Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并保持时态一致，避免重复和填充词。开头给出一个明确的主题句，然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持，句子不要超过五句。注意过去时用法（prefer → preferred），并删去不必要的停顿和“uh”。

例: I prefer typing nowadays because it's much faster and more convenient for sending messages or emails. For example, I can quickly edit and share notes with classmates using my phone or laptop, which saves time compared with handwriting.

提案: 回答总体清晰但可改进用词和流畅度。把“dining routine”改为更合适的短语（e.g., daily routine）。可以加一个具体场景说明携带便利的好处，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually use my laptop keyboard in my daily routine because it's portable and easy to carry. For instance, I can work on assignments in a café or during my commute, which helps me make better use of my time.

提案: 答案中数字和表达混乱，时态和数量不一致。要直接给出确切时间或年龄，使用正确的数词和短语（e.g., at about eleven years old）。可以补充一点背景，例如在哪里学习或通过什么方式学会。

例: I learned to type at about eleven years old when I was in primary school. I started with basic lessons at school where we practiced typing exercises on computers.

提案: 答案结构可以更紧凑并用更自然的短语。把“second school”改为“secondary school”或直接说“teenage years”。说明课程的形式或你练习的方法，并用连接词衔接两部分。避免生硬翻译式的表达如“booked a extra curriculum”。

例: When I was a teenager I attended a typing course arranged by my parents at secondary school. It was practical because I practiced touch-typing every day, and now I can type without looking at the keyboard.

× At the moment I prefer typing because it's very quick to send messages or anything by my digital devices.

✓ At the moment I prefer typing because it's very quick to send messages or anything on my digital devices.

句中介词“by”与“digital devices”搭配不自然，表达上更常用“on my digital devices”或直接省略介词。“Present tense issue”适用于时态表达和介词搭配的小幅错误。建议：使用常见搭配“on my phone/laptop”或直接说“on my devices”。

× But in the past I prefer handwriting such as writing or cards to friends, uh, during the.

✓ But in the past I preferred handwriting, such as writing letters or cards to friends.

原句谈过去习惯，应使用过去时“preferred”。句中“writing or cards”搭配不当，应为“writing letters or cards”。另外末尾不完整“during the.”已删除以补全句子。建议：描述过去习惯时用过去时，确保名词短语完整。

× On my dining routine, I use my laptop keyboard to type because I can carry my laptop to anywhere I need to go.

✓ In my daily routine, I use my laptop keyboard to type because I can carry my laptop anywhere I need to go.

原句“On my dining routine”不通，正确表达应为“In my daily routine”。此外“to anywhere”中不需要“to”，应为“carry my laptop anywhere”。句子结构需调整为常见固定搭配。建议：使用“in my daily routine”或“as part of my daily routine”，并注意“carry ... anywhere”无需“to”。

× When I was a student in the primary school, approximately 11 or three years old, I started to type using a computer.

✓ When I was a primary school student, at approximately three or eleven years old, I started to learn typing using a computer.

原句时间表达混乱“approximately 11 or three years old”。应明确年龄顺序且用“at”引出年龄。根据语境使用过去时“started to learn typing”更自然。建议：明确年龄并使用“started to learn”或“started typing”。

× When I was a teenager in the second school, my parents booked a extra curriculum to help me improve my typing.

✓ When I was a teenager at the secondary school, my parents booked an extracurricular course to help me improve my typing.

原句中“the second school”应为“secondary school”或“the secondary school”，且“a extra curriculum”冠词使用错误且短语应为“an extracurricular course”或“an extracurricular class”。建议：注意可数名词前的冠词和正确词汇搭配（extracurricular course/class）。

× I can say it was very practical because until now I can type without seeing the keyboard.

✓ I can say it was very practical because even now I can type without looking at the keyboard.

原句“until now I can type”时态和连接词不太自然，改为“even now I can type”更常用；“without seeing the keyboard”应改为“without looking at the keyboard”更地道。建议：使用常见表达“even now”并用“look at”表示看键盘。