Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문장구조와 단어 선택이 많이 혼동되어 의미 전달이 불명확합니다. 먼저 명확한 주제 문장으로 시작하고(예: I prefer typing.), 그 이유를 간결하게 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 연결어(so, because)를 올바르게 사용하고 오타나 잘못된 단어(예: “fight”, “Android clean”)를 고치세요. 발음 오류가 있는 경우 간단한 단어부터 천천히 연습해 자연스럽게 발화하세요.

例: I prefer typing. It is more convenient for me and I can type faster than I can write by hand, so I usually use a keyboard for most tasks.

提案: 응답이 반복적이고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 간단한 주제문으로 시작한 뒤 구체적으로 데스크탑인지 노트북인지, 빈도(예: every day, five days a week)를 명확히 말하세요. 숫자 표현과 시제를 정확히 사용하고 불필요한 반복(“I I”)을 제거하세요.

例: Yes, I use my laptop every day. I usually work on it five days a week for study and work-related tasks.

提案: 연결이 되지 않는 단어와 문장 때문에 의미가 전혀 전달되지 않습니다. 나이와 장소를 먼저 밝히고, 구체적 배경(예: computer class at school, self-taught)으로 부연하세요. 간단한 문장으로 명확하게 말하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I learned to type when I was about ten years old at elementary school. We had a basic computer class where the teacher taught us keyboard skills.

提案: 내용은 대체로 이해되지만 문장들이 단편적이고 중복이 많습니다. 시간을 표현할 때는 한 문장으로 연결하고 이유와 방법(what you practiced, which exercises or websites) 등을 구체적으로 설명하세요. 연결어를 자연스럽게 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드세요.

例: When I was 16, during the coronavirus lockdown, I had to stay at home and felt bored, so I practiced typing regularly. I used online typing games and exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer to. Fight, because fighting is very convenient and I can type faster than Android clean, so I usually use it.

✓ I prefer typing, because typing is very convenient and I can type faster on a laptop, so I usually use it.

The sentence has incorrect and inconsistent pronoun and noun usage; 'prefer to' requires an object or verb (prefer typing), 'Fight' and 'fighting' are wrong words likely from mistranscription and should be 'typing', and 'Android clean' is incorrect — 'on a laptop' or 'on Android' should be used. Fix by using a consistent noun and correct preposition 'on'.

× Yes, I usually take my laptop every day so I think I I need to take the most. I open 5 days on my laptop.

✓ Yes, I usually take my laptop every day, so I think I use it the most. I use my laptop five days a week.

Pronouns and verbs are misused: 'take' is awkward for 'use' in this context and repeated 'I' is a duplication. 'I open 5 days on my laptop' is ungrammatical; use 'five days a week' and 'use' to describe frequency.

× 10 years old in the elementary school I'm from fighting round about fighting tea brief because I take a fledge which is.

✓ I was ten years old and in elementary school when I learned, because I took a computer class.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains many incorrect words. To fit the past context ('When did you learn...') use past tense 'was' and 'learned'. Replace unclear phrases with a plausible correction 'took a computer class'.

× And when I was 16 years old. There are there is a period of coronavirus, so I have to stay at home. So I was very bored, bored. So I practice.

✓ When I was 16 years old, during the coronavirus period I had to stay at home, so I was very bored and practiced typing.

Tense inconsistency: mix of present 'are there is' and past 'was'. Use past tense throughout to match 'When I was 16 years old'. Combine fragments into one sentence and use past continuous or simple past ('had to stay', 'was', 'practiced') for clear sequence. 'Practice' should be past 'practiced'.