Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your sentences grammatically correct, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and a brief supporting detail. Avoid redundant phrasing and tense errors (use present perfect or simple past appropriately).

例: I prefer handwriting. I have written by hand since elementary school, so I'm more comfortable organising my thoughts on paper and find it easier to remember information when I write it by hand.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise reasons using linking words. Correct subject-verb agreement and remove repetitions. Use precise vocabulary (portable, convenient).

例: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable and convenient. For example, I can work in cafes or at university, and the laptop’s keyboard and touchpad make it easy to edit documents on the move.

提案: This answer is mostly clear but needs minor grammar fixes and more natural phrasing. Use accurate time expressions and avoid small article errors. You can add a brief supporting detail about how you practised to show development.

例: I started learning to type in junior high school. I practised regularly for many years, and now after about 30 years of use typing feels automatic and fast for me.

提案: Be specific and correct vocabulary; give a clear example and avoid invented or incorrect words. Use linking words (for example, for instance) and correct article use. Mention measurable practice and types of exercises (accuracy drills, timed tests).

例: I improve my typing by practising online for short periods every day because consistency builds speed and accuracy. For example, I do timed typing tests and accuracy drills on a typing website for 15 minutes each morning to focus on common words and reduce errors.

× I prefer handwriting because I had been handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I have been writing by hand.

The original uses past perfect continuous 'had been handwriting' incorrectly. The speaker is describing an experience that started in the past and continues to the present, so present perfect continuous 'have been writing' is appropriate. Also 'handwriting' as a verb is incorrect; use 'writing by hand'.

× I had been writing by hand since I entered the in the elementary school, so I'm good at writing by hand.

✓ I have been writing by hand since I entered elementary school, so I'm good at handwriting.

Use present perfect continuous 'have been writing' for an action that began in the past and continues. Remove the extra 'the' before 'elementary school' (no article for general school level). 'Writing by hand' can be shortened to 'handwriting' for natural phrasing.

× I usually type on laptop because desktop don't carry to the outside, but laptop laptop allow me to carry outside and it I find it easier to control about writing and working.

✓ I usually type on a laptop because a desktop is not easy to carry outside, but a laptop allows me to take it with me and I find it easier to control my writing and work.

Multiple pronoun and noun form errors: include articles ('a laptop', 'a desktop'). Subject-verb agreement: 'desktop don't' should be 'a desktop is not' or 'desktops don't'. Redundant 'laptop laptop' removed. 'Allow me to carry outside' is awkward; use 'allows me to take it with me'. 'Control about writing and working' should be 'control my writing and work'.

× I started learning to type when I was a junior high school student.

✓ I started learning to type when I was in junior high school.

Add 'in' before 'junior high school' for correct prepositional usage. The past tense 'started' is appropriate; simplifying the phrase makes it more natural.

× I have practiced the regularly for about 30 years, so typing has become easy and automatic for me.

✓ I have practiced regularly for about 30 years, so typing has become easy and automatic for me.

Remove the extra definite article 'the' before 'regularly'. 'Have practiced' with 'for about 30 years' is present perfect and appropriate for ongoing practice.

× I think the best way to improve my typing is to practice regularly using online typing exercises because consistency helps build speed and accuracy.

✓ I think the best way to improve my typing is to practice regularly using online typing exercises because consistency helps build speed and accuracy.

This sentence is correct. It uses the gerund 'practicing' idea correctly and present tense for general truth. No change needed.

× For example, a user typing website for 15 minutes each day to practice common, wise and durious.

✓ For example, I use an online typing website for 15 minutes each day to practice common words, punctuation, and drills.

Original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect or unclear words ('wise and durious'). Reframe as a complete sentence with subject and verb: 'I use an online typing website'. Replace unclear items with typical practice targets such as 'common words, punctuation, and drills'. Ensure parallel structure and clarity.