Part 1
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
受験者
I prefer typing since I think typing is more fast and actually I think typing is a quite confident things to me.
試験官
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
受験者
Not actually I oh sometimes I may type type the keyboard on my phone since I use my phone more than my laptop.
試験官
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
受験者
I was learned how to type on a keyboard in my secondary school since my teacher think typing is the one the one of the skills which people need must need to learn. So I have learned.
試験官
How do you improve your typing?
受験者
I improve my typing by when I have my spare time, I have the exercise in my laptop.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
スコア: 55.0提案: 用更自然、简洁的句子直接回答问题,注意语法(时态、词形和冠词)和词汇搭配。可以先说偏好,再给出1-2个具体原因并用连接词衔接,控制在最多五句内。避免重复词(如“think”重复)、错误搭配(“more fast”应为“faster”)。
例: I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and more convenient for me. For example, I can edit and share documents quickly on my computer. Also, typing helps me keep neat, readable notes.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
スコア: 45.0提案: 回答要明确并且连贯,避免口头填充词(如“oh”)和重复(如“type type”)。可以先给出直接回答,然后用一两句话说明频率和原因,注意句子结构和词序。
例: Not every day. I usually type on my phone because I use it more than my laptop for messaging and quick notes. I only use a laptop when I need to write longer documents.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
スコア: 40.0提案: 注意语法(过去时和被动/主动语态)、简洁表达,并去掉重复。先直接回答时间点,再说明原因与背景,使用连词使句子通顺。避免多余词汇和重复短语。
例: I learned to type in secondary school when we had computer lessons. My teacher emphasized that typing is an essential skill, so we practiced regularly during class.
How do you improve your typing?
スコア: 48.0提案: 回答要具体说明方法并保持语法正确。先说常用的方法,然后给出细节或频率,使用连接词使表达更连贯。避免混乱的从句(如“by when I have my spare time”)。
例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly on typing websites and doing timed exercises on my laptop. In my spare time I do 10–15 minute drills every day to increase my speed and accuracy.
× I prefer typing since I think typing is more fast and actually I think typing is a quite confident things to me.
✓ I prefer typing since I think typing is faster, and actually I think typing gives me confidence.
此句错误主要在形容词/副词使用和名词搭配。'more fast' 是错误比较级形式,正确应为 'faster'。'a quite confident things to me' 语法混乱:'confident' 描述人,而不是事物;应改为动词短语 'gives me confidence' 或将 'confident' 用于人称。建议使用比较级和合适的名词或动词结构:'faster' 和 'gives me confidence'。
× Not actually I oh sometimes I may type type the keyboard on my phone since I use my phone more than my laptop.
✓ Not really. Oh, sometimes I may type on my phone's keyboard since I use my phone more than my laptop.
此句错误主要是介词使用及词序问题。正确搭配是 'type on (the) keyboard',不能说 'type the keyboard'。另外表示所属关系用 'phone's keyboard' 更自然。句首 'Not actually' 应改为 'Not really' 更口语、地道。建议复习动词+介词搭配,如 'type on' 和所有格用法。
× I was learned how to type on a keyboard in my secondary school since my teacher think typing is the one the one of the skills which people need must need to learn. So I have learned.
✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard in secondary school because my teacher thought typing was one of the skills people must learn, so I have learned it.
此句存在过去时使用错误和时态混用:不能说 'I was learned',应用简单过去 'I learned'。从句中主句为过去背景,用过去时 'thought' 和 'was'。'the one the one of the skills' 是重复,应为 'one of the skills'。'must need to learn' 也有冗余,保留 'must learn'。最后可用现在完成 'I have learned it' 表示至今已学会。建议理清主句与从句时间,学习常用时态用法(简单过去与现在完成)。
× I improve my typing by when I have my spare time, I have the exercise in my laptop.
✓ I improve my typing by practising on my laptop when I have spare time.
此句结构混乱:'by when I have my spare time, I have the exercise in my laptop' 既混用 'by' 引导方式,又有独立时间状语从句,且 'have the exercise in my laptop' 用法不自然。更自然的表达是 'improve ... by practising on my laptop when I have spare time'。建议学习 'improve by + -ing' 结构以及时间状语的正确位置。