Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and fix basic grammar errors (e.g., "I am good at typing"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much faster and more convenient. For example, when I write emails I can correct mistakes quickly and send them immediately, so it saves me time.

提案: Answer with a clear topic sentence ("I usually use a laptop") and provide a specific reason. Use correct collocations ("bring it everywhere", "write emails") and a linking word like "because". Keep it to two or three sentences.

例: I usually use a laptop because it is portable and convenient. I can bring it everywhere and easily connect to the internet when I need to write emails or study online.

提案: Give a clear time reference and a brief explanation of context. Use correct tense and numbers ("about one year ago") and clear verbs ("learn to type"). Avoid unclear phrases. Use one linking phrase like "when" or "because" if needed.

例: I learned to type about one year ago when I started preparing for the IELTS exam. At that time I practised typing essays regularly to improve my writing speed.

提案: State a clear method and give a specific example of practice. Use correct grammar and avoid filler words. Use linking words such as "by" or "so" to show cause and effect. Keep it to two or three sentences.

例: I have improved my typing by practising daily with online typing tests and correcting my common mistakes. As a result, my speed and accuracy have increased, so I can finish essays faster.

× Personally, I would not go out of my way to say handwriting this e-mail because typing is really convenient and I think that I good at typing.

✓ Personally, I would not go out of my way to handwrite this e-mail because typing is really convenient and I think that I am good at typing.

The student used 'handwriting' (a noun/gerund) where the verb 'handwrite' is required, and omitted the verb 'am' in the clause 'I am good at typing.' Use the correct verb form 'handwrite' and include the appropriate form of the verb 'to be' for the adjective phrase 'good at typing.' Suggestion: replace noun forms with verbs when describing actions and always include the correct form of 'to be' before adjectives describing the subject. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I stand up for laptop because it is convenient and portable so I can bring it in everywhere when I need to work online or try being e-mail.

✓ I prefer a laptop because it is convenient and portable, so I can bring it everywhere when I need to work online or write emails.

The phrase 'stand up for laptop' is incorrect; 'prefer' is the appropriate verb and an article is needed before 'laptop.' 'Bring it in everywhere' is unidiomatic; use 'bring it everywhere.' 'Try being e-mail' is incorrect: the intended meaning is 'write emails.' Also pluralize 'email' to 'emails' when referring generally. Suggestion: use correct verbs ('prefer', 'write') and appropriate articles, and use natural collocations ('bring it everywhere'). Grammar problem type ID:12

× I could try about one years ago tend to studying IELTS and I tried to tie in a brightening essay.

✓ I started about one year ago to study for the IELTS and I tried to write a practice essay.

The original mixes modal 'could', incorrect plural 'years', and ungrammatical phrases 'tend to studying' and 'tie in a brightening essay.' Use simple past 'started' or 'began' to indicate when the action began, singular 'year', the infinitive 'to study' or gerund 'studying' correctly, and correct verb 'write' for 'essay'. 'Practice essay' or 'draft essay' fits the likely meaning. Suggestion: use clear past-tense verbs to state when you began and choose correct verb forms ('study', 'write'). Grammar problem type ID:5

× Uh, from my perspective, the main thing is that I tried a lot of time and learned about my mistake in the past and I, uh, enhance the speed.

✓ Uh, from my perspective, the main thing is that I practiced a lot and learned from my mistakes in the past, and I improved my speed.

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