Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接、语法更准确，并用1句主题句加1-2句具体原因或例子。避免重复并用连接词（because, so, when）使表达连贯。注意时态和冠词（a/an/the）以及代词用法。可以用更自然的词汇如"I prefer handwriting"代替缩写或不完整短语。

例: I prefer handwriting because I always have a pen and paper on my desk, so it’s quick to jot down homework notes. For example, when I’m studying, I can easily sketch diagrams or underline key points on paper.

提案: 回答要更简洁并直接回应问题，说明是否每天打字并给出原因。减少填充词（uh, I）并注意语序及动词形式（do type / don’t type）。用连接词（because, so）连接原因，提供具体情境。

例: I don’t type on a desktop or laptop every day because my school doesn’t allow electronic devices in class. Therefore, I usually write by hand during lessons and only use a computer at home.

提案: 回答要用正确的时间表达和过去时，减少犹豫词。先给出明确的时间点，然后用一两句说明如何学习的细节（who taught you, what you practised）。注意语法（I was about 10 years old; my mother taught me）。

例: I learned to type when I was about ten years old. My mother taught me the basics, and I practised by typing short articles and stories on the computer to improve my speed.

提案: 回答要更有条理：先给总结性答案（e.g. I practise regularly by typing simple texts），然后给1-2个具体方法并用连接词（for example, such as, so）说明效果。注意词序及限定词（some simple novels or online articles）。

例: I improve my typing by practising regularly, mostly by typing short, simple articles or parts of novels from the internet. For example, I set aside 20 minutes a day to type easy texts, which helps me increase speed and accuracy.

× RP for handwriting because As for me is quite convenient because there's a paper and pen on my desk everywhere.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it is quite convenient; there is always paper and a pen on my desk.

句子存在连接词使用和结构混乱的问题，原句中“RP”应为“prefer”，且“As for me is”缺主语或多余结构，应改为完整的主语+谓语；另外“there's a paper and pen on my desk everywhere”中语序和冠词使用不当，改为“there is always paper and a pen on my desk”。建议把想表达的内容分成更清晰的短句，使用正确的连接词。

× So whenever I want to write about my homework or something that essential for my homework.

✓ So whenever I want to write about my homework or something that is essential for my homework.

这是主谓一致/句子结构问题，原句缺少系动词“is”，导致从句不完整。建议在“something”和“essential”之间加上“is”使从句完整。

× As a high school student is not available to, uh, typing in a, on a electronic stuff because it's not, uh, available in the school to use those things, electronic things.

✓ As a high school student, I don't have access to electronic devices for typing because they are not available to use at school.

原句连接词和结构混乱，缺主语“I”和正确的表达“have access to”。另外“a electronic stuff”不符合可数/不可数和冠词使用，应改为“electronic devices”。建议使用简单明确的主句结构“I don't have access to…”并用复数形式表示设备。

× So, uh, I, I, I don't, uh, typing on those things every day.

✓ So, I don't type on those devices every day.

现在时态使用错误，原句中“don't typing”是动词形式错误，应为“don't type”（一般现在时 + 动词原形）。此外省略多余停顿词并使用“devices”更自然。建议掌握助动词+动词原形的结构：do/does + 动词原形。

× I think, uh, it's about my 10 years old at the time.

✓ I think I was about 10 years old at the time.

过去时使用错误，描述过去年龄应使用过去时“was”而非“it's”。另外“my 10 years old”用法不正确，应为“10 years old”。建议用“was about 10 years old”来表达过去的年龄。

× I study how to type in on a computer, uh, which my mother teach me how to write and then I try to, uh, type in some article or novel on computer.

✓ I learned how to type on a computer; my mother taught me how to write, and then I tried to type some articles or novels on the computer.

这是多处主谓一致和时态错误。应使用过去时“learned/taught/tried”。同时动词短语搭配也有问题，应为“learn how to type on a computer”、“my mother taught me”以及“type some articles or novels on the computer”。建议将句子拆成更清晰的分句，并统一使用过去时描述已发生的动作。

× Not for some special ways, but only typing a part of simple novels or some articles from Internet which I found simple or easy for me to type.

✓ There are no special methods; I just type parts of simple novels or some articles from the Internet that I find easy to type.

冠词和句子结构错误。原句开头“Not for some special ways”不符合英语表达，应改为“There are no special methods”或“I don't have special ways”。“from Internet”缺定冠词，改为“from the Internet”。从句时态和关系词也需要调整为“That I find easy to type”。建议使用固定表达“no special methods”并注意定冠词用法。

× And that's I think it's the most useful way for me.

✓ And I think that's the most useful way for me.

句子结构中主语重复，原句“And that's I think it's…”重复使用了“that's”和“it's”。应合并为“I think that's the most useful way for me.”，保持一般现在时。建议避免重复主语和系动词，使句子简洁。