Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more direct and clear. Start with a concise topic sentence stating your preference, then add one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases (e.g., “colleague homeworks,” “keep my notebooks”).

例: I prefer typing to handwriting. For example, when I study or do assignments I use my laptop because it is faster and easier to organize notes. Also, typed notes are easier to edit and share with classmates.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and one specific reason with correct grammar. Use linking words (because, so) and avoid vague or broken phrases. Mention exactly what kind of work you do and how the laptop helps.

例: I type on a laptop every day because I need to work on documents and emails while commuting. Because my schedule is busy, a laptop lets me work from different places and saves time.

提案: Answer directly with a simple time reference, then give one or two clear supporting details. Fix grammar (use past tense and correct nouns) and avoid awkward phrases like “primary score.” Use linking words such as “when” or “because.”

例: I learned to type when I was about eight years old at primary school. I enjoyed learning new skills, and practicing on a desktop helped me become more confident and faster.

提案: Give a clear method and a specific example of practice. Correct incorrect or odd words (e.g., “a cooker”) and use linking words (so, for example). Mention frequency and measurable goal if possible.

例: I improve my typing by practicing on a typing app for 20 minutes every day. For example, I use typing tests to track my words-per-minute and focus on accuracy exercises to reduce errors.

× I usually prefer typing when I do my colleague homeworks or study something because I usually keep my notebooks and it's more convenient to study with that laptop then handing my paper.

✓ I usually prefer typing when I do my colleagues' homework or study something because I usually keep my notebooks, and it's more convenient to study with my laptop than by handing my paper.

Preposition and possession errors: 'my colleague homeworks' should show plural possession as 'my colleagues' homework'. 'Homeworks' is uncountable here; use 'homework'. 'With that laptop' is awkward; use 'with my laptop'. 'Then handing my paper' is incorrect contrast; use 'than by handing in my paper' or 'than by using paper'. Also add a comma before conjunction for clarity.

× I usually type on my laptop every day because I always have busy schedules and my work is needed to laptop and I have to type on many informations on what.

✓ I usually type on my laptop every day because I always have busy schedules, my work requires a laptop, and I have to type a lot of information.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'needed to laptop' is incorrect — use 'requires a laptop'. 'Many informations' is wrong because 'information' is uncountable; use 'a lot of information' or 'much information'. The phrase 'on what' is unclear and removed. Add commas to separate clauses.

× Maybe the time when I learned how to type on keyboard was my primary score at around 8 years old, so I liked learning something new and I also interested in typing at desk desktop.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard in primary school, at around eight years old, because I liked learning something new and I was also interested in typing at a desk on a desktop computer.

Tense and word choice: 'Maybe the time when I learned' is wordy; use simple past 'I learned'. 'Primary score' is incorrect — use 'primary school'. 'I also interested' lacks auxiliary verb; use 'I was also interested'. 'At desk desktop' is wrong order and missing article; use 'at a desk on a desktop computer'.

× I always want to improve my typing speed, so I usually practice at typing practice app and I type on my laptop a cooker.

✓ I always want to improve my typing speed, so I usually practice with a typing practice app and I type on my laptop every day.

Verb + -ing and preposition issues: 'practice at typing practice app' should be 'practice with a typing practice app' or 'use a typing practice app'. 'I type on my laptop a cooker' is nonsensical; likely meant 'every day' or 'a lot'. Replaced with 'every day' to fit context.