Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ปรับปรุงความเป็นธรรมชาติและความชัดเจนของประโยค ลดคำซ้ำซ้อนและแก้ไวยากรณ์ เลือกประโยคแนะนำเป็น topic sentence แล้วตามด้วยเหตุผลสั้นๆ ใช้ linking word เช่น "because" หรือ "so" และหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้อน เช่น "just simply"

例: I prefer typing because my handwriting is messy and I often struggle to write quickly. As a result, typing is faster and produces clearer documents, so I use it whenever possible.

提案: แก้โครงสร้างประโยคและไวยากรณ์ ให้ตอบตรงก่อนแล้วอธิบายโดยใช้รายละเอียดเฉพาะเจาะจง ลดคำซ้ำ เช่น "so" มากเกินไป และใช้ linking words เช่น "because" หรือ "for example"

例: Yes, I type every day on both a desktop and a laptop because I work in an office. For example, I often write emails to customers and colleagues, and I also prepare documents and reports on my PC.

提案: แก้ความชัดเจนและไวยากรณ์ ระบุปีหรือช่วงอายุให้ชัด ใช้ linking words เช่น "when" หรือ "at" และแก้คำผิด เช่น "taught" แทน "thought"

例: If I remember correctly, I started formal typing classes when I was about six or seven years old because my mother sent me to a tutorial center that taught children how to use computers.

提案: ปรับถ้อยคำให้กระชับและเป็นธรรมชาติ อธิบายกระบวนการปรับปรุงอย่างชัดเจน ใช้คำที่ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดติดอ่าง ให้ตัวอย่างวิธีที่ใช้ (เช่น ฝึกพิมพ์แบบมีวัตถุประสงค์ ฝึกด้วยโปรแกรมหรือเกม)

例: I improved my typing mainly through daily practice rather than formal training. For instance, I type emails and reports every day, and I also practiced with online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× Well absolutely, I prefer typing just simply because my handwritten was very ugly and I find myself quite struggled with writing everything, so that's why I prefer typing.

✓ Well, absolutely. I prefer typing simply because my handwriting was very ugly and I find myself quite bad at writing everything, so that's why I prefer typing.

Pronoun/word form: 'my handwritten' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'handwriting'. 'I find myself quite struggled' is incorrect because 'struggled' is a past verb form and passive; use an adjective or 'struggling'. Use 'bad at writing' or 'struggling with writing'. Ensure pronoun 'my' correctly modifies 'handwriting'. Suggestions: Replace 'my handwritten' with 'my handwriting', and change 'I find myself quite struggled with writing everything' to 'I find myself quite bad at writing everything' or 'I struggle with writing everything'.

× Yes definitely I do as I'm a free time to white collar worker so I use PC and laptop on my daily basis and type things so much like for example type an e-mail to my customer and my colleagues so I exposed to it every single day.

✓ Yes, definitely I do. In my free time as a white-collar worker I use a PC and a laptop daily and type a lot; for example, I type e-mails to my customers and colleagues, so I am exposed to it every single day.

Tense and article use: 'I'm a free time to white collar worker' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'in my free time as a white-collar worker'. Use articles 'a PC and a laptop' and present simple 'I use' and 'I type'. 'I exposed to it' is incorrect passive/tense; correct is 'I am exposed to it'. Suggestions: Use clear phrases for routines (present simple), include articles where needed, and use correct passive with 'am exposed'.

× If I remember correctly it I started my very official typing class at age around six or seven years old when my mom specifically sent me to the tutorial institution that I thought chi children how to use computer.

✓ If I remember correctly, I started my first formal typing class at around six or seven years old when my mom specifically sent me to a tutorial institution that taught children how to use a computer.

Past tense and word choice: 'it I started' has extra 'it'; use 'I started'. 'Very official' better as 'first formal'. 'Age around' reordered to 'at around'. 'Thought chi children how to use computer' is wrong: 'taught children how to use a computer'. Suggestions: Remove extra words, use 'taught' for past tense, and include appropriate articles ('a computer'). Use 'formal' instead of 'very official'.

× Honestly speaking, I do not have this earned solution of how I improve my typing skill.

✓ Honestly speaking, I do not have a clear solution for how to improve my typing skills.

Word choice and tense: 'earned solution' is incorrect; likely 'clear solution'. 'How I improve my typing skill' should be 'how to improve my typing skills' to express general method. Use plural 'skills' and infinitive 'to improve'. Suggestions: Use 'a clear solution for how to improve my typing skills' or 'a clear method to improve my typing'.

× I just simply typed in and I have been typing in every single day and that's how I become really good at it.

✓ I just simply type a lot and I have been typing every single day, and that's how I became really good at it.

Tense consistency: 'I just simply typed in' mixes past with present continuous; use 'I just simply type a lot' or 'I have simply typed a lot'. 'That's how I become' should be past 'became' because becoming good is a completed change resulting from past practice. Suggestions: Use consistent tense: present perfect continuous ('I have been typing every day, and that's how I have become good') or past result ('I have been typing every day, and that's how I became really good').

× At this moment, it is just something that experience thought you Polish me to to to be better at it.

✓ At this moment, it is just something that experience taught me to polish and helped me to become better at it.

Sentence structure and word choice: 'experience thought you Polish me' is ungrammatical. Use 'experience taught me' (past tense) and 'to polish' or 'to improve'. Remove repeated 'to' and correct pronoun placement. Also add 'helped me' to clarify meaning. Suggestions: Rephrase to 'experience taught me and helped me improve' or 'it is something experience has taught me to help me get better'.