Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Говорите более связно и избегайте повторов. Начните с чёткого тематического предложения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных причины с соединительными словами. Обратите внимание на артикли и порядок слов: "I mostly prefer typing" вместо "I I mostly prefer to write by typing"; используйте «because» или «so» для связи мыслей.

例: I mostly prefer typing because it's much more convenient for me. I spend a lot of time studying and working on a laptop, so typing is faster and neater than handwriting.

提案: Старайтесь формулировать предложения компактно и избегать лишних фраз. Начните с прямого ответа (Yes/No) и объясните коротко причину. Используйте корректные артикли и завершайте мысль полностью: например, "harder than handwriting".

例: Yes. I use both a desktop and a laptop every day because I work as a computer science researcher. I usually type at home and write by hand only at university, which I find less convenient than typing.

提案: Уменьшите количество повторов и используйте хронологическую структуру: сначала событие в детстве, затем в школе и вывод. Сократите междометия («uh», «but yeah») и используйте связки: "then", "later", "so".

例: I first encountered a computer when I was a child, but I only played games then. Later, in high school, I began studying computer science and programming, so I learned to type properly and became comfortable with the keyboard.

提案: Дайте более конкретные методы и назовите примеры. Избегайте неуверенных выражений («I guess») и повторов. Укажите частоту и конкретные ресурсы: сайты, практики, упражнения, соревнования.

例: My typing is good because I've been typing every day for about ten years. To improve further, I practice on typing websites like TypingClub and participate in online typing competitions, and I also do daily accuracy drills for 10–15 minutes.

× I I mostly prefer to write by typing because it's more convenient for me.

✓ I mostly prefer typing because it's more convenient for me.

The sentence has a duplicated pronoun 'I' and an awkward construction 'to write by typing'. Remove the extra 'I' and use 'prefer typing' which is more natural. Use 'typing' as a gerund after 'prefer'.

× I was learning and working on laptop or computer from the many of the time.

✓ I learned and worked on a laptop or computer most of the time.

Use simple past 'learned' and 'worked' for habitual past actions; 'from the many of the time' is incorrect — use 'most of the time'. Include the article 'a' before 'laptop'.

× That's why I prefer typing instead of handwriting and it's a little bit hard for me to hand.

✓ That's why I prefer typing instead of handwriting, and handwriting is a little bit hard for me.

The phrase 'hard for me to hand' is ungrammatical. Replace with 'handwriting is a little bit hard for me' to clarify the subject. Add a comma before the coordinating conjunction for clarity.

× Yes, for sure, because I work as an computer science researcher, so that's why I have to sit on the desktop and also a laptop every day.

✓ Yes, for sure, because I work as a computer science researcher, so I have to use a desktop and also a laptop every day.

Use the article 'a' before 'computer science researcher' and use 'use' instead of 'sit on' when referring to using devices. 'Sit on the desktop' is incorrect; 'use a desktop' is natural.

× So I type and use the keyboard every day.

✓ So I type and use the keyboard every day.

This sentence is correct; kept as is. It clearly expresses habitual action and needs no change.

× I write by my hands mostly at the university, but it's a little bit harder than.

✓ I mostly write by hand at the university, but it's a little bit harder for me.

Use 'write by hand' (not 'by my hands') and place 'mostly' before the verb for natural word order. The clause 'harder than' is incomplete; compare with what? Replace with 'harder for me' to complete the thought.

× Uh, when I was a child, my parents bought, brought a computer at home.

✓ When I was a child, my parents bought a computer for our home.

Choose 'bought' (not 'bought, brought') and use 'for our home' or 'for the house' rather than 'at home' after 'bought'. This clarifies the object and corrects redundancy.

× But yeah, at that time I didn't really type, but I was playing some games.

✓ At that time I didn't really type; I was playing some games.

Use simple past 'didn't really type' for the completed past action and past continuous 'was playing' for ongoing past activity. Use a semicolon or comma + conjunction to connect the clauses.

× But at high school I started to learn Olympic and computer science, so I had to learn.

✓ But in high school I started to study Olympiad programming and computer science, so I had to learn to type.

Use 'in high school' not 'at high school'. 'Olympic' is unclear; 'Olympiad programming' or 'programming competitions' is better. Clarify 'had to learn' by specifying 'to type'.

× So I had to type more on computer.

✓ So I had to type more on the computer.

Include the definite article 'the' before 'computer' or better use 'on computers' if general. 'on the computer' is correct if referring to the computer at home or school.

× And now I know the keyboard.

✓ And now I know the keyboard well.

Add 'well' to make the statement natural in English: 'know the keyboard' is acceptable but 'know the keyboard well' clarifies skill level.

× Uh, I guess my typing is very well right now because I was writing for a about for about 10 years every day and I know the keyboard and mostly I use some type of competitions like, uh, writing typing website.

✓ I guess my typing is very good right now because I have been typing almost every day for about 10 years, and I know the keyboard. Mostly I use typing practice websites and take part in typing competitions.

Use adjective 'good' not adverb 'well' after 'is'. Use present perfect continuous 'have been typing' for an action continuing to the present. Correct 'writing for a about for about 10 years' to 'almost every day for about 10 years'. Use 'typing practice websites' and 'typing competitions' for clarity and correct noun forms.