Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and directly answer first, avoid hesitations and irrelevant words. Correct grammar (use present tense, correct verbs), reduce repetition, and add one specific reason with linking words. Aim for 2–4 clear sentences.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because autocorrect helps me avoid spelling mistakes. For example, when I write quickly on my phone, the keyboard fixes errors, which makes my messages clearer.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence (which device you mainly use), avoid contradictions and filler words. Use linking words to explain exceptions. Correct grammar and keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: I usually type on my smartphone because I carry it everywhere and it’s convenient. However, I sometimes use a laptop for watching movies or typing longer texts at home.

提案: Give a clear time reference and use correct tense. After the topic sentence, add a brief linked detail about how you learned and a current contrast. Avoid repeating words and fix phrasing.

例: I learned to type when I was in fourth grade after my father gave me a laptop. That early practice helped me build speed, though now I mostly type on my smartphone because it’s more convenient for messaging.

提案: Answer directly and mention specific methods you use to improve (practice, games, courses). Use linking words and correct vocabulary (typing, not pronunciation when referring to typing). Keep to 2–3 clear sentences.

例: I improve my typing mainly by practising every day on my phone and laptop, which increases my speed and accuracy. I also learned tips from my sister and sometimes use online typing games to practice accuracy.

× I prefer typing most because, uh, whenever I ride, I made pronunciation, uh, wrong in writing words.

✓ I prefer typing most because whenever I write, I make mistakes in spelling/pronunciation.

The student used incorrect verb forms: 'ride' should be 'write' (word choice) and 'made' is past tense though sentence describes habitual action; use present simple 'make'. Also 'pronunciation wrong in writing words' is awkward; rephrase to 'make mistakes in spelling/pronunciation'. Use present participle 'typing' is fine but verbs describing habits require present simple.

× I made mistake, uh, in writing words.

✓ I make mistakes when writing words.

The sentence refers to a habitual action, so use the present simple 'make' instead of past 'made'. Also use plural 'mistakes' for general occurrences and add 'when' for clarity.

× So whenever I type uh, it has some auto correct the automatically correct my words.

✓ So whenever I type, the autocorrect automatically corrects my words.

The original has redundant words and wrong word order: 'it has some auto correct the automatically' is ungrammatical. Use noun 'autocorrect' and verb 'corrects' matching the singular subject. Also remove filler 'uh' and add comma for clarity.

× To be honest, I don't use laptop or desktop in my daily basis life.

✓ To be honest, I don't use a laptop or desktop in my daily life.

Use articles: 'a laptop or desktop'. 'daily basis life' is incorrect collocation; correct phrase is 'daily life'. Present simple negative 'don't use' is fine.

× I prefer typing on a smartphone like it also had a typing keyboard so.

✓ I prefer typing on a smartphone because it also has a keyboard.

Use 'because' to show reason. 'had' is past tense; use present 'has' for a current feature. 'typing keyboard' is better as simply 'keyboard'.

× But along with this I watched movie on laptop so I prefer typing on laptop.

✓ But I also watch movies on my laptop, so I prefer typing on a laptop.

Use present simple 'watch' for habitual action rather than past 'watched'. Add articles 'a' and possessive 'my' for natural phrasing. Maintain consistent tense.

× When I was in my 4th class, my father gifted me a laptop.

✓ When I was in fourth grade, my father gave me a laptop.

'Gifted me' is acceptable but 'gave me' is more natural in spoken English; '4th class' is nonstandard—use 'fourth grade' or 'fourth class' depending on dialect. Both past simple verbs okay; keep past tense for completed event.

× I used to type on laptop so it made me learn that how to do typing.

✓ I used to type on the laptop, so it taught me how to type.

'Made me learn that how to do typing' is awkward. Use 'taught me how to type' or 'helped me learn to type'. Add article 'the' before 'laptop' and simplify verb forms.

× Nowadays I prefer smartphone to typing because it's it sends more convenient messages.

✓ Nowadays I prefer my smartphone for typing because it sends messages more conveniently.

Original repeats 'it' and has wrong structure. Use 'prefer my smartphone for typing' and adverb 'conveniently' to modify 'sends'. Keep present simple for current preference.

× As I told you before that I used to type a lot on laptop, so I learned from there.

✓ As I told you before, I used to type a lot on the laptop, so I learned from that experience.

Remove 'that' after 'before' and add article 'the'. 'From there' is vague; 'from that experience' or 'from using it' is clearer. Past tense 'used to' and 'learned' are consistent for past habit.

× Uh, nowadays I type on my smartphone most, so it helps me to improve my pronunciation or my typing words.

✓ Nowadays I mostly type on my smartphone, so it helps me improve my pronunciation and my typing/spelling.

Place adverb 'mostly' before verb. Use 'helps me improve' (no 'to'). 'Pronunciation or my typing words' is unclear; specify 'pronunciation and my typing/spelling'. Use present simple for current habit.

× Moreover, I had seen my sister as typing so I learned from her.

✓ Moreover, I saw my sister typing, so I learned from her.

Use simple past 'saw' rather than past perfect 'had seen' because no earlier past reference is given. 'Saw my sister typing' is natural; remove 'as'. Past simple fits narrative.