Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and directly state your preference with a clear reason. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases. Use one topic sentence then 1–2 specific supporting details (e.g. speed, editing, or convenience) linked with words like "because" and "for example."

例: I prefer typing because it is faster and makes editing easy. For example, when I write reports or assignments I can quickly correct mistakes and format the text, so it saves me time.

提案: Answer directly with a clear subject and reason. Use correct articles and word order, and give one specific detail to support your claim. Keep it to 1–2 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "so."

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and convenient. For example, I can work in different rooms or take my laptop to class, which makes studying easier.

提案: Give a clear, concise answer to the time question (use past tense) and include one short supporting detail about how you learned. Avoid unrelated personal info like current age unless it directly helps. Use correct time expressions (e.g. "about ten years ago").

例: I learned to type about ten years ago when I was a child. I practiced on a home computer by typing school assignments and online exercises.

提案: State a clear method to improve typing and give 1–2 specific, realistic actions (e.g. timed practice, online lessons, accuracy drills). Use linking words such as "by" and "for example" and avoid filler words and repetition.

例: I improve my typing by practicing for 20 minutes every day using online typing tests to increase speed and accuracy. For example, I do timed drills and focus on difficult keys, then track my progress weekly.

× I prefer typing because it typing is a very good way to write different types of documents such as the.

✓ I prefer typing because typing is a very good way to write different types of documents.

The original repeats 'it typing' and ends with an unfinished phrase 'such as the.' Remove the extra pronoun 'it' and the incomplete fragment. Use 'typing is' (present simple) to state a general preference. Suggestion: avoid redundant words and finish examples (for example, 'such as essays and emails').

× When we are making in the question paper, it is necessary for typing.

✓ When we make question papers, typing is necessary.

The phrase 'making in the question paper' is ungrammatical and 'the question paper' uses the definite article incorrectly. Use the base verb 'make' for a general statement and omit 'the' before 'question papers' (or say 'a question paper'). Also place 'typing is necessary' as the main clause. Suggestion: streamline to 'When we make question papers, typing is necessary.'

× So I like the typing very much.

✓ So I like typing very much.

'The typing' is incorrect; 'typing' as an activity should be used without the definite article. Drop 'the'. Suggestion: say 'I like typing very much.'

× I type laptop keyboard in everyday because laptop keyboard is easy to type and so I like the this type of keyboard and type easily.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is easy to use, so I like this type of keyboard and can type easily.

Multiple problems: missing preposition 'on' before 'a laptop keyboard' and incorrect 'in everyday' instead of 'every day' (adverb). 'Laptop keyboard is easy to type' is ungrammatical; use 'easy to use' or 'easy to type on.' 'the this type' is incorrect article/demonstrative combination. Rephrase for clarity and correct word order. Suggestion: 'I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is easy to use.'

× I type laptop keyboard in everyday because laptop keyboard is easy to type and so I like the this type of keyboard and type easily.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is easy to use; therefore, I like this kind of keyboard and can type easily.

Alternative clearer phrasing addressing the same errors: add 'on', correct 'every day', replace 'easy to type' with 'easy to use' or 'easy to type on', remove 'the this', and add ability modal 'can' for 'type easily.' Suggestion: keep sentences concise and use correct prepositions and articles.

× I'm in 18 years old.

✓ I am 18 years old.

Incorrect verb form 'I'm in 18 years old' uses unnecessary preposition 'in'. Use the correct expression 'I am 18 years old' in present simple. Suggestion: say 'I am 18.'

× At this time there is a computer on my house.

✓ At that time there was a computer in my house.

Tense and preposition errors: 'At this time' should be 'At that time' when referring to the past; use past tense 'was' not 'is' and the correct preposition for location is 'in' not 'on'. Suggestion: 'At that time, there was a computer in my house.'

× At this time.

✓ (Remove fragment or combine with previous sentence: 'At that time, there was a computer in my house.' )

This fragment 'At this time.' lacks a verb and cannot stand alone. Combine it with the previous sentence or remove it. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments; ensure each sentence has a subject and verb.

× I write to different documents in my computer, so at a 10 years ago I think.

✓ I wrote different documents on my computer, so I think it was about 10 years ago.

Tense and preposition errors: use past tense 'wrote' for past action, use 'on my computer' not 'in', and express time as 'about 10 years ago' not 'at a 10 years ago'. Place 'I think' properly. Suggestion: 'I wrote different documents on my computer, so I think it was about 10 years ago.'

× I can improve my typing by the practicing more than, uh, different times.

✓ I can improve my typing by practicing more often.

Incorrect article 'the' before 'practicing' and awkward phrase 'more than different times.' Use the verb 'practicing' without 'the' and 'more often' to indicate frequency. Suggestion: 'I can improve my typing by practicing more often.'

× Uh, I every day practicing is a typer and, and uh, I, I will type the different documents in different ways, so.

✓ I practice typing every day, and I type different documents in different ways.

Original mixes tenses and has wrong word order and extraneous words. Use simple present 'I practice typing every day' for habitual action. 'is a typer' is unnatural; omit it. 'I will type' suggests future but context is habitual, so use present 'I type'. Remove filler words. Suggestion: 'I practice typing every day and type different documents in different ways.'