Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: まず、質問に直接答える簡潔なトピック文を作ること。文法（時制・冠詞・動詞形）と語順を整え、不必要な繰り返しを避けて理由を具体的に示すこと。例えば“prefer typing”を明確に述べ、その後“because”で理由を一つか二つに絞って説明する。表現は自然な語彙を使い、最大5文以内に収める。

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I submit most of my assignments online. For example, at university I type essays and emails, which saves time and makes editing easier.

提案: まず“yes”だけでなく直接“both”や“laptop/desktop”などを明確に答える。文法と語順を整え、具体的にどの機器で毎日使うかを述べる。不要な否定や混乱する語句（"not keyboard typing"）を避け、接続詞で文をつなげる。

例: I usually type on a laptop every day because I use it for work and studies. I also type on my smartphone occasionally for messages, but longer documents are done on my laptop.

提案: 質問に対して時制を正しくして、学んだ時期を一つにまとめる。重複を避け、具体的な情報（例えば学年や練習方法）を一つ加えると良い。比較表現は明確にし、“so fast faster”のような誤用を直す。

例: I first learned to type in elementary school during a basic computer class. Later at university I practiced more with assignments, which helped me increase my typing speed significantly.

提案: 改善方法を明確で順序立てて述べる。具体的な練習方法（タイピング練習サイト、毎日の練習時間、正しい姿勢など）を示し、接続語で理由と結果をつなげる。冗長な表現は避け、簡潔に述べる。

例: I improve my typing by practicing for 15 minutes daily on online typing websites and by typing all my notes and emails instead of handwriting. This regular practice has made me faster and more accurate.

× I prefer piping because I using typing several ways like if when I submit to my university I always typing and I think it's typing is use useful for me use it to so that's why.

✓ I prefer typing because I use it in several ways. For example, when I submit work to my university I always type, and I think typing is useful for me, so that is why.

The sentence has multiple pronoun and verb form errors. 'I using' should be 'I use' (pronoun with correct verb form). 'Typing is use useful for me use it to' is ungrammatical; simplify to 'typing is useful for me'. Suggestions: keep subject-verb pairs simple (I + base verb), avoid repeating pronouns unnecessarily, and break long run-on sentences into shorter clauses.

× When I use computer yes I was using keyboard but when I use smartphone no I always or tablet I use keyboard not keyboard typing.

✓ When I use a computer, I use a keyboard. When I use a smartphone or a tablet, I usually do not type on a keyboard.

Tense and habit confusion: 'yes I was using keyboard' mixes past continuous with a general habit; use simple present for habitual actions. Missing articles: 'a computer', 'a smartphone', 'a tablet'. Clarify negation and word order: 'I always or tablet I use keyboard not keyboard typing' is unclear; change to 'I usually do not type on a keyboard' for smartphones/tablets. Suggestions: use simple present for routines and include articles before singular countable nouns.

× When I was elementary school student I have a class that to learn computer how to type it and also when I was university student they have it same things.

✓ When I was an elementary school student, I had a class to learn how to use a computer and type. Also, when I was a university student, they had similar classes.

Mixed past and present tense: 'I have a class' should be past tense 'I had a class' to match 'When I was...'. Missing articles: 'an elementary school student', 'a university student'. Word order: 'to learn computer how to type it' should be 'to learn how to use a computer and type'. 'They have it same things' should be 'they had similar classes'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent within time frames and use correct article + natural word order for infinitive clauses.

× So that's why I can learn how to type it and how to use computer and my typing speed is so fast faster.

✓ So that's how I learned to type and how to use a computer, and my typing speed is very fast.

Redundant and incorrect comparative: 'so fast faster' is ungrammatical; use 'very fast' or 'faster' with a comparison object. Tense: 'I can learn' should be past 'I learned' to match prior past context. Missing article: 'use a computer'. Suggestions: choose the correct adjective/adverb form and maintain consistent tense.

× To use chance to use computer more and more as like to write something don't using handwriting to use computer typing.

✓ I try to take every chance to use the computer more and more, such as writing things on the computer instead of handwriting.

Awkward structure and verb forms: 'To use chance to use computer' should be 'I try to take every chance to use the computer'. 'don't using handwriting to use computer typing' mixes negative and -ing forms incorrectly; change to 'instead of handwriting' and 'writing on the computer'. Suggestions: start sentences with the subject, use set phrases like 'take every chance', and use 'instead of' for contrasts.

× That's why it can be more faster using as daily life is good.

✓ That's why it can become faster, and using it in daily life is good.

Incorrect comparative and adverb placement: 'more faster' is redundant; use 'faster' or 'much faster'. 'Using as daily life is good' is awkward; revise to 'using it in daily life is good'. Suggestions: avoid double comparatives and place adverbial phrases ('in daily life') after the verb/object they modify.