Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 简洁性与流利度需改进；避免重复与犹豫词，开头应直接给出明确主题句，然后用1–2句具体理由支持，使用连接词使表达更连贯。例如去掉重复“I really I really”以及多余的停顿。可补充具体场景（工作或出差）来丰富内容。

例: I prefer typing nowadays because it’s more convenient and portable. For example, I can type emails and reports on my laptop while commuting or working remotely. In contrast, handwriting needs paper and pens, so I only use it for quick notes.

提案: 减少填充词（uh, um, 'cause）并避免重复信息；应先给出直接答案句，然后用一两句具体细节支持，使用连接词使逻辑清晰，例如说明公司提供设备和在家使用频率。

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my company provided me with a work laptop. I rarely use my personal laptop at home, so most of my typing is done on the company machine.

提案: 答案总体清楚，但要减少犹豫与纠正（uh, I guess, I got I have gotten）；可以用一到两句具体细节说明如何学习或练习，比如课堂练习或课后练习。注意连贯表达时态一致。

例: I learned to type in primary school, around third grade, when our class started using computers. From then on I practiced regularly during computer lessons and gradually became comfortable with the keyboard.

提案: 回答不完整且断句多，需在五句内把方法具体化并完整表达。先给出概括性主题句，然后列举1–2个具体方法并说明效果，避免未完结句和重复。

例: I have tried several methods to improve my typing, mainly to increase speed. At first I learned touch-typing using all ten fingers through online lessons, and then I practised with timed typing tests to build accuracy and speed.

× I prefer typing nowadays. I really I really do handwriting now because uh, typing is more convenient and you can do it everywhere you want.

✓ I prefer typing nowadays. I really don't do handwriting now because typing is more convenient and you can do it everywhere.

原句中“I really I really do handwriting now”结构混乱且缺少否定。应使用副词和动词短语正确搭配：'do handwriting' 不自然，应该用 'do handwriting' 的否定形式 'don't do handwriting' 或更自然的表达 'don't handwrite'。同时去掉重复的“I really”。建议使用 'I really don't handwrite now' 或 'I really don't do handwriting now'。

× Especially it is useful for me to do my job.

✓ Especially, it is useful for me for my job.

原句中介词短语使用不当。应使用 'useful for' + 宾语，'to do my job' 在此上下文不太自然。更自然的表达是 'useful for my job' 或 'useful to me in my job'。建议使用 'Especially, it is useful for my job.' 或 'Especially, it is useful to me in my job.'。

× But handwriting it requires some writing tools such as paper and pens.

✓ But handwriting requires some writing tools such as paper and pens.

原句中多余的代词 'it' 导致语法错误。'Handwriting' 本身作为名词主语，无需再加 'it'。应直接使用 'Handwriting requires...'。建议删除多余 'it'。

× I type on laptop keyboard every day 'cause, uh, my company has given me an, uh, a laptop to do my work and I rarely use my own laptop, which is laptop at home.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my company has given me a laptop to do my work, and I rarely use my own laptop at home.

原句缺少不定冠词 'a'；'laptop keyboard' 前需加冠词 'a'。口语缩写 ' 'cause' 改为 'because' 更书面；'which is laptop at home' 结构错误，应改为 'my own laptop at home'。此外可合并逗号连接两个并列分句。建议：'I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my company has given me a laptop to do my work, and I rarely use my own laptop at home.'。

× I began to type on the keyboard when I was, uh, in primary school. I guess it was in grade 3 when I started to use computer at school and uh, from then on I got I have gotten used to using keyboard.

✓ I began to type on the keyboard when I was in primary school. I guess it was in grade 3 when I started to use computers at school, and from then on I have gotten used to using the keyboard.

原句时态和词形混用：'got I have gotten' 是错误的双重时态；应使用现在完成时 'have gotten used to' 表示从过去持续到现在的习惯。'use computer' 应为复数 'use computers' 或加 'the'；'using keyboard' 前应加定冠词 'the keyboard'。建议使用 'I have gotten used to using the keyboard.'。

× Umm, I have. I have tried lots of ways to improve my typing, especially the speed of typing. At first I tried to type by using my 10 fingers, but uh, gradually I learned to.

✓ Umm, I have. I have tried lots of ways to improve my typing, especially my typing speed. At first I tried to type using all ten fingers, but gradually I learned to touch-type.

原句中 'the speed of typing' 冗长且不自然，改为 'my typing speed' 更简洁；'type by using my 10 fingers' 不地道，通常说 'use all ten fingers' 或 'touch-type'。句末 'gradually I learned to.' 不完整，需补全动词 'touch-type' 或 'type properly'。建议学习并使用动词 + -ing 结构 'improve my typing' 和更自然的短语 'touch-type'。