Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ปรับโครงสร้างให้ตอบตรงคำถามก่อน แล้วให้เหตุผลสั้น ๆ อย่าใช้คำซ้ำและแก้ไวยากรณ์เช่น subject-verb agreement และ article ให้ถูกต้อง นอกจากนี้ควรใช้ linking word อย่าง because หรือ so อย่างมีประสิทธิภาพ และจำกัดความยาวไม่เกิน 3-4 ประโยค

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is messy and hard to read. Typing is more efficient and convenient for me, especially when I need to edit or share documents quickly.

提案: ตอบโดยระบุชนิดของอุปกรณ์ก่อน แล้วให้รายละเอียดอย่างเป็นระเบียบ หลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำและแก้คำศัพท์ที่ไม่ชัดเจน เช่น "free time white collar" ใช้คำที่ถูกต้องว่า "full-time white-collar worker" และระวังการใช้ preposition และ tense

例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day. I work as a full-time white-collar employee and usually draft and reply to emails on my laptop from about 9:00 to 5:00.

提案: เริ่มตอบด้วยประโยคที่ชัดเจนเกี่ยวกับช่วงอายุและใช้คำที่เหมาะสม หลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดติดอ่าง (um/uh) และคำไม่เหมาะสม เช่น "typing cross" ซึ่งควรเป็น "typing course" ระบุรายละเอียดสั้น ๆ เกี่ยวกับสถานที่หรือสาเหตุที่เรียน

例: I learned to type when I was about six or seven years old. My mother enrolled me in a typing course at a local tuition centre where they taught children basic computer and keyboard skills.

提案: ตอบให้ตรงคำถามด้วยการบอกวิธีที่ใช้หรือบอกว่ไม่มีวิธีเฉพาะ แล้วอธิบายสั้น ๆ ว่าทำไมทักษะจึงพัฒนา เช่น การฝึกใช้งานประจำวัน หลีกเลี่ยงซ้ำคำและแก้ grammar เช่น tense และ article

例: I don't use a specific method; my typing improved through daily use over many years. Practising regularly on my laptop and doing tasks like emailing and writing documents helped my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing as it provide more efficiency and more convenience for me.

✓ I prefer typing as it provides more efficiency and convenience for me.

Subject-verb agreement error: the subject 'it' requires the third-person singular verb form 'provides'. Also 'more efficiency and more convenience' is repetitive; use 'efficiency and convenience' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'provides' with singular 'it' and avoid repetitive 'more'.

× Yes I do as I'm a free time white collar worker so I use my laptop to type and reply to to draft and reply an e-mail to my colleagues and my customer in every in every day from 9:00 to 5:00.

✓ Yes, I do. I'm a white-collar worker in my free time, so I use my laptop to draft and reply to emails to my colleagues and customers every day from 9:00 to 5:00.

Multiple issues: redundancy ('to to', 'in every in every day'), word order and article use ('a free time white collar worker' is awkward), pluralization ('customer' -> 'customers'), and punctuation. Suggestion: break into two sentences, remove duplicates, use 'draft and reply to emails' and 'every day'.

× Well, if I remember correctly, I started my very first typing cross when it was around six or seven years old.

✓ Well, if I remember correctly, I started my very first typing course when I was around six or seven years old.

Word choice and tense: 'typing cross' is a typo for 'typing course'. Also use 'I was' not 'it was' to refer to the student's age. Suggestion: use 'typing course' and 'when I was around six or seven years old'.

× At that time, my mom specifically sent me to the like, umm, uh, tuition institution that taught children how to use computer specifically.

✓ At that time, my mom specifically sent me to a tuition institution that taught children how to use computers.

Article and noun number: use 'a tuition institution' and plural 'computers'. Remove filler words ('the like, umm, uh') and redundant 'specifically'. Suggestion: simplify the sentence and use correct article and plural noun.

× Well, frankly speaking I do not have a certain method. I've just been using PC, laptop since I was just a student, so over 20 years right now and typing skill developed naturally.

✓ Well, frankly speaking, I do not have a certain method. I've been using a PC and a laptop since I was a student, so I have been typing for over 20 years and my typing skills developed naturally.

Tense consistency and article use: 'I've just been using' should be 'I've been using'; add articles ('a PC and a laptop'); 'since I was just a student' -> 'since I was a student'; 'so over 20 years right now' -> 'for over 20 years'; 'typing skill' -> plural 'typing skills'. Suggestion: ensure tense consistency (present perfect continuous), include articles, and use correct plural forms.

× So I cannot pinpoint a certain a single method is something that comes naturally with.

✓ So I cannot pinpoint a single method; it is something that came naturally to me.

Awkward structure and tense: 'a certain a single' duplicates words; 'is something that comes naturally with' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'I cannot pinpoint a single method; it is something that came naturally to me' for clarity and correct tense.