Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và ngắt quãng bằng tiếng lấp đầy (umm, uh). Nói rõ lựa chọn (typing) trong câu chủ đề, giải thích ngắn gọn với lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: nhanh, tiện khi ra ngoài, dễ lưu trữ) và dùng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: "faster" thay vì "fatter"). Giữ độ dài trong 3-4 câu, dùng liên từ như "because", "so", "for example" để mạch lạc.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much faster and more convenient when I'm on the go. For example, I can quickly text my friends or save notes on my phone. In addition, typed notes are easier to organize and search later.

提案: Cần cấu trúc câu rõ: nêu trực tiếp bạn dùng cả hai, rồi phân biệt công dụng cụ thể cho từng thiết bị. Tránh diễn đạt mơ hồ như "their stuff" hay "study some object". Dùng từ chính xác như "desktop for research" hay "laptop for assignments" và nối ý bằng "for example" hoặc "because".

例: I use both a desktop and a laptop every day. For example, I use the desktop at university for research and running specialised software, while I use my laptop at home for assignments and exams because it is more portable and convenient.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và không dùng ngôn ngữ thiếu chuẩn hay chữ bị lược. Trả lời ngay với khoảng tuổi ("when I was four or five") và nêu cách học cụ thể (bố mẹ dạy, thực hành với trò chơi hay gõ văn bản). Loại bỏ tiếng lấp đầy và từ không thích hợp, giữ tối đa 3 câu.

例: I learned to type when I was about four or five years old. My parents taught me by letting me practise simple games and typing short words on the laptop. That early practice helped me become comfortable with the keyboard.

提案: Nên nói rõ phương pháp cải thiện cụ thể: luyện gõ tốc độ, dùng phần mềm luyện gõ, kiểm tra lỗi, đặt mục tiêu thời gian. Tránh lặp từ và cấu trúc rối. Dùng liên từ như "so", "by" để nối ý và giới thiệu ví dụ cụ thể (tên phần mềm hoặc bài tập).

例: I improve my typing by practising on my laptop every day, often using online typing tutors like TypingClub to increase speed and accuracy. I also set small goals, such as reducing errors or increasing my words-per-minute each week.

× Well, I'm a kind person who loves chatting with my friends, so texting is the best joy for me because it's so, uh, convenient and you phone whatever.

✓ Well, I'm a social person who loves chatting with my friends, so texting brings me the most joy because it's very convenient and I can use my phone anytime.

The original uses 'kind' which refers to personality rather than sociability; 'the best joy' is unnatural collocation and should be 'brings me the most joy'; 'it's so, uh, convenient and you phone whatever' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'very convenient' and 'I can use my phone anytime' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: choose words that match intended meaning and common collocations (e.g., 'brings me joy', 'very convenient', 'use my phone').

× And it's so fatter than handwriting.

✓ And it's much faster than handwriting.

'Fatter' is incorrect; the comparative adjective for speed is 'faster'. Use 'much faster' to compare typing speed to handwriting. Suggestion: check adjective meaning before forming comparatives.

× Well, actually I use both of them in my daily life because I will use their stuff in my university to study some object and for laptop I will use for assessment for example, and it's still helpful and convenient for me to finish my work.

✓ Well, actually I use both in my daily life because I use the desktop at university to study certain subjects, and the laptop for assessments, for example; both are helpful and convenient for finishing my work.

Problems: 'both of them' is okay but 'their stuff' is incorrect pronoun use; 'some object' is wrong word choice and number; inconsistent article and verb forms. Replaced 'their stuff' with specific nouns, 'some object' with 'certain subjects', fixed 'for laptop I will use for assessment' to 'the laptop for assessments'. Suggestion: refer to devices clearly ('desktop', 'laptop') and use correct nouns for activities ('subjects', 'assessments').

× Well, is my memory set me right? It's about four or five because, umm, in my young age my parents always taught me to umm, taste something in my laptop and I can, umm, try some, uh, ***** work.

✓ If my memory serves me right, it was when I was about four or five because when I was young my parents always taught me to try things on the laptop and I practiced some simple tasks.

Original has incorrect question form 'is my memory set me right?' and tense inconsistencies. 'In my young age' is unnatural; 'taste something in my laptop' and 'try some ***** work' are incorrect collocations. Use 'If my memory serves me right' and past tense 'it was' and 'when I was young' plus 'try things on the laptop' and 'simple tasks'. Suggestion: use set phrases for memory retrieval and correct past tense for past events.

× Well actually I will use work on laptop to practice my typing every day because it I because I think that if I can type faster and correctly my work the best way is typing every day.

✓ Well, actually I practice typing on my laptop every day because I think the best way to improve speed and accuracy is to type daily.

Problems: unnecessary future 'will use', awkward phrase 'use work on laptop', repeated words 'because it I because I think', and incorrect word order 'if I can type faster and correctly my work'. Corrected to present simple 'practice' for habits, use 'improve speed and accuracy' and 'the best way to improve is to type daily'. Suggestion: use present simple for routines, avoid redundant words, and place adverbs correctly ('correctly' -> 'accuracy').