Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện: Tránh lặp từ và câu thiếu rõ ràng. Bạn nên mở đầu trực tiếp với quan điểm, dùng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ "prefer" thay vì "a big fan of") và giải thích nguyên nhân cụ thể hơn. Hạn chế tiếng ồm ực (hesitation) và câu quá dài. Nên dùng tối đa 3-4 câu, mạch lạc.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For quick notes and messages, I usually use my phone since it’s always with me. However, for planning or creative tasks I sometimes choose handwriting because it helps me think more clearly.

提案: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời tốt nhưng có tiếng lấp lửng và thông tin có thể cụ thể hơn. Nên nêu rõ tần suất và lý do cụ thể, dùng từ vựng phù hợp ("desktop" rõ ràng), bỏ tiếng ồm ực. Giữ câu ngắn gọn, tối đa 3 câu.

例: I type on my desktop almost every day to complete my university English exercises because the larger screen and full keyboard make studying more efficient. I also find it more comfortable for long typing sessions than my phone.

提案: Cải thiện: Tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp thời gian hợp lý (say tuổi theo thứ tự). Nên trả lời trực tiếp với mốc thời gian rồi mô tả ngắn cách bạn học (ví dụ lớp học, tự học). Dùng từ vựng chính xác như "around" và tránh lặp "really small"/"as a beginner".

例: I learned to type when I was around seven or eight years old. My school offered basic computer lessons, so I learned touch-typing fundamentals and practiced with simple exercises.

提案: Cải thiện: Trả lời lặp và thiếu cấu trúc. Nên nêu phương pháp cụ thể (bài tập, phần mềm luyện gõ, tập luyện có mục tiêu), tần suất ghi rõ và kết quả mong muốn. Tránh tiếng nặng như "umm". Giữ 2-3 câu rõ ràng.

例: I improve my typing by practicing daily with online typing exercises and timed tests. I usually spend about two to three hours a day focusing on accuracy and speed, and I track my progress with weekly typing tests.

× I would say that I am a big fan of typing, especially on the mobile because it's really small and it enables me to have a comfort zone.

✓ I would say that I am a big fan of typing, especially on mobile phones because they are really small and they enable me to have a comfortable zone.

Sử dụng tính từ/adverb không chính xác và tham chiếu đại từ không phù hợp. 'the mobile' is unnatural; use 'mobile phones' or 'on mobile' and match plurality with pronoun 'they'. 'comfort zone' requires adjective 'comfortable' to modify 'zone'. Suggestions: use 'mobile phones' or 'on mobile devices', change 'it's' to 'they are' (plural), and use 'comfortable' before 'zone'.

× I type almost every day for my UH English exercises on my desktop because uh, I think it's really convenient and comfortable for my studying.

✓ I type almost every day for my UH English exercises on my desktop because I think it is really convenient and comfortable for my studying.

Lỗi về mạo từ và phong cách: remove filler 'uh' and use 'it is' instead of contraction for clarity. 'for my studying' is acceptable but 'for studying' or 'for my studies' is more natural. Suggestion: say 'convenient and comfortable for my studies'.

× I would say that I learned to type on a basic keyboard when I was really small, when I was about 8 or 7 years old, and at that time I was taught to type as a beginner.

✓ I learned to type on a basic keyboard when I was very young, around seven or eight years old, and at that time I was taught the basics of typing.

Lỗi thì và trật tự số: use simple past 'learned' is fine; improve clarity by ordering ages 'seven or eight' and replace 'when I was really small' with 'very young'. 'taught to type as a beginner' is awkward; better 'taught the basics of typing'. Suggestion: use clearer age order and concise phrasing.

× As I mentioned above, I learned to type when I was really small, so at that time I have to improve my typing. Umm, everyday. Like uh, I type about two or three hours a day just to improve my speed.

✓ As I mentioned above, I learned to type when I was very young, so I had to improve my typing then. Every day, I type for about two or three hours just to improve my speed.

Lỗi thì hiện tại/ quá khứ và trật tự câu: 'so at that time I have to improve' mixes past context with present tense; use past 'had to'. 'Everyday' (adjective) should be 'Every day' (adverbial phrase). Remove fillers 'Umm, uh'. Suggestion: align tense consistently and use 'Every day, I type for about...'.