Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子有语法和表达错误，需注意时态和主谓一致，并避免重复和口头禅。回答应更简洁，先给出直接回答，然后用一到两句具体理由支持（如速度、准确性、个性化），并用连接词使逻辑更清晰。可练习把非正式词如“uh”“umm”删去。

例: I prefer handwriting because I find it faster and more accurate for me. Moreover, handwriting feels more personal and shows individual style, which typing often lacks.

提案: 句子中存在语法错误（如动词形式、从句不完整）和混乱的表达。回答应先直接说每天用哪种设备，然后具体说明用途并用连接词连接，例如 because / so / for example。避免断句和不完整从句。

例: I use my laptop keyboard every day because it lets me send emails, complete assignments and attend online lectures. For example, I often type emails to my professors and finish coursework on my laptop.

提案: 回答比较清楚但有语法和措辞问题（例如“got access to typing”“to testing”）。建议使用更自然的表达（e.g. “learned to type”），并用过去时讲清时间线，最后一句用连贯的结果说明练习的效果。

例: I learned to type when I was about seven, after I got my first smartphone and practiced texting with friends. At first I was slow and made many mistakes, but with regular practice my speed and accuracy improved.

提案: 思路明确但表达欠流畅，注意时态和连贯性，例如用 present perfect 或 present simple 描述长期习惯。避免拆句和不必要的重复，使用连接词如 "since", "so", "as a result" 来加强逻辑。可举具体练习方法（打字练习网站、定时练习）提升内容具体性。

例: I improve my typing mainly by daily practice. Since I got my first smartphone I have been typing almost every day to message friends and look up information, and as a result my speed and accuracy have steadily improved.

× Well, I prefer handwriting more.

✓ Well, I prefer handwriting.

句子多余使用了 more。动词 prefer 已表示偏好，不需要在可数/不可数名词后再接 more。建议去掉 more，使表达自然。

× The reason is that I am not really get used to the typing on the keyboard on my laptop.

✓ The reason is that I am not really used to typing on my laptop keyboard.

原句时态和固定搭配使用错误。短语 get used to 后应接动名词（typing）或名词，并且在被动/状态表达中用 be used to。建议用 'am not really used to typing' 并将 'on the keyboard on my laptop' 简化为 'on my laptop keyboard'。

× Uh, it's not as fast as I write it on the paper.

✓ Uh, it's not as fast as I write on paper.

在泛指纸张时不加定冠词 the，且不需要 write it on the paper 中的 it。建议使用 write on paper。

× Sometimes it's not very accurate.

✓ Sometimes my typing isn't very accurate.

原句的主语不明确，可能指 'it'（打字）更清晰应写作 'my typing' 或 'it' 明确指 typing。建议写成 'my typing isn't very accurate'。

× I mean that everyone owns their own uniqueness.

✓ I mean that everyone has their own uniqueness.

动词 own 在此语境中不自然，通常用 have 表示“拥有特质”。此外 everyone 后接的代词 their 可接受但更自然为 'has their own uniqueness'。

× Although I prefer handwriting more, I still typing on the keyboard of my laptop every single day.

✓ Although I prefer handwriting, I still type on my laptop keyboard every single day.

动词形式错误，should be 'type' 不带 -ing。并且同样去掉多余的 more，以及简化 'on the keyboard of my laptop' 为 'on my laptop keyboard'。

× The reason is that my laptop combines many functions, including sending e-mail to my professors, uh, finish my assignments and sometimes I use my laptop to have lectures in this case.

✓ The reason is that my laptop has many functions, including sending e-mails to my professors, finishing my assignments, and sometimes attending lectures on it.

combine 多用于事物合并，不如 have 表达功能。列举时每项应一致（动名词形式），因此使用 'sending', 'finishing'。最后一句意图是通过笔记或参加讲座，表达为 'attending lectures on it' 更自然。建议保持并列结构一致。

× Who practiced my? Typing skills more.

✓ It helped me practice my typing skills more.

原句是残句且语序混乱，应完整表达 '它帮助我更多地练习打字技能'。建议使用完整的主语 'It' 和谓语结构，使句子通顺。

× The first time I got access to typing might be when I was seven years old.

✓ The first time I got access to typing was when I was seven years old.

使用 might 与具体时间点不搭配且使句子模糊。叙述过去事实时用过去时 'was' 更恰当。

× At that time I just got my first smartphone to testing with friends and learned how to type.

✓ At that time I had just got my first smartphone to test with friends and learned how to type.

不定式 to testing 应为 to test 或用动名词 testing 时结构不同。此外时态应为过去完成/过去时，使用 'had just got' 或 'just got' 更自然。建议用 'to test with friends'。

× On at that time, at the beginning it was very slow and I also made lot of mistakes.

✓ At that time, at the beginning I was very slow and I also made a lot of mistakes.

多余的 'On' 应去掉；'made lot of mistakes' 缺少不定冠词 a。并且 'I was very slow' 比 'it was very slow' 更清楚地指人的打字速度。

× I found that practicing more I will use.

✓ I found that by practicing more I would improve.

原句不完整且时态不当。'I found that' 后通常接过去时或条件式，且需要完整的结果 'I would improve' 或 'I would get faster'。建议用 'by practicing more I would improve'。

× I believe that practicing is the only way to improve my typing skills.

✓ I believe that practice is the only way to improve my typing skills.

practicing 作动名词可以，但名词 practice 更简洁自然。两者均可，改为 practice 以更口语化。

× Since I got my first smartphone, I began to type almost a single day, no matter use the smartphone to access to my friends or search.

✓ Since I got my first smartphone, I began to type almost every day, whether to contact my friends or to search for information.

'a single day' 用法错误，应为 'every day'。'no matter' 搭配不当，改为 'whether'。动词不定式结构保持一致： 'to contact' 和 'to search for'。此外 'access to my friends' 错误，应为 'contact my friends' 或 'access my friends'（不常用）。

× Information. I also need my typing skills in this case.

✓ Information. I also need my typing skills for that.

句子断裂，'Information.' 单独成句不完整。将其和前句合并或改为 'search for information'。'in this case' 用法生硬，改为 'for that' 或 'in that situation' 更自然。

× The more I use, the faster I developed.

✓ The more I use it, the faster I become.

时态和搭配错误。若描述一般现在习惯应使用现在时：'The more I use it, the faster I become' 或 'The more I used it, the faster I became'（过去）。原句 'developed' 为过去式，与 'the more I use'（现在）时态不一致。建议时态一致。