Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and fix vocabulary/grammar errors (e.g., "invenient" → "convenient", "Whenever wear an wherever" → "wherever I am").

例: I prefer typing because it is more convenient. For example, wherever I am I can use my phone or laptop to type notes, whereas handwriting needs a pen and paper. Therefore typing saves time and is easier to organize.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence and add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Correct grammar ("laptops keyboard" → "a laptop keyboard"). Reduce fillers like "Uh".

例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use my laptop for assignments and job searches. Also, the laptop is portable, so I can work from different places easily.

提案: Give a direct answer and expand with one or two clear details. Use correct tense and articles ("I was in the 5th standard" → "I was in the fifth grade"). Replace vague phrases like "different styles" with specific methods (e.g., "touch typing").

例: I learned to type when I was in the fifth grade at school. My computer teacher taught us touch-typing and regular practice exercises, which helped me improve quickly.

提案: Answer directly, use linking words and give specific methods. Avoid unclear phrases like "mail space." Mention concrete actions and resources (e.g., practice exercises, typing tutors, timed tests).

例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly, for example typing emails and using online typing tutors. Also, I take timed tests on websites like TypingClub to track my speed and accuracy.

× Well I mostly prefer typing everything the most invenient way.

✓ Well, I mostly prefer typing because it is the most convenient way.

The original sentence has poor word order and a misspelled word. 'Everything the most invenient way' is ungrammatical. Rearranging to 'I mostly prefer typing because it is the most convenient way' gives a clear subject, verb and reason. Also correct 'invenient' to 'convenient'. Suggestion: keep simple subject-verb-object order and place reason clause after a conjunction like 'because'.

× Whenever wear an wherever I am sitting at any corner of the world I can type easily as compared to handwriting cause handwriting needs pen or maybe a book also.

✓ Whenever and wherever I am sitting in any corner of the world, I can type easily compared to handwriting, because handwriting needs a pen or maybe a book.

Errors include incorrect words 'wear' instead of 'where', wrong preposition 'at' (use 'in' with 'corner'), missing articles and informal conjunction 'cause'. Use 'wherever' and 'whenever' together and 'compared to' or 'compared with' for comparison. Add 'a' before 'pen' and use 'because' for more formal written English. Suggestion: proofread for typos and appropriate prepositions.

× Well, I usually type on laptop keyboard every day as I have to make my assignments and search for any job.

✓ Well, I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have to do my assignments and search for jobs.

Missing article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' and awkward verb 'make' for assignments. Use 'do' assignments. 'Any job' is better as plural 'jobs' or 'a job' depending on meaning; here 'jobs' fits. Use 'because' instead of 'as' for clarity. Suggestion: include articles and choose appropriate verbs for collocations ('do assignments').

× Uh, that's why I mostly prefer laptops keyboard rather than desktop.

✓ Uh, that's why I mostly prefer laptop keyboards rather than desktop keyboards.

Number agreement and noun form are incorrect. 'Laptops keyboard' mixes plural and singular; use plural 'laptop keyboards' or singular 'a laptop keyboard'. Also specify 'desktop keyboards' for parallel structure. Suggestion: ensure parallelism and correct singular/plural forms.

× I was in the 5th standard.

✓ I was in the 5th grade.

This is more a register/word choice than tense, but keep past tense 'was' which is correct. 'Standard' is nonstandard in some varieties; in general English use 'grade'. Suggestion: use 'grade' for standard American/British contexts.

× Uh. My school allows me to join classes of computer as my computer teacher help me to learn about typing on a keyboard by teaching me different styles.

✓ Uh, my school allowed me to join computer classes, and my computer teacher helped me learn to type on a keyboard by teaching me different techniques.

Tense inconsistency: 'allows' should be past 'allowed' to match 'I was in the 5th grade'. Also preposition 'classes of computer' is incorrect; use 'computer classes'. 'Help me to learn' should be 'helped me learn' or 'helped me to learn'. 'Different styles' is better as 'different techniques' for typing. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and use correct noun phrases and verbs.

× Now I can improve my typing in mail space as I can type regularly, uh and I can also search on different websites how to improve my typing skills.

✓ Now I can improve my typing in my free time since I can type regularly, and I can also search different websites to find how to improve my typing skills.

Phrases like 'in mail space' are unclear; probably 'in my free time'. Use 'since' for reason or 'because'. Also 'search on different websites how to improve' is awkward; better 'search different websites to find how to improve' or 'search different websites for ways to improve'. Suggestion: use clear time expressions and proper infinitive or 'for' constructions when searching for information.