Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve clarity and conciseness. Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because or so). Avoid filler words (uh, um) and grammatical mistakes (use past tense correctly and correct word choice: 'easy' → 'easier' or 'more convenient'). Try to keep it within 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer handwriting because I grew up without access to computers, so I learned to write notes by hand. For me, handwriting feels more comfortable and helps me remember information better.

提案: Give a direct answer first (desktop or laptop), then give clear specific reasons with linking words. Correct sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use concise phrases like 'mainly on my laptop' and mention exact activities (essays, online classes).

例: I mainly type on my laptop because I bought a new one for writing essays and attending online classes. I find it more convenient than a desktop since I can carry it around.

提案: Answer with a clear time reference and concise explanation. Use correct verb forms (e.g., 'I started learning... when I was at university') and avoid hesitations. Mention a brief specific activity that helped you learn (typing essays, sending assignments).

例: I started learning to type when I was at university after I bought a new laptop. I practised by typing essays and sending assignments online, which helped me improve quickly.

提案: Provide a clear method-first answer, then give specific examples of tools and frequency. Remove fillers and correct grammar (e.g., 'typing games' not 'play games which practice you're typing'). Mention measurable improvement if possible (wpm or accuracy).

例: I improve my typing by practising daily with typing games and an app I downloaded on my laptop. I also type assignments regularly; together these practices have noticeably increased my speed and accuracy.

× This is because, uh, when I was a child or when I went to school, I don't have the condition to buy, uh, laptop or computers, so I just have my new laptop when I was in the university.

✓ This is because, when I was a child and when I went to school, I did not have the means to buy a laptop or a computer, so I only got a new laptop when I was at university.

The sentence refers to past situations but uses a present-tense negative 'don't have'. Use past tense 'did not have' to match the time frame. Also 'condition to buy' is unnatural; use 'means to buy'. Use singular 'a laptop' or 'a computer' and 'at university' is the usual phrasing in this context.

× So, uh, actually I prefer handwriting. It's more easy.

✓ So, actually I prefer handwriting. It's easier.

The comparative of 'easy' is 'easier', not 'more easy'. Use the adjective form 'easier' to compare two options.

× Itap laptop, keyboard and video because I bought new laptop and that is for use for writing essays or whenever I have online classes I need to type in on my laptop.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard because I bought a new laptop for writing essays and for typing during online classes.

Original sentence has missing spaces and unclear structure. Rephrase to a clear subject-verb-object order: 'I use a laptop keyboard' and combine purposes with 'for'. Use articles 'a new laptop' and remove redundant words.

× So I use laptop more compared to desktop and today also many people will use use like.

✓ So I use a laptop more than a desktop, and many people use laptops these days.

Use 'more than' for comparisons, and 'a laptop'/'a desktop' need articles. The phrase 'will use use like' is ungrammatical; replace with 'use laptops these days' to express general habit.

× I Start learning how to tap on keyboard when I was university because at that time umm, I bought a new laptop and I tried to umm learn or try to uh tap it on the keyboard and write an s s and send some materials online.

✓ I started learning how to type on a keyboard when I was at university because I had bought a new laptop and I tried to learn typing so I could write assignments and send materials online.

Use past tense 'started' instead of present 'Start' and 'type' instead of 'tap'. Use past perfect 'had bought' to indicate the purchase happened before the learning. 'write an s s' likely means 'write assignments'; clarify and use correct nouns.

× Actually, there I have, umm, play games, uh, which practice you're typing.

✓ Actually, I used typing practice games that help you improve your typing.

Original mixes tenses and pronouns. Use noun phrase 'typing practice games' or 'games that help you practise typing'. Use 'help you improve' rather than 'practice you're typing'.

× So, umm, I downloaded this app on my laptop and everyday I practice or, uh, play the game, uh, which practice the typing and the improvement a lot.

✓ I downloaded an app on my laptop and every day I practise by playing the games that train typing, and I have improved a lot.

Maintain past tense for 'downloaded' and present habitual 'practise' for regular action. Use 'every day' as two words. Use 'games that train typing' or 'typing games' and state 'I have improved' to show result.

× Another one is, uh, typing or say assignments.

✓ Another way is typing assignments.

Original is fragmented and unclear. Combine into a concise phrase 'typing assignments' to indicate another method of practice.