Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: The answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but has grammatical errors, unclear phrases, and one irrelevant sentence. Keep responses natural and concise (max 5 sentences). Use linking words (for example, 'because', 'however') correctly and avoid awkward or incorrect phrases like 'my heart aches' for discomfort when writing, or 'Unfairness efficient when tightening' which is unclear. Also provide one or two specific examples to support your point.

例: I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient when I have to take many notes or edit documents. However, I still enjoy handwriting for personal things like greeting cards because it feels more personal. For instance, when studying, typing lets me organize information and search it quickly, whereas handwriting is nicer for short, meaningful messages.

提案: The response answers the question but contains grammatical errors and lacks detail. Use a clear topic sentence, correct comparative forms, and add a brief reason or example. For instance, say whether you type daily on which device and why, using correct grammar ('more convenient than').

例: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop every day; I mainly type on my smartphone because it's more convenient than using a larger computer. For example, I send messages and reply to emails on the go, so my phone is the easiest option.

提案: The answer is unclear and ungrammatical. Give a direct time reference (age, school level, or year) and a brief context about how you learned (self-taught, class, practice). Keep it concise and specific.

例: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was about ten years old at primary school. We had computer lessons where I practiced touch-typing and gradually improved with regular exercises.

提案: This answer is relevant but too brief and repetitive. Provide more specific methods and link ideas with connectors. Mention particular activities (typing programs, touch-typing practice, timed tests) and frequency to make the response more informative and natural.

例: To improve my typing, I practice regularly by writing messages and doing online typing exercises. For example, I use a typing app twice a week to work on speed and accuracy, and I also time myself when copying articles to build consistency.

× I prefer typing because it's more convenient and faster for me, especially when I take a lot of notes or edit text.

✓ I prefer typing because it's more convenient and faster for me, especially when I take a lot of notes or edit text.

No grammatical error that matches the provided list; sentence is correct. Keep comparative 'more convenient' and 'faster' as they modify 'typing' appropriately.

× I do like handwriting for personal notes or cards, but writing for a long period makes my heart aches.

✓ I do like handwriting for personal notes or cards, but writing for a long period makes my heart ache.

This is a subject-verb agreement and verb form issue: 'makes' is correct for singular subject but must be followed by bare infinitive 'ache' rather than 'aches'. Use 'makes my heart ache' (causative + base verb).

× Unfairness efficient when tightening.

✓ This sentence is unclear; revise to convey the intended meaning, for example: 'It feels uncomfortable and inefficient when I write for a long time.'

The original phrase is ungrammatical and contains unclear word choice. It does not match any listed grammar types beyond sentence structure errors. Provide a clear, grammatical alternative that fits context: use subject + verb + clear complements and choose appropriate adjectives ('uncomfortable', 'inefficient').

× No, basically I use cell phone because it's so convenient than desktop or laptop.

✓ No, basically I use my cell phone because it's more convenient than a desktop or laptop.

Several errors: missing possessive pronoun 'my' before 'cell phone' and incorrect comparative structure 'so convenient than' should be 'more convenient than'. Also articles before 'desktop'/'laptop' improve clarity ('a desktop or laptop'). These match 'Incorrect use of pronouns' and comparative usage (but corrected only per list items).

× I learned how to type keyboard when I was single on.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was single.

Missing preposition 'on' before 'a keyboard' and extra word 'on' at end. Correct structure is 'learned how to type on a keyboard'. This matches 'Sentence structure errors' and 'Incorrect use of prepositions'.

× To improve my typing, I usually practice my typing skills through messages.

✓ To improve my typing, I usually practice my typing skills by sending messages.

'Through messages' is awkward; use 'by sending messages' to express method. This uses a gerund phrase correctly after 'by' to indicate means, matching 'Verb + -ing form' guidance.