Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and directly state your preference, then give a clear, specific reason. Avoid filler words (umm) and repetition. Use correct verb forms and clearer phrasing (e.g., explain how handwriting helps you spot errors). Keep your answer to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer handwriting because writing by hand helps me focus and notice mistakes more easily. For example, when I write notes, I can immediately spot spelling or grammar errors and correct them.

提案: Begin with a direct topic sentence and then add one specific detail. Use articles and correct verb forms, and avoid vague phrases like "some document." Keep it within 1–2 sentences.

例: Yes, I do. I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I find it more portable and convenient for writing reports and emails.

提案: Answer clearly with a specific time reference and a short explanation. Remove repetitions and fix grammar (learned to type, primary school, after-school classes). Use linking words if necessary. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. I attended an after-school computer class with my friends, where we practiced keyboarding and basic typing exercises.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your method, then give one specific detail about how you practice and why. Remove repetition and correct grammar (need to be faster). Use a linking word to connect purpose and method.

例: I improve my typing by doing daily practice drills and using online typing exercises. Because I need to type documents more quickly, I practice for 15–20 minutes each day to build speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because when I was umm write down with my hand, I can see the see my eyes directly, so I. I can reduce some errors with my hand.

✓ I prefer handwriting because when I write by hand, I can see it directly, so I can reduce some errors.

Original sentence uses incorrect verb form 'write' after 'when I was' and redundant/awkward phrases. This is an error of verb + -ing form and tense construction. Use simple present 'write' for habitual preference: 'when I write by hand'. Remove filler words and repetition ('see the see my eyes directly') and combine fragments into one clear sentence. Suggestion: use 'write by hand' and 'I can reduce some errors.'

× Yes I do. I always use laptop keyboard when I write some document.

✓ Yes, I do. I always use a laptop keyboard when I write documents.

Original lacks article before 'laptop keyboard' and uses singular 'document' awkwardly. This relates to third person singular category in list only by ID mapping, but primary issues are article and count/form. Add 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' and pluralize 'documents' to indicate general activity. Also add comma after 'Yes.'

× I learned how to typing with computers when I was prime primarily school school student because after I took some I took a classes with my friends with some after school class.

✓ I learned how to type on computers when I was a primary school student because I took some after-school classes with my friends.

Original misuses 'to typing' instead of 'to type' (verb + -ing error) and repeats words and has article issues. Use infinitive 'to type' or 'how to type' and correct noun phrases: 'primary school student' with article 'a', and 'after-school classes'. Remove repetition and reorder for clarity.

× I improve my typing skill by practicing typing with computers.

✓ I improve my typing skills by practicing on the computer.

Original is understandable but awkward: 'practicing typing with computers' is wordy. Use plural 'typing skills' and the more natural prepositional phrase 'practicing on the computer'. This corrects gerund/participle phrasing and noun number.

× I want to improve my typing skills because when I when I wrote the document, I always need some faster.

✓ I want to improve my typing skills because when I write documents, I always need to be faster.

Original mixes tenses: 'want' (present) with 'wrote' (past) incorrectly. Use present tense 'write' to match 'want', correct modal/structure 'need to be faster' rather than 'need some faster'. Also remove repetition 'when I when I'.