Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Also fix verb forms and pronouns (e.g., "I am used to handwriting" -> "I'm used to handwriting").

例: I prefer handwriting because I'm more comfortable with it and it helps me generate ideas more easily. For example, when I take notes on paper I can sketch diagrams and quickly jot down thoughts, which makes planning essays faster.

提案: Give a direct answer first, then a clear explanation with a linking word. Use correct tense and avoid awkward phrasing like "then only I do typing."

例: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day. I only use a laptop when I have assignments, so I type mainly during those occasions rather than daily.

提案: Provide a concise topic sentence with one or two specific details and reduce fillers like "uh" and repetition. Use past tense consistently and smoother linking words (e.g., "when" and "then").

例: I learned to type in school when I was in the tenth grade. During a computer class, the teacher took us to the lab and showed us how to use the keyboard, so I practiced typing there for the first time.

提案: Start with a clear statement about your method, give a specific example with linking words and correct phrasing (e.g., "both hands" and "40 minutes"). Avoid repetition.

例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly because I must take a computer-based exam. For instance, I practice typing 250 words in 40 minutes and focus on using both hands to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I am very used to do handwriting as I'm not much on laptops and desktops for typing.

✓ I am very used to handwriting as I'm not very into laptops and desktops for typing.

The phrase 'used to' followed by a habitual activity requires 'used to' + noun or 'used to' + verb-ing. 'Used to do' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'used to handwriting' or 'used to writing'. Also 'not much on' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'not very into'. Suggest practicing 'used to' with gerunds and common collocations like 'into' for preferences.

× I am very confident and I feel very confident and do feel convenient when I'm writing and my I can generate ideas very well whenever I am doing, uh, hand.

✓ I am confident and feel comfortable when I'm writing, and I can generate ideas very well whenever I write by hand.

Redundant repetition ('very confident' twice) should be avoided. 'Feel convenient' is incorrect; use 'feel comfortable'. 'Whenever I am doing, uh, hand' is ungrammatical; use 'whenever I write by hand'. Use simple present for habitual actions. Practice concise expression and correct collocations like 'feel comfortable' and 'write by hand'.

× I do not use laptops and desktop everyday for typing as whenever I have any assignment to do I used to do on laptop then only I do typing.

✓ I do not use laptops and desktops every day for typing; whenever I have an assignment, I use a laptop to type it.

Consistency in singular/plural: 'laptops and desktop' - desktop should be plural if paired. 'Everyday' (adjective) vs 'every day' (adverb); here 'every day' is correct. 'I used to do on laptop then only I do typing' is incorrect tense and phrasing; use simple present 'I use a laptop to type it'. Suggest checking plural agreement and correct use of 'every day' and simple present for habitual actions.

× When I was in my school, uh, in class 10th, uh, I was having a period of computer, then teacher, uh, took everyone to the computer lab and then explains the keyboard, keyboard, the keys, and also that time I learned the key typing.

✓ When I was at school in class 10, we had a computer lesson; the teacher took everyone to the computer lab and explained the keyboard and its keys, and that is when I learned to type.

Mix of past simple and present ('explains') is inconsistent. Use past simple for past events: 'we had', 'the teacher took', 'explained'. 'In my school' -> 'at school'. 'Class 10th' -> 'class 10' or '10th grade'. 'Learned the key typing' is awkward; use 'learned to type' or 'learned touch typing'. Suggest practicing consistent past tense and common phrasing for school experiences.

× I'm trying to improve my typing by doing it on a regular basis and I have to give my exam on computer so I need to do some typing like 250 words in a 40 minutes.

✓ I'm trying to improve my typing by practicing regularly, and I have to take my exam on a computer, so I need to be able to type about 250 words in 40 minutes.

'Doing it on a regular basis' is wordy; 'practicing regularly' is natural. 'Give my exam on computer' should be 'take my exam on a computer'. 'Do some typing like 250 words in a 40 minutes' is ungrammatical; use 'type about 250 words in 40 minutes'. Also remove unnecessary articles: 'in 40 minutes' not 'in a 40 minutes'. Use infinitive 'to be able to type' for ability requirement.

× So I'm doing a typing on regular basis improving by both hand using on a keyboard.

✓ So I'm practicing typing regularly, improving by using both hands on the keyboard.

'Doing a typing' is incorrect; use 'practicing typing'. 'On regular basis' should be 'regularly' or 'on a regular basis'. 'Improving by both hand using on a keyboard' has wrong word order and prepositions; correct is 'improving by using both hands on the keyboard'. Suggest focusing on common verb-preposition patterns like 'practice + noun' and 'use + on' constructions.