Part 1
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
受験者
I prefer handwriting most of the time. For example, when I reviewing for final exams, I like to write down key points by hand because it helped me. It helps me remember information better and stay focused.
試験官
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
受験者
Not often, actually. In my study time I usually write down the key points by hand, so I don't use desktop particularly I don't use this one.
試験官
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
受験者
I learned how to type on a keyboard during the pandemic because I needed to take online classes. I have to answer the questions that given by teacher in the class.
試験官
How do you improve your typing?
受験者
Well, I believe practice makes perfect. When I first started, typing quickly was very difficult because I used to look at the keyboard a lot. But I trained every day with online typing games, so my typing speed was getting better and faster.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
スコア: 78.0提案: 回答总体清晰但有语法和表达上的小错误与重复。应修正语法(如时态和非限定动词),减少重复信息,增加一两个具体细节(例如用什么笔或如何归纳笔记),并使用连接词使句子更连贯。练习时注意句子长度不超过五句。
例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information and stay focused. For example, when I review for final exams I write key points and draw simple diagrams in a notebook, which makes revision quicker. Moreover, using a coloured pen to highlight main ideas helps me find important information faster.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答含糊且有重复、不连贯的部分。应直接回答问题(桌面或笔记本),并给出简短原因或频率说明。避免重复短语,使用连接词使句子通顺。
例: Not every day. I usually use a laptop when I need to type, but most of the time I write notes by hand, so I don’t use a desktop computer regularly.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
スコア: 72.0提案: 回答基本清楚但时态和语序可改进,部分句子语法不准确。可以更具体说明时间点或过程,并用连接词引出原因或结果。
例: I learned to type during the pandemic when I started taking online classes. Because assignments and in-class activities required quick responses, I practised regularly to improve my typing skills.
How do you improve your typing?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答内容完整、逻辑清楚但有少量时态和词汇重复问题。可以稍微精简并用更恰当的时态和连接词,增加具体细节(如每天练习多久或使用哪些网站)。
例: I improved my typing by practising every day with online typing games like TypingClub for about 20 minutes. At first I struggled because I looked at the keyboard, but gradually I learned touch typing and my speed and accuracy increased.
× I prefer handwriting most of the time. For example, when I reviewing for final exams, I like to write down key points by hand because it helped me. It helps me remember information better and stay focused.
✓ I prefer handwriting most of the time. For example, when I am reviewing for final exams, I like to write down key points by hand because it helps me. It helps me remember information better and stay focused.
错误类型:现在时使用不当(与时态一致性相关)。解释:原句中“when I reviewing”缺少助动词,应为进行时的“when I am reviewing”;“because it helped me”使用了过去时,但句子描述的是通常或习惯性的效果,应使用现在时“helps”。建议:当描述正在发生的动作用现在进行时(am/is/are + -ing),描述习惯性事实用一般现在时(主语 + 动词原形或第三人称单数加 -s)。
× Not often, actually. In my study time I usually write down the key points by hand, so I don't use desktop particularly I don't use this one.
✓ Not often, actually. In my study time I usually write down the key points by hand, so I don't use a desktop much; I don't use this one.
错误类型:介词和冠词使用不当/句子连接问题。解释:原句中缺少不定冠词“a”来修饰“desktop”;“particularly”用法不自然,需要更合适的副词如“much”或用分号连接句子。建议:在可数单数名词前加不定冠词,使用合适副词表达频率,并注意句子连贯性。
× I learned how to type on a keyboard during the pandemic because I needed to take online classes. I have to answer the questions that given by teacher in the class.
✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard during the pandemic because I needed to take online classes. I had to answer the questions that were given by the teacher in the class.
错误类型:过去时使用不当。解释:句子上下文为过去事件,应使用过去时态一致性。原句“I have to answer”是现在时,应改为过去时“had to”;“that given by teacher”缺少被动语态的助动词和冠词,应为“that were given by the teacher”。建议:描述过去发生的动作时,保持过去时一致;被动结构需要适当的be动词和冠词。
× Well, I believe practice makes perfect. When I first started, typing quickly was very difficult because I used to look at the keyboard a lot. But I trained every day with online typing games, so my typing speed was getting better and faster.
✓ Well, I believe practice makes perfect. When I first started, typing quickly was very difficult because I used to look at the keyboard a lot. But I trained every day with online typing games, so my typing speed got better and faster.
错误类型:现在时/过去时一致性问题(现在时错误)。解释:句子描述的是过去事件,结尾应使用简单过去时“got”而不是过去进行时“was getting”,以保持时态一致并表明结果完成。建议:回顾过去经历时尽量使用简单过去时来陈述事实性的变化或结果。