Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сократите повторения и сделайте ответ более естественным: начните с четкого утверждения, затем приведите 2 конкретных причины, используя связующие слова (for example, because, and, so). Избегайте частых фраз «in my opinion», используйте их один раз максимум. Также ограничьте ответ до 3–4 предложений.

例: I prefer typing rather than handwriting because it is more convenient. For example, I can type on my phone or laptop while commuting on the metro or bus, which saves time. Also, typing lets me edit and organize my notes quickly, so I find it the most practical option.

提案: Сделайте ответ более структурированным и избегайте вводных слов, не несущих смысл (например, "at first, in fact"). Начните с краткого ответа (Yes/No + statement), затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных деталей и связку, почему это удобно для учёбы.

例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I don't have a desktop computer. I find the laptop convenient for studying since I can take it to classes and type notes quickly, which helps me review later.

提案: Уточните возраст и исправьте грамматические ошибки. Не используйте неопределенные фразы вроде «weird computers» — лучше дать конкретную причину. Дайте связные детали о процессе обучения (how, why, difficulty) и не более 3 предложений.

例: I started learning to type when I was about three years old because my parents had a computer and I often played simple games on it. At first it was difficult to press the right keys, but with practice I became faster and more confident.

提案: Сформулируйте конкретные методы улучшения навыка и устраните повторения «in my opinion». Укажите 2–3 практических способа (e.g., practice with typing tests, copying texts, using typing apps) и объясните, почему они помогают, используя связующие слова.

例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing tests and by copying short articles or messages from friends. Also, I use a typing app to track my speed and accuracy, which helps me identify weak keys and improve them over time.

× I prefer typing because in my opinion it's more convenient for me and I can do it whenever I want, when I'm in the metro station or when I go by bus or when I drive in a taxi.

✓ I prefer typing because, in my opinion, it's more convenient for me and I can do it whenever I want, whether I'm in the metro, on a bus, or in a taxi.

The original sentence had small preposition and article issues and awkward repetition rather than a pure plural error. Use 'the metro' or simply 'metro' and 'on a bus' and 'in a taxi' for correct prepositions. Also replace 'when' repeated with 'whether' for clarity and parallel structure. Improve punctuation by adding commas. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× At first, in fact, I need to say that I don't have a computer with desktop, so I usually use laptop keyboard.

✓ At first, in fact, I should say that I don't have a desktop computer, so I usually use a laptop keyboard.

Incorrect word order and missing articles. Use 'a desktop computer' (not 'computer with desktop') and 'a laptop keyboard'. Also 'need to say' is better as 'should say' in this context. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× In my opinion, it's very convenient to write something and I usually use it in studies.

✓ In my opinion, it's very convenient for writing, and I usually use it for my studies.

Preposition 'in' was incorrect with 'studies'; use 'for my studies'. Also 'to write something' is awkward—'for writing' is more natural. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Oh, let me think, In my opinion, I started to learn how to type on a keyboard when it was about 3 years old, because my parents often use weird computers, so I usually play different games with from this computer, and at first time it was very difficult to.

✓ Oh, let me think. I started to learn to type when I was about three years old because my parents often used old computers, so I used to play different games on that computer, and at first it was very difficult.

Mixed and incorrect tenses: 'started to learn' is fine but 'when it was about 3 years old' is wrong—use 'when I was about three years old'. Change present 'use' to past 'used' to match childhood context. 'Weird computers' is odd; 'old computers' or 'different computers' fits. 'Play games with from this computer' should be 'play games on that computer'. Remove trailing incomplete phrase. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× In my opinion, I usually improve my typing by write something information from my friends or from my colleagues from work.

✓ In my opinion, I usually improve my typing by writing down information from my friends or my colleagues at work.

After 'by' use verb+ing: 'writing' not 'write'. Also add 'down' for clarity and fix prepositions: 'colleagues at work' is natural. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× So in my opinion, nowadays a lot of people use it and of course we improve with skills of typing.

✓ So, in my opinion, nowadays a lot of people use keyboards, and of course we improve our typing skills.

Awkward structure and incorrect noun phrase 'skills of typing'. Use 'typing skills' and 'improve our typing skills'. Specify 'keyboards' or 'typing' instead of 'it'. Improve punctuation and coordination. Grammar problem type ID: 26