，并使用非限定性定语从句‘which…’来承接说明。

× OK, I don't have a desktop so I can only type on my laptop and I have to buy an extra keyboard for it because the original keys are very hard to hit.

✓ OK, I don't have a desktop, so I can only type on my laptop, and I had to buy an extra keyboard for it because the original keys were very hard to press.

原句时态和用词不一致：问题问的是日常情境，学生先说现在没有台式机、平常用笔记本，但随后说“have to buy”显得像将来或必须，现在更自然用过去时说明已经买了（如果是已买）或改为现在完成时；此处假设已购买，改为过去时。另“hard to hit”对键盘按键不够地道，改为“hard to press”。同时在并列句之间加逗号以改进标点和句子结构。建议根据实际情况选择时态（如果尚未买可改为 'so I have to buy an extra keyboard'）。

× I believe it was in primary school when I took my first computer lesson, and from that time typing is getting more and more familiar to me every day.

✓ I believe it was in primary school when I took my first computer lesson, and from that time typing became more and more familiar to me.

第二部分时态不一致：主句回顾过去（'was','took'），因此应使用过去时态描述随后发生的变化，改为 'became'。原句使用现在进行时 'is getting' 与前文过去时间点冲突。建议回顾过去事件时保持过去时一致。

× At first I started with raising the frequency of practicing.

✓ At first I started by increasing the frequency of practice.

原句中 'started with raising' 结构不够地道，常用 'start by doing' 或 'start with something'。此外 'practicing' 在此更自然用名词 'practice'。改为 'started by increasing the frequency of practice' 更符合英语习惯。建议使用固定搭配 'start by + -ing' 或 'start with + 名词'。

× We didn't have many computer lessons at that time, but I just grabbed as much time as I can have to practice typing.

✓ We didn't have many computer lessons at that time, but I just grabbed as much time as I could to practice typing.

时态不一致：句首为过去时 'didn't have'，因此后半句也应使用过去时，'can have' 应改为过去式 'could'。另外 'grabbed as much time as I could' 是固定表达，故改为该形式。建议在叙述过去事情时统一使用过去时。

× Then I got my first phone and I almost typed on it every day so I can type faster and.

✓ Then I got my first phone, and I almost typed on it every day so I could type faster.

句末残缺（以 'and.' 结尾）并且时态不一致：前半为过去时 'got'，接着应使用过去时 'could' 而不是现在时 'can'。删除多余的 'and' 并补全谓语，使句子完整。建议叙述过去习惯时统一使用过去时并确保句子有完整谓语和宾语。