Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并注意语法与连贯性。尽量用现在时表达偏好，减少填充词（uh, umm），用连词使句子更流畅，并给出一两个具体原因或例子支持观点。注意动词时态与搭配（例如 “typing is faster” 而不是 “more faster”）。

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and produces neater, more legible notes. For example, when I take lecture notes on my laptop, I can organize them quickly and search them later, which helps me study more efficiently.

提案: 回答要简洁并纠正人称错误（把“his laptop”改为“my laptop”）。先给出直接回答，然后用1-2句具体原因或例子支持，不要重复信息或使用太多停顿。

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my laptop is compact and easy to carry. For instance, when I travel to conferences I always bring it so I can work and take notes on the go.

提案: 回答要更有条理并注意语法时态，用简短句子说明时间和原因，避免重复。将模糊表达改为具体表述，并用一两个细节说明学习过程（例如课程或练习方式）。

例: I learned to type when I was in high school because computers were not common when I was a child. I remember practicing touch-typing in computer class, which was difficult at first because I had to train each finger to press the right keys.

提案: 回答应更具体并避免重复与口语填充词。说明具体的方法（如每天练习、多做打字测试、使用打字软件），并给出效果或频率。不要假设考官知道某些应用，若提及可简短说明。

例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly, about 20 minutes a day, and by using online typing tutors to increase speed and accuracy. I also chatted with friends on QQ when I was younger, which helped me get more comfortable with the keyboard.

× Well, it depends. If I was going to learn something and going to record something, maybe I will prefer typing uh 'cause you know, typing is more faster and uh, it can avoid.

✓ Well, it depends. If I were going to learn something and going to record something, maybe I would prefer typing, because you know, typing is faster and it can avoid mistakes.

问题类型: 第6类/第5类（时态/过去式/虚拟语气）以及第13类（形容词/副词）和第26类（句子结构）。说明: 在与现在或假设情况相关的虚拟条件句中，英语通常使用虚拟语气“if I were...”，主句用“would”。原句“I was... maybe I will prefer”时态混用不当。另，比较结构应为“faster”而不是“more faster”。并且“it can avoid”后需要宾语（如“mistakes”）。建议: 在假设句中使用“If I were...”，主句用“would”，勿重复比较词“more faster”，并补全宾语。

× I type on a laptop keyboard every day. His laptop is smaller and lighter.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day. My laptop is smaller and lighter.

问题类型: 第2类/第12类（第三人称单数/代词使用）。说明: 学生在谈论自己的笔记本时误用了“His”（第三人称所有格），应使用“My”。另外“is”为第三人称单数动词，和主语“laptop”一致，这里无误。建议: 注意代词人称一致，谈自己用“my”。

× It's easy to bring along with me and uh, umm, and I have, I can bring it anywhere I like, right? For example, I'm going to a conference. I have to take a laptop.

✓ It's easy to bring with me, and I can take it anywhere I like. For example, I'm going to a conference; I have to take my laptop.

问题类型: 第4类/第26类（情态动词/句子结构）和第12类（代词）。说明: 原句“bring along with me”中“along”和“with”重复意思，应简化为“bring with me”或“take with me”。“I have, I can bring”有重复冗余，改为“I can take it anywhere”。最后句“take a laptop”在语境中应为特指“我的笔记本”，所以用“my laptop”。建议: 避免冗余短语，保持代词指代明确。

× When I was in high school, because I was, I was born in 1980s. So, uh, at that time computer is not that common in China.

✓ When I was in high school — I was born in the 1980s — at that time computers were not that common in China.

问题类型: 第5类/第6类/第22类（过去时/现在时/冠词）。说明: “I was born in 1980s”需加定冠词“the 1980s”。关于电脑的普及应使用过去时“computers were not that common”。“computer”应为复数表示一般性概念。建议: 表示年代使用“the 1980s”，谈过去习惯或状况用过去时，并在泛指时使用复数。

× So I started learning it in high school. I remember it was really hard for me to use every, my thing, every single fingers because, uh, I am so not good at operating.

✓ So I started learning it in high school. I remember it was really hard for me to use every single finger because I wasn't very good at operating (the keyboard).

问题类型: 第27类/第12类/第5类（主谓一致/代词/过去时）。说明: “every single fingers”中“every”后应接单数名词“finger”。“I am so not good at operating”与回忆过去情景不一致，应使用过去时“I wasn't very good at operating”。“my thing”不明确且多余，去掉或改为“the keyboard”。建议: 使用“every + 单数名词”，回忆过去用过去时，避免不明确的代词。

× I improve my typing by typing more, doing more practicings I guess.

✓ I improve my typing by typing more and doing more practice, I guess.

问题类型: 第8类/第1类/第22类（动词+ing形式/单复数/冠词）。说明: “practicings”不是正确名词，应该用不可数名词“practice”。短语中用动名词“doing more practice”或“practicing more”。建议: 用“practicing more”或“doing more practice”，注意不可数名词用法。

× And I used to I used to talk with my friends on QQ. Do you know that what is that is an an application on on computer in all the time?

✓ I used to talk with my friends on QQ. Do you know what that is? It's an application on the computer that's always available.

问题类型: 第26类/第6类/第17类（句子结构/时态/定冠词）。说明: 原句重复“I used to I used to”多余；疑问句语序错误，应为“Do you know what that is?” 后半句“an an”重复，且“on on computer in all the time”不通顺，改为“an application on the computer that's always available”或“an always-on application”。建议: 删去重复，调整疑问句语序和修饰语的位置，使用“the computer”或更具体表达。