Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 응답이 너무 짧고 의미가 불분명합니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고 이유와 간단한 추가 정보를 덧붙이세요. 자연스러운 문장으로 주제문을 말한 뒤 한두 문장으로 이유나 예를 제시하면 좋습니다. 연결어(e.g., because, so, therefore)를 사용해 문장을 유기적으로 만드세요.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can quickly correct mistakes and reorganize paragraphs using copy and paste.

提案: 문장이 길고 문법/어휘 선택에서 오류가 있습니다. 먼저 간단한 주제문으로 직접 답하고, 그 다음에 관련 세부사항(기기 종류, 사용 기간, 사용 용도)을 논리적으로 연결하여 제시하세요. 시간 표현과 전치사 사용을 바로잡고, 불필요한 반복을 줄이세요. 연결어(for example, since, because)를 사용해 흐름을 개선하세요.

例: Yes, I use a laptop every day. I have been using my MacBook since my first year of college, mainly to type essays and other documents. For example, I usually draft and edit my assignments on Word.

提案: 대체로 이해되지만 관사와 전치사 사용 오류가 있습니다. 시간을 나타내는 표현은 간결하게 말하고, 수업 내용이나 배운 방식에 대해 구체적인 예를 하나 더 추가하면 좋습니다. 연결어(such as, and then)를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

例: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. I took an IT class where we practiced basic Word and PowerPoint skills, and we often did typing exercises to improve speed and accuracy.

提案: 말이 반복되고 문장이 끊겨서 의미 전달이 불완전합니다. 먼저 현재의 주된 방법을 명확히 말하고, 어떻게 사용하는지 구체적인 절차나 빈도를 덧붙이세요. 예를 들어 어떤 연습을 하고, AI를 통해 어떤 피드백을 얻는지 설명하면 좋습니다. 연결어(for example, by using, then)를 사용하세요.

例: Nowadays I try to improve my typing by practising essay writing on my laptop and using AI tools like ChatGPT for feedback. For example, I type an essay, ask the AI to correct grammar and suggest rewrites, and then retype the revised version to build speed and accuracy.

× Up.

✓ I prefer typing.

The original reply 'Up.' is not a complete sentence and does not answer the question. Use a full sentence that directly addresses the examiner's question. Suggestion: give a clear preference phrase like 'I prefer typing.' or 'I prefer handwriting.'.

× Yes, in a daily basis I type something on my laptop, I'm using my MacBook since I was a freshman of my college, and then I write some word documents for the essay I'm using it.

✓ Yes, on a daily basis I type on my laptop. I have been using my MacBook since I was a freshman in college, and I use it to write Word documents and essays.

Multiple tense and preposition errors: 'in a daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis' (preposition and collocation). 'I'm using my MacBook since I was a freshman' mixes present continuous with a point-in-time starting phrase; use present perfect continuous or present perfect: 'I have been using... since I was a freshman' or 'I have used... since I was a freshman.' 'freshman of my college' is unnatural; use 'a freshman in college.' 'write some word documents for the essay I'm using it' is unclear and ungrammatical; split into clear clauses: 'I use it to write Word documents and essays.' Improve by keeping consistent present perfect for actions that started in past and continue now, correct prepositions, and simplify sentence structure.

× Oh, as I remember, I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was a elementary school student. I took on IT class for basic PowerPoint and Word.

✓ Oh, as I remember, I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was an elementary school student. I took an IT class for basic PowerPoint and Word.

Article and verb usage errors: 'a elementary' should be 'an elementary' because 'elementary' begins with a vowel sound. 'I took on IT class' is incorrect; correct is 'I took an IT class.' Use simple past 'learned' and 'took' correctly for completed past events. Also use 'an' before 'IT class.' Keep articles consistent.

× Nowadays. Nowadays I try to improve my typing by using some writing AI such as ChatGPT. I usually write some essays and turn it into an AI and.

✓ Nowadays I try to improve my typing by using writing AIs such as ChatGPT. I usually write essays and submit them to AI tools for feedback.

The original contains a fragment 'Nowadays.' repeated and the final clause 'turn it into an AI and.' is incomplete and ungrammatical. Use 'Nowadays' once at the start. 'some writing AI' is better as 'writing AIs' or 'AI tools.' 'turn it into an AI' is unclear; use 'submit them to AI tools' or 'use AI to check them.' Ensure sentences are complete and end with a clear object or action.