Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子结构需更自然、简洁；避免填充词（如“umm”）；可以加一两句具体原因或对比来丰富细节，并使用连词连接观点。例如说明速度、记忆或表达的差异。

例: I prefer handwriting because I'm not very fast at typing. Handwriting feels more convenient when I want to record ideas quickly, and I find that writing by hand helps me remember things better than typing.

提案: 回答语法和时态有误，句子不够连贯，注意使用完整句并去掉疑问语气开头；补充具体细节（例如性能、键盘类型、舒适性）并用连词连接观点。

例: I usually type on a desktop keyboard because I enjoy gaming and desktops offer better performance. Also, I can choose different types of mechanical keyboards that are more comfortable and responsive for long sessions.

提案: 回答总体明确但口语化填充词较多；可更精确地给出时间或年级，并用连词使句子更流畅，补充具体例子（如学了哪些技能或练习）。

例: I learned to type in primary school, probably around age eight, because we had a weekly computer class. In those lessons we practiced typing with simple software that taught us the correct finger positions and basic words.

提案: 内容清楚但语法不准确，时态和动词形式需修正；可以说明更多具体的方法（例如练习软件、指法练习、练习时间）并用连词连接原因和结果。

例: I haven't practiced typing formally; mostly I improve it by playing games and texting friends. However, if I wanted to get better I would use online typing tutors and practice for 15 minutes a day to build speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because I'm not that good at typing, so when I try to record something that appears in my head, umm, handwriting is more convenient to me.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I'm not very good at typing, so when I try to record something that comes into my head, handwriting is more convenient for me.

句中有现在时用法和词搭配问题："not that good" 可更自然地说成 "not very good"；"appears in my head" 用法不够地道，常用表达是 "comes into my head"；"convenient to me" 应为 "convenient for me" 因为 convenient 后接介词 for 表示对某人方便。建议多读原版例句，注意固定搭配和常用短语。

× Will I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I love playing games and desktops ability performance is greater and I can buy lot kind of keyboard?

✓ I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I love playing games; desktop performance is better and I can buy many kinds of keyboards.

原句错误地用疑问句形式 "Will I type"，但回答应为陈述句，表示习惯性的现在时，应用一般现在时 "I type"（或 "I usually type"）。另外，"desktops ability performance is greater" 语序和词语搭配错误，改为 "desktop performance is better"；"I can buy lot kind of keyboard" 数量词和名词复数错误，改为 "many kinds of keyboards"。建议学习一般现在时用于习惯动作、注意形容词和名词复数形式以及固定搭配。

× Well, in my primary school I guess because at that time we have computer class each week and uh, the content is to teach us using apps to type.

✓ Well, in primary school, I think, because at that time we had computer class every week, and the content was teaching us how to use apps to type.

句中时态混用：谈过去经历应使用过去时，"we have" 应为 "we had"；后半句也应用过去时 "the content was"。另外，表达更自然为 "teaching us how to use apps to type"。建议在描述过去事件时统一使用过去时，并注意动词不定式和动名词结构的区别。

× I haven't tried to improve my typing on purpose, I just playing games and when I had to text to other people I will type.

✓ I haven't tried to improve my typing on purpose; I just play games, and when I need to text other people I type.

句中时态和动词形式错误："I just playing games" 应为一般现在时 "I just play games"（表示习惯）；"when I had to text" 用过去时不符合语境，改为现在时 "when I need to text"；"I will type" 不自然，改为一般现在时 "I type"。另外，句子可用分号或连词分隔。建议在描述习惯时使用一般现在时，注意动词时态一致性和动词的正确形式。