Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сформулируйте ответ более грамотно и естественно: используйте корректные предлоги и формы (например, 'prefer typing to handwriting', 'I type every day'). Дайте одно ясное утверждение, затем добавьте краткую причину и пример. Избегайте лишних слов и повторов.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient. For example, I type messages and notes on my phone every day, which helps me communicate quickly with my friends.

提案: Исправьте грамматические ошибки в временах и порядке слов (например, 'I don't type every day' и 'I use a laptop'). Дайте чёткий ответ, затем уточните в каких ситуациях вы используете клавиатуру, используя связки (e.g., 'when', 'for'). Избегайте пауз и повторов ('uh', 'for for').

例: I don't type every day, but I usually use a laptop when I need to prepare presentations or complete university assignments. For instance, I write slides and essays on my laptop before deadlines.

提案: Дайте краткий чёткий ответ с временным указанием ('when I was a child') и добавьте конкретную деталь о процессе обучения. Уберите говорящие паузы ('uh') и исправьте артикли ('a computer'). Используйте связку 'after that' экономно.

例: I learned to type when I was a child after my dad bought me a computer. After that, I practiced regularly because I found it interesting, so I quickly got comfortable using the keyboard.

提案: Отвечайте прямо на вопрос о современных способах улучшения навыка: опишите конкретные методы (практика, онлайн-курсы, тренажёры), укажите частоту и результат. Исправьте грамматику и порядок слов ('when I was a first-year student', 'I improved my typing by...').

例: I improved my typing starting in my first year at university by practicing regularly: I used online typing tutors for 15–20 minutes a day and typed all my presentations and essays, which noticeably increased my speed and accuracy.

× I think that I prefer typing than handwriting because typing is more convenient for me.

✓ I think that I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is more convenient for me.

Use 'prefer to' when comparing two activities: 'prefer A to B'. 'Prefer than' is incorrect. Suggestion: say 'prefer typing to handwriting'.

× I everyday typing with my friends in front in message messages.

✓ I type messages with my friends every day.

Incorrect word order and verb form. Use present simple 'I type' for habitual actions. 'Every day' is two words and should follow the verb or the object. Remove redundant words 'in front in' and 'message messages' -> 'messages'.

× No, not every day, but I typing a laptop and keyboard and when I prepare presentation or when I uh, do something for for my university tasks.

✓ No, not every day, but I use a laptop and keyboard when I prepare presentations or do something for my university tasks.

The present participle 'typing' is incorrect without an auxiliary. Use 'I use'. 'Prepare presentation' needs plural or article: 'prepare presentations' or 'prepare a presentation'. Remove duplicated 'for'. Maintain present simple for habitual action.

× Actually, I remember when I learned how to type on a keyboard.

✓ Actually, I remember learning how to type on a keyboard.

After 'remember' referring to a past event, use gerund 'remember doing' not 'remember when I learned'. Both forms possible but 'remember learning' is more natural here. Alternatively, 'I remember when I learned how to type' is acceptable; current sentence is slightly awkward.

× It was when I was a child and my dad bought me computer.

✓ It was when I was a child and my dad bought me a computer.

Countable singular noun 'computer' requires an article: 'a computer'.

× And after that I usually, uh, type on the keyboard because it was interesting for me and I learned how to use computer.

✓ After that I usually typed on the keyboard because it was interesting to me and I learned how to use a computer.

Sequence of past events requires past simple 'typed' and 'learned'. 'Interesting for me' is unnatural; use 'interesting to me'. Add article 'a' before 'computer'.

× Four years ago when I was first year student, I improved my typing like do presentation or preparing a safe for university.

✓ Four years ago, when I was a first-year student, I improved my typing by doing presentations and preparing assignments for university.

Time marker 'Four years ago' requires past tense. 'First year student' needs hyphenation 'first-year student'. 'Improved my typing like do presentation' is ungrammatical; use 'improved my typing by doing presentations'. 'Preparing a safe' is incorrect; likely 'assignments' or 'stuff'—used 'assignments' to fit context.