Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 主要问题：表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱且有重复词（"in in"），用词不准确。建议先给出直接答案的主题句，然后用1–2个简短的句子解释原因并给出具体例子。注意语法（subjects, verbs）和词汇搭配（submit assignments, convenient for teachers）。练习时可先写出要点再口头组织语言。

例: I prefer typing to handwriting. For example, I type my school assignments and submit them online, which makes it easier for teachers to read and grade them quickly.

提案: 主要问题：表达较清楚但有重复和语法错误（"it's it's light than lighter than"），以及小范围词汇错误。建议先用一句话直接回答（I use a laptop），然后用一到两句给出具体原因并用连接词（because, so）使逻辑更连贯。注意比较级用法（lighter than）。

例: I usually use a laptop rather than a desktop because a laptop is lighter and more portable, so I can take it to class or to work easily.

提案: 主要问题：时态与表达不准确（"it's at my six or seven years old"），并有词汇拼写或用法错误（"LED"应为"led"或更自然的表达）。建议用明确的时间点或年龄短语（when I was six or seven），用简单过去时描述学习经历，并补充一两句具体细节（如练习内容或使用的软件）。

例: I learned to type when I was about six or seven years old at primary school. Our computer teacher showed us basic typing exercises and we practiced regularly to improve speed and accuracy.

提案: 主要问题：句子太长且结构混乱，表达不完整（句尾中断），用词不准确（"typing is flow"）。建议先直接回答如何提高（e.g. practice regularly, use typing websites），然后给出具体方法或频率，并用连接词衔接。可以提到具体工具（typing tutors, online tests）和日常练习场景。

例: I mainly improve my typing by practicing regularly online. For instance, I use typing tutor websites and do short daily exercises, and I also type messages and documents every day to build speed and accuracy.

× Well, I think I would like to type in in the users because umm something like our assignment which the doc which the teacher will ask me to type into for submitted.

✓ Well, I think I would like to type in for users because, for example, our assignments which the teacher asks me to type and submit.

句中多处冠词和介词使用不当：1) “type in in the users” 不通顺，应该去掉重复的介词并改为更合适的搭配；2) “the doc which the teacher will ask me to type into for submitted” 冠词和动词形式混乱，应改为“the teacher asks me to type and submit” 或“which the teacher asks me to type and submit”。建议：注意区分定冠词和零冠词的使用，简化重复介词结构，并把动词时态和语态用正确的动词短语表达。

× It's convenient for them to check our assignment.

✓ It's convenient for them to check our assignments.

“assignment” 与上下文指代多项任务时应使用复数，主语与名词数需一致。建议：判断名词是可数且表示多项时使用复数形式。

× Well as our as my daily life I will choose the laptop because for the laptops it's it's light than lighter than the desktop.

✓ In my daily life I choose a laptop because laptops are lighter than desktops.

原句主谓及比较结构混乱：1）时态和人称应保持一般现在时“I choose”；2）比较时使用复数名词且形容词比较级应直接用“lighter than”，不要重复；3）“for the laptops” 冠词不必要。建议：使用一般现在时描述习惯性动作，比较时主语两边形式一致且使用正确的比较级。

× That means I can bring it everywhere I go such as in the class and or in the workplace.

✓ That means I can bring it everywhere I go, such as in class or at the workplace.

介词搭配不当：英语中常说“in class”而不是“in the class”（指上课环境时可省冠词），并且“workplace” 前常用“at”比较合适。建议：学习常见名词固定介词搭配，例如“in class”、“at work/at the workplace”。

× Well, I think it's at my six or seven years old and I study in our primary schools and at that time our computer teachers teach for us these skills and LED us to practice it.

✓ Well, I think I was six or seven years old and I studied at primary school; at that time our computer teachers taught us these skills and led us to practice them.

时态和动词形式错误：1）年龄应使用过去时“was six or seven years old”；2）学校经历应为过去时“studied”；3）过去式和过去式动词正确形式为“taught” 与 “led”；4）“teach for us” 不自然，应为“taught us”；5）“practice it” 指复数技能应为“practice them”。建议：叙述过去事件全部使用过去时，并注意不规则动词的过去式形式与代词的数一致。

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

✓ When did you learn to type on a keyboard?

原句问句本身可接受，但更地道的表达为“learn to do something” 而不是“learn how to do”。这属于时态搭配与固定表达的改进建议。建议：用“learn to + 动词” 更简洁自然。

× To be honest, I didn't have the professional practice in typing things because I think the typing is flow in our daily life such as we communicated with our friend or the workmates on the WhatsApp and something like this social medias when we.

✓ To be honest, I haven't had professional typing practice because typing is common in our daily life, such as when we communicate with friends or colleagues on WhatsApp and other social media.

时态和动词形式问题：1）若指到现在仍然没有，应使用现在完成时“haven't had”；2）“the typing is flow” 用词错误，应为“typing is common” 或 “part of our daily life”；3）动词时态不一致，应把“communicated” 改为现在时“communicate” 与时间状语一致；4）“workmates” 更常用“colleagues”；5）“social medias” 应为不可数“social media”。建议：根据想表达的时间范围选择正确时态（现在完成时或一般现在时），并使用常见搭配如“common in daily life”，“communicate with friends/colleagues on WhatsApp”。